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srija-n

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Posted: 9 years ago

#631

plz update asap ...
As last chapii was just so awsm ..
Cant wait long ... so plz soon 😉

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jinu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#632

Last 2 part awesome...next part update soon... 😊

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Rita_gurung43

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Posted: 9 years ago

#633

It was a superb update I mean I can't xplain how much I njoyed while reading''''

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Sm0405

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Posted: 9 years ago

#634

Kya kahu me iss update k bare me ... Words kam pad rhe hai likhbe k liye ... Seriously this was an amazingly awesmmm ... Mind blowing update ... Loved it very much ... Nd yes !! This was longg ... Very long ... Everything was so perfect in it ... Really enjoyed it a lottt ...

Frm the beginning where she found him sleeping peacefully keeping his face in the crook of her neck n hands on her waist to the end with Manik's promise to b the best husband in the world ... Everything was so amazing n penned perfectly ...

Nandini took all the blame on herself only to save Manik's reputation n dreams ... She went through all this only becoz of him ... Nd this made Manik realize his mistakes ... How wrong he was about Nandini ...

When she said abt the vows she took in their wedding ... He was shocked n guilty ... When he remembered his vows ... When he was promising to make her suffer, to torchere her, to make her life hell, to make her regret this marriage ..., she was promising to take care of him, to accept him as her husband, to protect him frm all the problems n bad things ... This made Manik feel hell ... He realised tht he was so wrong abt Nandini ... N now he wanted to make everything right ...

When he came back n was in tears ... He hugged her tightly feeling ashamed of all his deeds ... Nd here Nandini was continuously asking him abt why he was crying n what's wrong with him ... He was guilty tht he was punishing her fr the mistakes she never committed ...

Nd its then he saw her bruises which she got when she was in jail ... He was feeling shattered nd then their romantic moment ... He tried to sooth her pain by his kisses n soft touches ... It was soo amazingky peened tht I'm speechless ... N thn Manik promised to b with her, to protect her, to b her husband n to give her all the rights tht she deserves as a wife ... As his wife ...Really hats off to u ... This was an amazing update ...

Waiting n waiting fr the nxt updateee ... Plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz post the nxt part sooonnniishh ... Can't wait fr it seriously ...

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anu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#635

Ahhh found it
It was amzing
I mean I loved it
We call n pure love this is something like tht
I can't define in wrds
It's amazing
I'm Srsly feeling awesome after reading this
Love u alot

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Anu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#636

What a long and beautiful update...poor Nandhu taking so much for Manik, she knew he was innocent , her trust ub her is great..so smart of her till though and loved Manik's reaction to the news and especially his thoughts about their promises and his promise in the end... looking forward to seeing the love develop... wonderful job.

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mairaallauddin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#637

Awesome update

Nandini took the blame but manik release her from jail

The wound on nandini's body were hurting manik

And manik is changing for nandini

Manan romance was superb But mukti came in between

But loved theupdate

Update the next part soon

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Pari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#638

Awesome chappy...loved it

The romance part was amazing...

Waiting for nxt part eagerly

Thankyou for sharing this story

Lots of love

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aadhya_cute

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Posted: 9 years ago

#639

thank u for long update...finally u r back from ur vacation...i hope u enjoyed

i must thank u for manan first kiss in chap-26😃...that was magical

coming to todays update

what a blissful morning...manan in eachother arms😊

manik finally observed his little doll...her cute,petite,fragile frame..u xplained perfectly👏

ohhh ...he was feeling sad to go leaving her

OMG sexana is out😡 nd he did itna bada mishap...but atleast manan came closer

😭😭 nandu blamed herself for manik i was pretty xpecting this...haww manik cant see her in jail

he said just 3hrs with such determination i loved it😊

thank god for cc camera's...finally nandu is all free

yes yes time for confrontation...yes nandu gave the perfect answer.."I trust U"

aashna...the way u discriminated b/w nandu lines nd manik vows wow perfect...a big huggie for that

yes manik realised how wrong he was...

manan romance...it so blissful...fascinating...aww manik soothing her pain with love...i felt gooseboms while reading that part

😡mukti y u disturbed...but yaa she cares for nandu😊

manik finally took the vow of protecting her i was soo happy...

.mr.malhotra...time for change..."Devil to best husband"

looking forward for next update

thanks for pm😊

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parthadmirer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#640

So here m again ...

wow aashna what an update yaar...👏

pura filmy ...

loved it to the core...

loved the part where part where manik was remembering his marriage vows and same time comparing it with nandini words...

awesome part it was...

you have beautifully penned it down...👏

morning scene so beautifully written...

showing how relax manik and nandini are in each others arms...

nandini admiring the calmness on manik face ...

and manik admiring her beauty...😊

wow amazing nandini took the blame of drugs on her to save manik dream project...👏

though mnaik hated her so much and held her responsible for everything ...

but nandini she supported him at the worst situation remembering he vows of marriage...

manik too got emotional to hear that nandini got arrested as she took the blame on her...

nandini is being handled badly...😭 but she is confident that her manik will come and save her...

she is bearing all the pain for him..😳

wow manik found the truth...

he has the proof...

wow manik malhotra is manik malhotra ...

he threatened police too for not disturbing nandini his wife...👏

but when he first saw nandini in jail... he was broken...

he was hurt to see his wife hurt...

ufff their convo outside police station was amazing...

manik asking nandini why did she do that..

and she said she did because she had faith in him...and listening this manik was numb to react...

how could he take the fact that the gal he held responsible for everything bad..

she saved him becoz she had trust in him...

manik was so in guilt that he left nandini home went away to digest what just happened..

now his vows which were negative at the time of pheras.. and her answers..

he tied the black thread and was thinking to make her life hell.. and nandini on other hand she had full trust on him that she didnt cared abt her and took the blame..awesome...

he promised to fill her life with thorns.. but she on other hand she was thinking about his dream project...amazing..

he promised to torture and she accepted him as her husband whole heartedly...

he considered her wife only in front of others but she on other hand considered him as her husband and trusted him fully...wow...

he wanted to make her life full of missery and she protected him his project...again claps...

that marriage rituals were nothing for him...

but for nandini it was very serious for her...

loved this part so much... like you described his each vow and then comparing with her answers..was amazing...awesome thought...👏 for you...

the hug it was mind blowing...

he was crying and she could not see him in that situation...

both concerned for each other...

i was crying reading this...

when manik saw the wounds he was broken...