2# Devil's bride manan ff prt30 on 143 #3link on 1 - Page 80

Awesome

Amazing part u shwed all emotions perfectly...finally he say dont leave me...waiting for next part... 😊

Waiting for the next part,
continue soon.

Originally posted by: MaNanholapeople

Heheh we know that yuh always write long long updates and sorry if it offended yuh i am really sorry but yess i love your story and thanks yuh quoted😃😃

no need for this sorry whenever u wants to talk to me you can and yes i will continue soon with another long update

Originally posted by: Snehasn53

Chaliye ab se no lambaa comments
Aashu health comes first don't take stress its not good for health and yeah plss don't skip eating food it's really bad yaar

yeah i wont or why Not big comments i really luv your big big comments schi they are beyond anything tumhare comments pdhne ke bad hmesha batisi chamak jati h meri toh do big comments i luv thm or agar tumhare magic wand ho to lakr de do yr i really need it tht to very badly

Originally posted by: kirtiloveparth

ohhh god..awsm dear...bt pls ab presnet track dikhao..bt Iska bhi wait h ki Manik ko nandu present trck me pasand kyu nhi h..bt pls ab thoada present track likho...pls

present track ans mystery is on the bs ek past update than pura ek update present me pkka for sure or mystery ke liye thoda wait krna pdega so little wait

Originally posted by: Kavyashree22

Yeh kya tha??? Uff kitna hustle bustle.. I don't know what to write and what not..cuz its still past... And yeah, IF THEY LOVE EACHOTHER SO MUCH THAN WHAT ABOUT THE PRESENT TRACK..??? WHAT WAS THE SOUL REASON FOR IT?? Aah!! Need mind break.. Thanq for pm..

mystery is on the way dear just a little more wait phle make out to ho jaye

Originally posted by: anki_diya

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="7">Of all ur parts till now...this one is my most fav. Cant resist myself from commenting . Worth readingat this hr like 12.30am.</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="7">Keep updating as early as u can .looking forward fr it.</font>

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sure i will and i m so glad u like it thank u for the cmnt and more bombs are on the way make out bs ane ko hai

Originally posted by: shubhshash

Hii..I am a silent reader...sry fr that as I am a newbie...

But nw no mre being a silent reader...

Cming to yur update wow..it was too good...

It was mixture of all emotions anger sadness happiness and many mre things...!

Really loved it...

Nw waiting to see hw their journey starts wid their second chance to marriage n really wanna knw wat happens that they go apart again in present...

Continue soon😊

its ok dear now i m so glad u are not a slient reader anymore coz u r comment means alot for me anyways so many things are on the way just wait for them and i will continue soon

Originally posted by: HTA111

Wow intense hot outclassed totally loved it


Manik so wanted to be close to Nandu as he is dying to feel her make love to her and whenever they tries to get close someone do come between them she was already disturb by navya comment about aliya and her manik she didn't want to say anything but when manik saw his wife Nandu with dhruvv his blood boiled as he can't bear any one near her as she is only his own life and can't share

Nandu was hell shocked to hear about divorce and thought he wanted it so she said yes and it raise his anger and he left but dint realise she is behind him and got stuck with drunken goons and she was helpless crying for manik and thankfully he reached on time to save her

He wanted to let her go as she will always get hurt coz of but he can't live without her as she is his breath and heart beat and manan both get blown with the flow and dint want to be apart from each other

He wants to hold her yet he wants to let her go too he is confused to open his heart what if she is gone how he will survive without her now

Continue soon and thanks for pm

thanks for the comments dear and thts the story line manik's innerturmoil his confusion insecurity how she will deal with thm coz manan is the center point of the story other character will come and go no kavya mukabhi or anything only manan and night is still on so wait for the next update