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awww😊 really yr loved d update to d core😛 thank god dt manik came on time n saved him bt hes again got stuck as fighting b/w his brain n heart n really loved his desicion dt he choosed her😊 his marriage n ready to give it a chance😛 really loved their sexy romance😛😃 plzz update nxt chp soon will b w8ting for it😊

Originally posted by: RidzKhambhati

Hey update is awesome like how do you write so perfectly...You are right that this update is different from any other story & romance also..Now come to the update first of all Manik missed Nandu yaar aww..Then that kitchen romance its nice..now a days Manik didn't leave a single chance to romance...Then that office part feeling sad for Nandu...But then the biggest shock of the update divorce paper..but it's nice both thought about each others happiness but they didn't know that they both are the each others happiness..Then that goon oh god how they dare to touch Mr.Malhotra's wife...woww Manik beat them...nice...Then the hot romance oh my god you are right song is perfectly suited to that situation..But yaar in the morning all things are going well I just thought tonight they wil be together but then story take 360 degree turn but at last they both confess their feeling to each other its woww..But now I cant wait for next update...please write soon & update...but please I wanted this past track continue don't wanted to read now dark present... 😊

Well only two three updates are remain in romance make out or another one two not more than this or i cnt skip the dark part of the story romance is about to end hatered will take place of romance or i m glad u find it different from others and yes devils is unpredictable u cnt predict anything yha sb extreme hota hai

Originally posted by: parthadmirer

Very true a diff story of dance too...

lap dance was awesome...

then club dance was superb..

nd ghani bawri was amazing...

all diff from each other...

good i too love dancing..

so wanna see more but htke..😉

ohh so night still on... wow...

waiting what more twists are waiting for them...

m waiting eagerly...

amazing story...👏

I have more types of Dance in future updates all are difference from each other and this night held so many things for them just a little more wait well what u want next past update or present

Originally posted by: aysha_rah

Hey! Aysha here ur readr frm fb.. well the updates r really very lonnggg... i've read two prts fr nw.. last one i'l read tmrw... really dey r so bigg updates.. luv ur effrts n appreciate ur hard wrks.. u write so beautifully nd perfect really... thnk u so mch fr dis awesm story nd sch lovely parts... love to read more & more of dem...

Ok now abt the updates.. amazing nd really awesum... the way nandini presented abt d deal nd she was so perfect n also der understng ws so good... i luvd it...manik's dream prjct was wid him bcz of nandu..woww... nd den nandu made him undrstnd abt alya.. aww dat ws so swwet she loves her di a lot... nd finally manik agreed fr it bt also askd fr tym.. good job nandu..
There private kiss i think it was first fr dem na... oh dat was really adorable... nd wen d way nandu wantd more of kiss...heheee cute she is... luvd dem really...
Nd den in nxt prt wen manik ws sleeping over her...awww so cute.. n nandu dsnt disturb him n slept too.. dat ws so shweettt.. nd manik hs to leave her n go to pune... he didnt wnt to go.. nd left note fr her... awww... nd nandu ws searching fr him at first... lovely couple... nd den d office drug thing hawww... nandu took d blame.. bt wat else she cud do... jst fr manik she did this... pure bond.. nd manik finally got to knw abt it n in no tym he ws der fr her... d way he threatend commisioner...hahahaaa.. he won't leave nyone wen it cums to her aww.. nd dt saxena... he uttered shit abt nandu & lo pad gayi manik ki maar...hahahaaa... i enjoyed it a lot nd den proofs wer der n nandu got released finally...uff relief fr manik... nd d innocnt sa confession of nandu melted d devil n he ws so guilty... but chlo dimaag to aayi bande ko.. nd all dose vows n his guilty prt ws so emotionl... luvd it a lot...nd dose wounds on nandu ws lyk a knife on his heart nd he ws crying too.. so mch pain & love n care n wat not... oh amazingly presented hatts off girl..
Nd nd nd.. manan's romance ws superb.. minblowing...dey wer going perfect but but but againnn... mukti yar bad me aa jati... n she took nandu away... hehee manik bechara... ok m so excited to read d nxt one but so mch sleepyyy too... i'l read tmrw n cmnt again... thnku so mch fr so lovinggg updayes... u r amazing at writingg... ok nw bye byeee ... tc... keep smiling & krep writing... heheee...

As i told u time is much needed for my updates they are very long anyways thank u for this awesome comment and u should read this last part this part is full of romance or drama or it wasnt there first kiss remember that announce ment but ya it was there first luv kiss jiske bad manik ko thapad nh pda lol
Or read the next and i will wait for u r comment

Wow such an amazing update

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

ohk thn Make out se phle ek pura present ka prt dete hai but is bar present me cute moment to nhi milega present is bit scary now total disaster hoga isliye i wanted to know pura hattred ek sath chiye ya tukdo me

Oh noo... Iska matlab nandu ke saath hame bhi rulaane ka iraadha kar chuke ho aap
Well in that case agar rona hi hai toh... Present hi sahi... Past ke sweet moments se kahi diabetes ho gaye toh...now it's up to you... Rulaana hai ya seedhe maarna hai diabetes se
Par haan pataaka dare not to skip your meals
Pehle food then update... Varna jaante ho na aap ham choo mantar karne mein kitna expert hai 😉

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

Well only two three updates are remain in romance make out or another one two not more than this or i cnt skip the dark part of the story romance is about to end hatered will take place of romance or i m glad u find it different from others and yes devils is unpredictable u cnt predict anything yha sb extreme hota hai

Well you are right your story is so unpredictable and it's different too that's why we are so much attached with your story...but right now I wanted to read update in past only...so please...and when will u update yaar now i can't wait to read your story...now I m desperately waiting for next update...please update soon...& you are so sweet you are always reply to our comment... 😊

Originally posted by: RidzKhambhati

Well you are right your story is so unpredictable and it's different too that's why we are so much attached with your story...but right now I wanted to read update in past only...so please...and when will u update yaar now i can't wait to read your story...now I m desperately waiting for next update...please update soon...& you are so sweet you are always reply to our comment... 😊

coz i luv to chat wid u all gupshup i luv it and i need time for update i havent write anything yet so i need atleast three four days for next update and next is in the past so dont worry i will update soon

Originally posted by: Snehasn53

Oh noo... Iska matlab nandu ke saath hame bhi rulaane ka iraadha kar chuke ho aap
Well in that case agar rona hi hai toh... Present hi sahi... Past ke sweet moments se kahi diabetes ho gaye toh...now it's up to you... Rulaana hai ya seedhe maarna hai diabetes se
Par haan pataaka dare not to skip your meals
Pehle food then update... Varna jaante ho na aap ham choo mantar karne mein kitna expert hai 😉

ha ji Bola tha na jitna hasaya hai utna rulaungi toh devil's ke true colours show krne ka time aa gya but the thing is ke i want to fill this thread from romance manan luv next thread is going to be a bit dark or this time present wont be emotional one but a scary one and i know u wont like it anyways story is still on or chill i wont miss my meal or present ya past votes pr decide karte hai dekhtey hai sb kya boltey hai but next update is in the past coz nyt is still on