2# Devil's bride manan ff prt30 on 143 #3link on 1 - Page 55

Originally posted by: kimnana

awesome dear...the way she was teaching him values of life ,chase dreams ,sharing each others dream ,to be happy in life under any circumstances ...👏👏👏she is his saviour in meeting ...alya don't come in btw manan now

ty for pm

yeah this is the best quality of nandini's character in my ff she cn teach him the real meaning of life and about alya's character i cnt say anything u have to wait fr it

Originally posted by: s1133

It was fabulous... I too wanted manan's first kiss to b special...I think it can't b more special than this...can see some changes in manik's behavior... As he was silent when talking about alya...their kiss was really beautiful... And nandu s always manik's lucky charm...no one can change this...very excited to read the next part...very nice and lovely update...continue soon...

ya nothing cn be more special than this moment and manik is changing and he will completly changed in next updates and i will update in a day or two

Originally posted by: mini_manan

This was more than up to mark...
Ut was perfect...
Not at all boring...
So finally aliya ko akal aa hi gye..
I love the way nandini make make realise her mistake and teach him the way to correct...
Their kiss was the best kiss i have ever read...
Indeed bliss it was...
Their pov's are beautiful..
My fab line where manik said ki he accept her as his WIFE..
U know after reading these update of their past..i m little confuse connecting their past and present..as their past that mean present updates r beautiful so all of sudden aisa kya ho gya ki they want divorce and manik is also not ready to accept their baby in beginning...
U r making too much suspense..
Thanx for an early update..
Loved it.
Cont soon.
Love..mini

well thts the biggest mistery of devils i will unfold it on right time and present is bit dark there are some 5 6 parts are more left in past thn we will go in present or i will show u some glimps of present fr sure after two three updates and i m so happy u like tht kissing part i want there first kiss to be special and nothing cn be more special than this and i will update in a day or two thnks fr the comment

Originally posted by: iqra286

awww😛 DEAr really loved d update to d core😊 it was indeed beautiful yet emotional😭 really loved their naughty HIT MISS in bathroom😆😛 bt very dissapointed with aliya's return really liked d way nandu saved manik's dad dream n teach another lesson of life to him😊 it was emotional lke hell when nandu was narrating d story of her childhood n he was listening😛 really loved d way dy were conversing n giving answers of each n every que clearly removing their miss understandings😃 followed by a SOUL SEARING KISS😳 it was really double cherry on d cake loved it to d core☺️ really loved manik's POV plzz update itx nxt chp soon will b w8ting for d nxt one😊

yeah devils is mixup of all emotions next is going to be emotional and romantic at same time so many things are on the way and actually my first kiss like so i wrote my imaginations here and the conversation was my thoughts glad u like it and i will update soon for sure

Originally posted by: bhagupur

You are a one very strong writer.

3 updates and that to very long ones. ..👏.👏.👏.⭐️.⭐️.⭐️.

Thanks dear.

So Aliya karaoke dream was broken.

Manik has a power to destroy her.

But our sweet nandni will make him understand.

She save the day with her brilliant presentation.

Manik was proud of her. .very nice.

Now finally they find solace in each others arms

They kissed all possible way.

It's awesome to see them like that.

Awesome update. Thanks for sharing this

Devil and pari ki love story.

Happy journey dear.

Stay happy and healthy.

God bless you.

And remember we are waiting. .😛.

lol true devils or pari ki story she is indeed a angel in his life well abi to past hai so enjoy the past but present is going to be hell different then this dont bash me for those things coz there is only 5 6 more update are remain in past but glad u like my kiss or update and i will update soon for sure

Arey update soon na it's been long tym...

Yr their past soo beautiful den y der present is hell different manik wan DIVORCE 4rm nandini

Heyyy
Plz pl update naa
Its more than a week now
Its becoming all the more difficult to wait
Pllzlzlzlzzz

Oh god !! ea 10 days kab khatam hone wale hai vagban !!!! 😲
Plz cm back soonn 😭 😭

Originally posted by: HTA111

Wow beautiful mind blowing epic amazing update

Finally manan moment the kiss was soulful yet passionate and he realised that she is the one for him and it was not just attraction

Aliya is back and her dreams broken by manik yet she told her tale to Nandu about what happened and why she did it

Nandu saved manik dream and he was so happy that he got her and she took her to her orphanage and tell him about her dream and asked about his they shared a sweet moment where they confronts many things and when he asked for kiss she just gave in

Continue soon and thanks for pm

no need for this thanks pm is my duty and thanks fr this comment i was so happy when after week i read all those comments in one go gosh i was on cloud everyone loves my kissing part or convo and the kiss was really blissful comments can prove this thing and as i m bck i will update in day or two for sure