2# Devil's bride manan ff prt30 on 143 #3link on 1 - Page 66

Omg..am speechless

plz update

Originally posted by: prathi3

am i breathing??

no m not

i am officially dead

wat was dat ??

phew i took few minutes to digest it

but mind blowing

by the way u better update da next part fast and dont make us wait ok

love u😃😃

well next two parts are going to be indeed different in devils history even more than this part but i really need tym for thm atleast 4 days well i will try to wrap up soon and u r wait will be the worth i promise

Originally posted by: millie17

Amazng updt...it wsso hot n passipnate...
But mukti became d kabab mai haddi...
Manik finally realised dat nsndi is a pure soul...
Nw he wl bcm a gud husband too..wow..
Plz gv us more of manan romance

Continue soon...
D story is superb..n going vry well..
Plz don't keep us waitng fr too lng...

well next is going to be more passionate i promise but i need tym atleast four day i m going to start it today but alas devils is too long so time is the most imp thing what i want anyways it wasnt mukti it was me coz real make out is'nt tht much easy u have to wait fr it but i promise u r wait will be worth fr u all

Originally posted by: tas456

Omg..am speechless

Wat an amazing update dear

Kaise likh lete hoon yaar

The love nandini has for him she's willing to take all the blame on herself... Outstanding

The devil.is now turning into a passionate lover

Pls pls would love to see more romantic manan moments in your next update

Am crazily madly deeply in love with your writing dear

You r just amazing

Will b waiting eagerly for your next update

Love ya a lot!!!!

Pls pm me when you update next

Take care and always keep smiling:-)

sure next update is full of romance but a very different typ of romance coz its devils or devils is different so next is going to be more hot than this and about the pm thing sorry i cnt my phone is not working i m using my brothers phone or there no option of broadcasting pm so i have no other option u have to chk forums fr the update untill my phone came bck to me sorry fr this but i cnt do anything in this

wow awesome
loved it
Mukti !!! kya timing thi !!!!
Hehehehe
BT u penned it so amazingly
Updt asap
can't wait for the next

Originally posted by: deepanksha

How can someone be so romantic and a great writter,m dead like really dead,it was more than awesome,just out of this world

Awesome is like really a small word in front of this update

Hatts off to u

Well i never thought i can write this much in romance frst comedy than romance but i write what i feel upcoming updates are going to be more romantic for u all wait for thm

Originally posted by: asangel

Such an emotnal chappy... awsm... bt yr m littl cnfusd...dis s a flashbk prt na? If mnk feels fr hr to esa kya hua ki at prsnt case whn nandu is pregnent..mnk is angry on hr??

thts the biggest mystery of devils u have to wait for it just little wait i m about to open the mystery but before mystery enjoy the romance

Originally posted by: gtilwani45

finally u r back..

god how much I miss thisss..
just amzing. ...

nandu ne sb blame khud pr le liyaaa..
just fab...

n manik kaaa love care n concern was mesmerizing. ..
n.loved manik's pov.


n how she says she trust him..

mindblowing. ...
n romance part was mindblowing beautiful fabulous. ..
but mukti...huh..

kyu disturb kiya..

chalo chodo..

I luv it..

itsss awesome. ...
I really like it ...itsss soo nice to read...


keep updating like this. ..

update soon. ...
waiting
waiting for next update eagerly impatiently. ...

thanks for this beautiful update..

Thanks ...

Loadsss off love...


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well it wasnt mukti i m the real culprit lol if i would have been in u r place i will litrally kill the writer for breaking this kind of scene and i know u must be feeling the same there are lots of romance is on the way but i will be biggest hurdle in their romance such a cruel writer i m any ways thanks fr the comment i will update soon

Originally posted by: Snehasn53

Hiii aashu a big and tight waala huggy to you and very long waala kissie:):)
I just want to kiss your hand... It has really magic... Otherwise I never thought after that passionate last night the new morning will bring this 360 U turn and that too in full speed its unimaginable
Yayy yayy sooo lambaa. Update thank you thank you thank you
When I was reading this update na I was resting on my bed I was so engrossed in this story that I came to full edge just miss yaar varna thudd!!
I don't expected that this drug supply trick must be of saxena I thought its of aliyas... But you proven me wrong
Poor nandu such a innocent soul performing duty towards her hubby.. To protect him from every evil
Ho!! Mr. Malhotra cancelled his pune project for his lovely wife... This is like aatva ajooba
Kya confidence hai boss he challenged commissioner that his wifey will be out of bars within 3hours and he rescued her... I toh full clean bowled for this
Then interrogation was unexpected yaar... I thought manik will run towards nandu and pull her in his embrace with all force, par yahaan toh kuch aur hi huaa... Silly me how could I forget this is DEVIL'S yahaan sab kuch tedha hi hote hai
Hayee nandu's answer to his questions made him froze on his place
Flashback accha aur khatarnaak teh I don't elaborate that
Chalo manik ne devil KO uss hill point ke pAas hi chodkar aagayae...vaapas aane ke baad no sorry no thank you nothing seedha romance par uthar gaye... Hmmm yeh sirf manik hii kar sakte hai
I'm loving ittt nandu's bichaari losing her sanity par kuch nahi kar sakthi hahaha...bhagwaan hii jaane kab tak chalenge yeh sweet tortures
Muktii aa gayi you are really cabir's evil twin jab dekho tab kahibi tapak padte hai
Aashu ab ham kya kare aaj iPhone ne bhi inhe disturb nahi kiya... Smurfy bhi apni mamma paapa KO thora time ke liye akelaa chor diya... Par phir bhi inhe woh karne KO nahi mila jinke liye yeh itna taras rahe hai

PS: Aashu aqsa will be proud of you... Becoz you have given mind blowing update... She'll be on cloud nine today the way your update is getting responses

Well thank u so much for this awesome comment tight huggy from my side for this awesome comment and such a lovely reader u r really i m missing her like hell aqsa was very exicted for this part even more than me but see where we land up plz pray for my wifey coz i wanted to write next part wid her seriously i cnt write widout i wanted to put devils on hold but she didnt allow me coz she know u wont be able to take it at this phase of story so i have to do this for her but i still feels like it part is could have been much better than this agar wo mere sath hoti but to my dismay she is not wid me well anyways i cn write a whole eassy on my wifey but this quote is quite enough now and thanks fr mentioning her in this comment coz she deserves equal share in my credit devils is our story aqsa deserve the equal credit of this story anyways i will update soon i promise