SS-Flipped..Completed finally-Pg 42. Bye!

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Hey guys,It's my Birthday 🥳So this is my treat for all of you.Kavya thanku so much for my giftt...!!
Guys this is my very first attempt writing a TS.It was supposed to be an OS but it is now a TS😛Okay so enough of my rantings here's it.Hopefully you all like it..!!

PART 1-
It was the winter of 2014 when I first time saw her.She was new then in the building just shifted with her mom..beautiful is all that I could say..hazel eyes..pink lips..cheeks u feel to pull them when u see all pink with blush due to cold..hair,though I couldn't touch them I could feel the smoothness.. long and thick so much so that my hand could vanish in them..As soon as I saw her an instant craze to go to her..touch her..talk to her aroused in me.But surrounded by all..all I could do was look at her.I was literally not able to move my gaze from her.Gradually she became smaller n smaller n disappeared. Nandini she was..Nandini Murthy.All that I knew about her and that toonot from her but my friend Mukti who was now her closest.

Days passed..and I came to know that she was in my college infact my class to be precise.I could see her looking at me at times..As time flew we would just look at each other and steal glances...but one evening I gathered my courage and I called her.'Hello' I heard her honey dipped sugar coated voice and I lost mine...I drowned in her voice I heard for the first time. I completely forgot that there was someone waiting for me to reply at the other end..eventually she disconnected. I called her the other time and this time I heard an annoyed tone..'hello,who is this'..'Hey,it's Manik.From the 7thfloor.'..'Oh Hi.I recognised you by ur name'..'Is it..!?Keen interest I guess haan' I teased a bit..but now I was regretting.Which stupid would start a convo with a girl by being cheesy except for The Glorified Manik Malhotra.But then I sighed relief after hearing her reply 'We're in the same class Manik.Ofcourse I would recognise you.'..'Yaa..silly me'..'Hmm'..'Hmm'...'So anything important?'..'No actually..it's just that it's been so long you came n I wanted to talk but mauka hi nai mila'..'Oh,toh'..'What toh?'..'Toh what toh Manik tumne call kiya na'..'Hmm..how's life.U liking it here'..'Yes.If you would have asked me this question till a few days back I would have said trying to..but nowI like this place'..'Trying to.Why do u say so!?' I was confused..did she not like it here?Were we not good enough company here?Did she have someone special there?And just the thought of possibilities of the last question blew me over...but no!! She cleared them all..'I had hardly acquainted myself to the previous place nd my mom again got a transfer.It is u know saddening nd u really feel out of the place.Anyways I like it here .Thanks for asking and also Sorry.I donno y I'm telling you this'..'Sorry! For what listening to you..c'mon I could do that all the time.U can talk all nonsense also..I would listen to it with all my ears' Thoda zyada ho gaya na..I mentally spoke to myself..'I'm not disturbing u na'..'No' *awkward silence* 'Can we meet..?' "Oh God! What kind of a question is it Manik..u meet her everyday." I felt like hitting my head to the wall.'Okay see you tomorrow.' 'Hmm..bye good night,sweet dreams'..'good night' I heard her chirpy tone.
Godd this girl is gonna be the end of me.She's so sweet. I wonder what kept me from talking to her.I wish I could talk with her so face to face..
Next day morning again I took the stairs in a hope to see her and this time my fate was with me...I saw her locking her door.She told me her mom's out n Mukti too wasn't there so I offered her a ride nd she agreed.We reached college nd this time I sat beside her.I was so happy that Mukti n Cabir decided to bunk.The lectures wrre no doubt too boring so I began..'Hey,bored?!' I scribbled on the paper nd passed it to her..'Too much' came her reply..'Hmm so let's do some fun'..'But what!? Class mein hai hum Manik..what can we do!!'..'Let's play' and I drew an XO checks set and passed it to her.She gave me a "seriously" look and I gave her a "Yeah" look...we started with XO but ended up with drawing all kinds of stupid stuff.We were literally pulling the paper..Whatever it was I enjoyed it completely. This time..this crazy stuff..those talks with her..I enjoyed in fact loved it.Then I convinced Mukti to take theother seat beside her.It had become our daily routine talking so in the class..we used to talk writing on papers..we used to share stuff..we used to play n draw n what not.N I was sure that she too enjoyed it as much as I did.

And the bell rang..Manik kissed their entwined hands and said 'Let's go guys'..'Okay,but once we reach home after these boring lectures hume aage ki story bhi batana.' said an all excited Mukti.'Manik hi batayega' said Nandini..'Of course how can we expect it from you.Your the most shy person I've ever seen ya..'said Mukti.


Guys do tell me if you want Nandini's POV too...ya I shld continue with Manik's POV.

INDEX:
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8
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sharon.babu thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow awesome start...
loved it...
continue soon...
wishing you a very happy and prosperous B'Day...
hope you enjoy this and thanks for the pm and update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res*
Unres!!
HAPPPIEEE BIRTHDAY MY DOLL!!..And you mentioned me in this new story Tysm..!! For that..So let me tell I really really loved it!!..As I just love the idea about boy being in love..truly in love with a girl !!..so you know na I had SS which is 40 chapters now than came Os which turned TS and now SS..so I think you will too need to extend it..!! Because I love it!!

Manik is soo cute..but now I'm crying because in each story I imagine Parth Samthaan and after today I don't know he broke our hearts!!But it's okay life goes on...!!
Anyways Happy Birthday once again love you!!..God bless you!!

Love - Kavya :)


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aawww...sooo cutee yrrr 😛
So is Manik telling their story??..nice yrr 😊
Continue soon dear 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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1st many many many many many happy returns of the day


My cutepie little crazy doll



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N cont manik pov ok



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Happy wala birthday dear... Enjoy ur day.. And part 1 was jst superb.. Very nice.. Update soon.. Thanks for pm.. Happy birthday
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it very much
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful story..
Continue soon with Manik's pov
and happy birthday!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wish u a hpy bday dea. ...👏

Awesome start dea. ...
Continue soonnn
Tnx fr d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Happy birthday dear n nice one yar continue soon

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