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Aashna_chawla

@Aashna_chawla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#801

Originally posted by: 51083alishashah
Awesome update...u have balanced romance n emotions very beautifully in this update...whenever u update i think that this is the best part of ur story but everytime i find it more beautiful n awesome than before...yr story always make me speechless...the more i read the more i fall for this story...the craving for read further increases with each update...plz do update soon n thanks a ton for pm

aww thank u so much and devils ka har part awesome hoga i promise or make out is on the and i cn promise one thing make out wont be a emotional update wo indeed hot hoga and i will continue soon

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Aashna_chawla

@Aashna_chawla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#802

Originally posted by: mairaallauddin
Awesome update
Manan morning romance was amazing
And aliya came to manik's office and whatever navya said to nandini and then nandini was scared that what if manik will leave her
And then when manan went for shopping dhruv came back and then manik was scared to lose nandini and then nandini's father bought divorce papers and 5 months past and only one month is left for their divorce
And then manik left the house and nandini left behind him when the goons where with nandini that part was scary but finally manik came and saved nandini and then nandini said that she doesn't want divorce And then manan romance was hot and then manik said he doesn't want divorce and let's start fresh if everything was fine then what happened suddenly that manik though nandini cheated him and she loves dhruv
Loved the update
Manan romance was hot
Update the next part soon

thts the biggest mystery of devils what happend between them they luv each other so much na phir bhi itna pain story is like this wese mystery is on the way first enjoy make out and thnks fr the cmnts will continue soon

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monikalambay

@monikalambay

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Posted: 10 years ago

#803

heyyy... thrw m silent reader but cant resist myself to commenting in this part .. its awsmm dear .. u potrayed each & evry emotion relli well .. ur story is too fab .. love ur writing skills.. eagirly w8ng fr the nxt part .. manan makeout .. hihihihihi...

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Aashna_chawla

@Aashna_chawla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#804

Originally posted by: aadhya_cute
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i'm sleepy🥱

sure i am waiting for your comment

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Aashna_chawla

@Aashna_chawla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#805

Originally posted by: Ladyeirin
You write so well that I am captivated. Can't even wait for the next update. Hope it comes soon... But before that let me just tell you that it was so satisfying to read both their pov's. And I love the possessive streak in Manik that just jumps out whenever Dhruv appears. Can we pls have more of such situations in future??? Also the way you have built Nandini's character is so beautiful cos here she is brave and innocent, giving and responsible, fun and cute. I guess she's the whole package. I feel Dhruv should create more ripples between Manan so that our two hearts will realise how destiny only wants them together forever.
Alya's role is also super interesting in your story. She is selfish and ambitious so if she starts envying Nandini, then what will Nandini do as a sister? I can only wonder but let your genius mind create more magic as the story progress. So all the best and keep doing what you're doing and I will enjoy riding along with you!

yes alya dhurv nyonica's character is still in suspence kbhi bhi kuc bhi ho skta hai its devils roller coaster ride or alya ka character thoda different hai meri story me u will get to know in future update and yes update is on the and night is still on just wait for it and thanks for this comment or jealousy update i will show u in future updates

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Aashna_chawla

@Aashna_chawla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#806

Originally posted by: sharon.babu
awesome update...
loved it so much...
manan's bond was just growing from the beginning...
why do people want to separate manan...why divorce...
thank goodness manan decided to give a fresh start to their marriage...
wondering what kind of misunderstanding happened that manik hates nandu and thinks that she is with dhruv in the future...(this story's present)...
can't wait to see what happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...

oh god present story ko abhi jane dete hai abhi toh make out baki and devils biggest i will open whenever i feel its the right time and i will update soon

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Aashna_chawla

@Aashna_chawla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#807

Originally posted by: Tishyy
Wow ... Simply wow ...
I was totally hooked to the update ...
The way u described the confusion fear love was superb ... The jealousy and the insecurity that they both were facing ... Hats off to u gal ... Take a bow
u knw as a reader I was so much in pain with them that I just wanted to go and punch them and tell them it will be allright and u both love each other ... Y not talking it out hahahaha that's the affect I have made it with ur writing ...
Loads of love and best wishes

if i would have been in your place me to manik ko danda mar ke smjati ke gussa jyda jruri hai ya biwi lol
anyways i m on cloud 9 u can feel the story like we feel manan u cn feel thm in my story thats a really very big thing for me or thoda pain or aansu bcha lo aage kam ane wala hai present is bit dark

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Ammu

@Entwined_Fates

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Posted: 10 years ago

#808

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

yeah i wont or why Not big comments i really luv your big big comments schi they are beyond anything tumhare comments pdhne ke bad hmesha batisi chamak jati h meri toh do big comments i luv thm or agar tumhare magic wand ho to lakr de do yr i really need it tht to very badly

Ho!! my pataaka hamare pAas wand toh hai... Par ek problem hai... Unme magic nahi hai
Shollie 😭 😭

Listen ham dance kar rahe hai on hawa Hawaii
Coz I'm on cloud9 hamara comments par kar aapki battisi chamak ti hai... 😃 😃

Edited by Snehasn53 - 10 years ago

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Aashna_chawla

@Aashna_chawla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#809

Originally posted by: nikki.smiley95
that was truly amazing dear...you managed to put all the emotions in one part..😊😉
i am just afraid how would i read the part when they would head to misunderstandings & that prologue part😭
i wish we could skip that...but i know its not possible😊

yes its not possible life is like this sometime sweet some time bitter sweet part is about to end aage hatered is gonna take place of romance or present is bit dark so prepare yourself fr this anyways thnks fr the cmnt glad u like it i will continue soon