2# Devil's bride manan ff prt30 on 143 #3link on 1 - Page 56

Originally posted by: sri_valli

wow...was the only word escaped from my mouth after reading this update...every thing is sooo perfect...first of all nandini telling manik about alya's dream after the presentation

next comes the roof top talk...nandini was sooo calm and composed while talking...for a change our one and inly devil ws also tooo calm for a change...im dumbstrucked after reading the convo...i read it 4 times already ...

and finally the KISS ...this was the best kiss i ever read in any of other ff's...very blissful...

thanks for givung us such an amazing story...👏👏

well thank u for liking my story so much and tht convo part glad u like it u read it four time lol i thought it was a boring part and coming to the kiss i want there first kiss to be special or i guess nothing cn be special than this so i did this well best kiss award bura nh h i kinda like it and more romance is on the way tht too bilkul different typ ka but yet passionate wait for it

Welcome back...main seriously abi apko pm krnay wali this but aap finally agae hehehehehe I'm sooo... Happy...Chalo plz ab jaldi say next part dedo plzzZ...Ab wait nai hota plzzz

Originally posted by: vanivartika

Most impressive

Awesome update

Specially manik and nadu's conversation

I loved it that part ..heart to heart conversation

So aliya back ..one time I was scared. .ki ab kahin nya twist to nahi story me

No .. i can't c separation

But after that I feel relive. .

That kiss. ...amazing

I hope now they will understand their desires ...

Just waiting for next update dear

well i cant say anything about alya's character you will came to know about this in upcoming updates and sepration to hoga but not so soon there are some 4 5 updates left in the past thn i will show you present track for sure and i will update soon may be tonight i m working on it hope so i can complete it today

sorryyy...for being soo late...
but u were not der for 10 days so i thought of commenting after u comeback...
it was fab...seriously liked it very much...
manan's first passionate kiss...😉 thogh manik kissed her early but this kiss was full of love and passion...loved it very much..
manik is changing for good...hope that aliya doesn't creates any mess..😡
but i'm sure that aliya is only responsible for present condition of manan💔
welcome back dear...
now we need a lonnggg update...😆

Originally posted by: tas456

Hi dear

Just came across your story a few days ago

Read all your chapter's in a day!!!

You r such an amazing writer

Loved your story thoroughly

Will b waiting eagerly for your next update

Pls do send me a pm

Take care and keep smiling:-)

sure i will and i m glad u like my story and again i got a new reader who is not slient and i will update tonight but i cnt promise anything i wil try for sure thanks fr the comment

Originally posted by: DesaiK

hey read ur story...really loved the concept of it...hope dey soon realize that they love each other and have a blissful marriage life...would love to read the further chapters, request you to please pm me.

sure i will pm you from next update hope u r in my buddy list and they will realise soon and about the blissful merriage life its not gonna happen so soon as there present is bit dark u will came to know in upcoming updates and thanks fr the comment

Originally posted by: Snehasn53

Wow aashu kudos to you dear...very well explained about dreams. I hope aliya will not create any mess for manan. I loved the part when manik accepted her as lucky charm
Thank god finally he accepted her as his wifey (crazy hai thorisi par jelna toh parega hi na)
Aur han ye one track mind kaise kar leta hai I mean itni long emotional discussions K baad bhi woh wahi questions par atke huye hai, kya baat hai and Nandu she's sweet heart she gave full access to him, achaanak se itna daring kaisi ban gayi. Bichaari ko long waali smooch chahiye teh par not bad Mr malhotra controlled himself Hmmm I'm impressed
Next step of his made her super duper happy yayyie yayyie yayyie 😉 😉 finally aaj iPhone nahi taang adaaya varna mein tume kahi aur jagaah choo mantar kar deti 😆
Hmmm...akdoo ko finally realise ho gaya she's the one for him whom he can claim as his
Waiting for next update


PS: A VERY HAPPY AND SAFE JOURNEY TO CHANDIGARH 😊

lol sach me agar ye kiss miss hua hota to muje block kr dia jata if se well i want there frst kiss to be special so i did this glad u like it and more romance is on the way next update is going to be the blast for sure wait for it and dont predict any thing about alyas character coz its devils kbi b kuc b ho skta hai

Plz update soon
Curious to know what will happen now

hello yes we r waiting fr update so update soon cant w8 fr nxt parts & tc by

Originally posted by: parthadmirer

Unres...

Aashna what an amazing update yaar...

maza a gaya...

like pehle itna hasaya...

but this time i was laughing but crying and all emotional together...

awesome...👏

so bina smile karaye to update cannot be done...

so nandini she very well knows how to irritate manik and😆

manik on other hand knows how to turn any situation to a romantic one..😳

nandini actually mixed color in manik face wash...😆

but our manik..😉changed the scene to romantic one...😳

but hahahh nandini knows how to scare manik..lo agaya smurfy ka naam..

and manik hell scared...😆

so aliya is back..

but what really manik took his revenge from aliya...

by taking back the film chance from her...

and nobody knows this...😲

how cute and understanding nandini is...

first she shouted on aliya for whatever she did..

but then forgive her...😊

this chapter was totally dedicated to nandini...

her way of making things understand to manik...

forgiving aliya...

everything shows how strong a person she is..👏for this...

nandini gave assurance to aliya that all will be fine.. forgiving her and forgetting that because of aliya she was forced to marry manik...👏

manik restless in office for meeting without nandini...

this shows how a very important role nandini plays in his life..

in meeting manik is nervous but after seeing nandini he calms down..😳

but again he lost the presentation but his savior nandini is there for him.. wowww...😊

nandini backs the deal and manik is happy...

nandini force him to come with her...

and kehte hain na jahan nandini manik wahan taunting na ho...

aisa to ho hi nahi sakta...

uff this nandini is taunting manik for asking so much..😆and in return he is smirking...😆

wow the scene was beautiful where on the orphanage terrace both are lying and nandini telling him actually explaining him about dreams...

manik for the first time came to know abt nandini dreams..

and he also open up sharing abt his dream of musician...😳

this way nandini explains him abt his mistake...abt aliya and crashing her dream...👏

aashna special mention..

this talk on terrace was just beautiful...

like the way she explains him everything...

the importance of dreams..

how you feel when u loose that dream..

how she dint hate him for marriage knowing its not his fault..

also knowing that manik used to hate her for this...

why she retorted back at manik for his rudeness...

and why she dint kept quite..

for her why her family so important...

such awesome amazing beautiful...👏

and lastly that kiss was mind blowing...😉

this was a different update...

but i loved it to the core...

so now my comment is over...

you enjoy your trip...👍🏼

i m so happy u like tht convo part it was my thoughts and i want my frst kiss like this so i wrote this and about alya's character i cant say anything about this and i really luv u r comments my update is incomplete widout your comments hats off to u and yes next is going to be rocking n shocking for sure wait fr it