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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: amrutha.shetty

Uma cheating hai ha itna chotu sa part ...😔...chalo koi nahi ...coz I wanted to see father-daughter bonding nd u showed it well though so am happy ...I loved the part were u mentioned manik consuming less alcohol now as he meets his chotu lady love now regularly ...so manik heard her name again from nyonika while she was speaking in phone & felt connected ...I wonder iska Matlab yeh hai na ki he had only heard abt it after his memory loss ...Matlab he is still to see her face after that incident right ??...Am satisfied now tht nyonika has found hope nd is trying her level best to reunite her small happy family ...even nandini agreed at d end for Maya's benifit coz I beleive she's still upset & now vry mad at him ...ofcouse who won't b after seeing such a scene ... bt still u remember na tht hammer vali baat ...hehe 😆...Love is all about completing each other ...seeing brighter side amingst all of the odds ...nd I hope they do see their best ahead ...Keep smiling nd keep writing nd i'l keep commenting ... nd is baar to pakka lamba update chaiye varna comment nhi krungi sachii meee ...Thnks for PM ...

Lots of love❤️
~isha

Sorry isha dear, this is how the story is planned with small updates, don't worry u wil get the father-daughter duo part in next part also, yes but u wil have to witness him again in this update, but am sure u wil like the after effects of it, yup, he never saw her after his accident, just heard her name from nyo for n number of times. Nyo is the only cupid here. thank u dear, i wil keep updating as long as u guys keep liking and commenting.
Oh don't do that, all updates wil be of this size, so don't stop commenting na.Pretty please
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys,
Very happy seeing the response from u all, keep showering ur likes and commets, and i wil keep updating the stories,thanks to all those who have liked and commented on the previous chappy


Dedicating this chapter to all my readers, who were waiting for it.

Here goes the chapter, before that don't forget to read the post below it.

Part 4

It seems to be more than a week,and Manik had become like a dead person, without seeing Maya, he waited for hours near her school, and to the park, where he used to take her all the day,and to all the places they use to go together, and even he checked at Maya's house, but it was locked for this whole week. And Manik was back to his partner - alcohol. And he spent the whole day with his partner,and went home fully drunk. He pressed the calling bell and waited so long. He repeatedly pressed the bell and finally opened, and he was shocked.

Shocked was a simple word, he felt more than happy seeing his little princess Maya standing at the door, but he could see her stepping back and slowly started to run, he called out her name, but she didn't stop and he ran behind her and that is when he realized that he had scared the little soul with his form, and he went to his room and took a hot shower and waited for morning to get back to his princess,and ask for forgiveness, he practiced what he should speak,how to speak, poor soul, he never had the experience of apologizing or convincing anyone in his past.He decided to promise her that he would not touch this drink, and he closed his eyes,and there he could see himself promising a girl that he would never touch this drink in his life, and he advanced towards the girl for a kiss,and the girl began to run and he started chasing her, and then his head started to spin heavily and he opened the eyes suddenly and he tried hard to remember what it was, but he couldn't remember the girl's face, as it was completely blurred.

And the next two days were the most happiest days for Manik, as he has convinced his princess and promised her that never in his life he would do such things that would distance her from him and she readily gave in for him like her mother, and they both spent valuable time with each other, he took her out for shopping,and bought her all her fav candies, toys and dresses and she was very much happy. Then finally on the third day,when maya was having her after noon nap, Manik went to his mom to ask about Maya at their mansion,and Nyonika was more than happy that her plan started to work, as her son, who doesn't even care to mind about her presence, had now come to talk with her.

And she filled him up with some stories that her distant relative was held up with some imp work, and had requested Nyonika to take care of her daughter for one week till she returns, and Manik seem to buy it, because for him all that mattered at that moment was his little angel's presence. And the whole week went very well with Manik, Maya and Nyonika, and finally when Nyonika told that maya was starting back to her home next day, as her mama was coming back, There were complete traces of happiness and sadness all over there, Maya at extreme end of happiness, as she was going to meet her mama back,and Manik was sad that his princess leaving him, he pleaded Nyonika to request maya's mom to let maya stay with them for some more days, but Nyonika replied that she will not be able to do that, as maya's mom will not be able to accept this as maya was the only reason for her to live, but Manik was in no mood to give up, so finally Nyonika let out her final move and asked Manik to speak with Maya's mother. And he, who was ready to do anything to get Maya with him, agreed for it. He doesn't understand why, but he felt there was a pull between him and Maya, and he was not in mood to give her up.

He got ready to speak to Maya's mom, he was ready for any high bidding to get maya back, money doesn't matter for him, all that matters was Maya for him, and with that thought, he confirmed the address and entered the one-bedroom apartment, and there she stood in a simple plain saree with contrast border-colored blouse, with no accessories, but with a sindoor on her forehead, she had simply plaited her hair in a neat manner, at a simple look, one could understand that there was no trace of happiness in her life. And his eyes slipped to her eyes, and they had a brief eyelock, he understood that there was something connected between him and her,he felt those eyes trying to reveal some truth to him, showing utter love and care, he felt that this was not the first time he was seeing this eyes, he wanted himself to drown in her eyes.He totally forgot talking about Maya, which was the main reason for his presence there, he thought for so long to get where he had seen this eyes, those eyes filled with love, true love, he was happy for seeing it, but he didn't realise why he felt happy for that, he closed his eyes in frustration, and again he could see him standing near a girl with his famous smirk, and the girl stood really tensed, and then the girl raised her eyes and nodded and he was the more excited and in his happiness he hugged her and scooped her in his arms and went inside his room and all the while walking to his room, he was thoroughly kissing her, and then he vigorously shaked his head to break the chain of thoughts, and he realized that never in life he have taken any girl to his bed, nothing more than a kiss, that too when he was totally frustrated when his mom talked about a girl named Nandini who was his wife. But he didn't give a damn to it, as he felt she was cheating him with her lies.And his heart pleaded him to believe it, and finally there wil be a tug of war between his mind and heart, where his monster mind win everytime.

Ufff, hope this much big is atleast okay, tried my best, most awaited manan face off is here, but a lot wil happen in next part, which wil be the last part of this story.

Now time for ur likes and comments
Edited by uma88 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
Regarding ur doubts about Manik,

Manik could see nandini in his past as that blurred image, but he was not able to see her face, the poor guy trying his best, so lets see. And with memory loss its not that easy to get his memory back, so i hope u guys wil be happy if manan unite at the end with a happy ending.Right?

Guys, as i said above, next part wil be the final part of this story, am planning to post my next story here, which is little matured one, not adult content, but my story is a matured one, where manik wil marry nandini for his parents, at the same time he would be in a live-in relationship, how nandini gonna bear this, what wil happen at the end is the story, if u guys are interested wil post it by this week
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
nice...now the time fr their conversation and patch up
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nyc update...finally nxt prt mein manik ki memory wapis aa jayegii...manik maya ko paane ke liye kya kch kr rha hai...lovd it...thanks for pm me...continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: AMAR_LOVE

nice...now the time fr their conversation and patch up

Yup finally it is going to be their time
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
sure dear, next part tomo pakka
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhillon90

Nyc update...finally nxt prt mein manik ki memory wapis aa jayegii...manik maya ko paane ke liye kya kch kr rha hai...lovd it...thanks for pm me...continue soon

Might be, can't reveal it now, sorry.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
nyc update.
luking forward fo nxt part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Awesome but why always nandu has to bear the pain make manik remember everything n he should pacify nandu n her daughter now how much poor nandu has to bear

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