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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey MAWARA EJAZ all ur ff are just awsom
I'm out of words but there is a small complaint or u can also consider it as a request plz upload ur ff regularly specially
MY ONLY LOVE
JUST MARRIED
IT'S LOVE
DHEERE DHEERE
SUN SATHIYA
I know u regularly post dheere dheere but still...
Thanks once again hope ab Hume regular updates mileage apke ff ke
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Dishaagg12

Hey MAWARA EJAZ all ur ff are just awsom

I'm out of words but there is a small complaint or u can also consider it as a request plz upload ur ff regularly specially
MY ONLY LOVE
JUST MARRIED
IT'S LOVE
DHEERE DHEERE
SUN SATHIYA
I know u regularly post dheere dheere but still...
Thanks once again hope ab Hume regular updates mileage apke ff ke


Hey dear, thanks for ur appreciation but its me, MaNan_KaShian not Mawara Ejaz and Just married is my FF not hers 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome ff
Read in one go
Awesome
Continue soon
And pls pm me too
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

okay, so here it goes, another big long update 😊 Hope you all will like it & i'm sorry for not my ff's regularly cause i have a lot of studies and that is why remain busy with them. also i cannot thank and comment individually but altogether, Thanks to all of you for loving my ff so much. keep on reading, comment big big ones and press like. your love comments have inspired me this much that today i have completed 45 chapters of my ff 😊😛 & In Shaa Allah hope to complete 50 chapters very soon . Keep reading, Happy reading

CHAPTER 45

MaNan broke the hug when they heard nyonika calling nandini.

n=manik please tum yahase jaw please please

m=pehle promise karo timese terrace ajaogi

n=ajaungi baba..i promise abhi jaw please

he pecked her forehead and sneaked outside the house from the backdoor. nandini fixing her dupatta came out and saw all the ladies laughing because of the stupidity of the boys.

a=nandini tum kaha thi???

n=ab woh main...andar gayi thi. woh washroom me

na=nandu tumhe dekhna chahiye tha..kaise aunty ne boys ki class li. sablog sharam ke mare bhag gaye

mu=um surprised ke bhai kaise nahi aye???

a=nahi manik bhi tha bahar..

mu=bhai bahar the aur nandu se milneki koshish bhi nahi ki?? like seriously?? bhai itne decent kabse hogaye??

everyone laughed and nandini was trying to hide her blush. only she knew how decent manik was. she received a text from manik

"stop blushing and come soon... i will be waiting for you" --manik

nandini smiled and later joined with others in resuming the function.

...

under the stars,cuddling to eachother from the past half an hour manik was caressing her palm and trying to find out his name while nandini was resting her head in the crook of his neck and feeling him close to her

n=manik ab choro nah...

m=nahi nandini aj toa main ismese apna name nikalkehi rahunga

n=manik..main jabse ayi hu tum mehndi me hi busy ho..mujhse toa theekse baat hi nahi karraheho

she said making a sad pout..

m=mil gaya... finally

he jumped in joy and pointed out his name written in the center of her palms crisscrossed with beautiful designs. nandini smiled and ruffled his hair . he kissed her palms and pulled her close to him

m=yes so mrs malhotra kya kehrahithi ap??

he said huskily caressing her cheeks planting a kiss on her cheek.

m=wase mera gift??

she remembered about the gift issue and bit her tongue as she knew her patidev wont leave her so easily

n=kya chahiye tumhe? mera sab toa tumhara hi ha..

m=agar itni sweetly kahogi then i'll loose myself

he pecked her lips twice and pulled her in his embrace. she closed her eyes and hugged him tight

m=mujhe kuch nahi chahiye... cause i already have more than enough what i want and deserve

she kissed his chest making it hard for him

n=tumhe pata ha na ke tum mujhse kuch bhi mang sakte ho???

m=hmm pata ha.. ek kam karte ha abhi keliye rehne dete ha, i'll use my blank gift later on, okay?

n=theek ha.

they lied in each others arms for sometime, she was listening to his heart beats and manik was stroking her hair. finally after sometime he broke the silence and spoke up

m=jaan..

n=hmm

m=sogayi??

n=uhum..

m=then?? kya soch rahiho?

n=kuch nahi..bass soch rahiho ke how mukti must be feeling now

m=matlab?

n=tumhe pata ha manik, yeh jo time hota ha nah, sagai ke bad se shadi tak..yeh time har ladkikelie bohot special hota ha. Manik i cant express you that how much we feel happy, excited during this time

n=tumhe pata ha manik [sits up in excitement and manik was listening carefully to her with love in his eyes] jab mom ne bataya tha ke ke dad ne proposal bheja ha mere lie tumhara, i took it normal . but when we first met, hum beach par gaye.. tumhare sath woh batein..esa laga ke yes, finally um getting married. iske pehle i used to be normal, focused on my work only. ha chalo theek ha, shadi ha karlungi. but tumse milke jana ke main apni life jee sakti hu, tumhare sath khushi se..

manik too sat up holding her hand

n=jante ho manik, mukti ab jo face karrahiha, yeh khushi, yeh pal... shayed main inhe puri tarah se mehsoos nahi karpayi.. cause humari shadi jaise hui, itni jaldi.. at that time we were just getting to know eachother isiliye shayed meri khushi aur woh ehsaas mukti ki feelings se different ha but

m=but those were specials too right??

n=right.. aur woh khushi, chupke chad pe milna, ek dusreko doorse dekhna, ek dusreko janna samajhna...

m=ek dusreki kamioko accept karna aur galtioko sudharna and mostly ek dusreko trust karna.. these are the thing which are need to maintain a relationship ha na?

n=haa.. aur agar yeh sab kuch ho toa ek dusreke dilme pyar apne ap hojata ha aur iss rishteko hi Shadi kehte ha

m=the way... we are connected with eachother

manik entwined their hands and kissed her palm.

n=tumhe yaad ha manik, humari sagai kaise hui thi?? tumne mujhe ring pehnayi thi... chad pe. woh moment mere lie bohot special ha. then the gift you left at my place, woh watch. pehli bar kisiki gift ko dekkar i had blushed

hearing her words manik too blushed and pulled her in his embrace and kissed her forehead

m=i love u so much shona

n=i love u too...

she kissed his cheeks and hugged him tightly

n=mukti aur abhi ke shadi me um enjoying and feeling the same happiness and excitement .. which i had felt during our marrige. yeh phase har insaan ki life ka best phase hota ha manik

m=i know.. cause thats when we meet our soulmates, just like i found my soulmate.


MaNan's romance was interrupted when they heard sound of footsteps.

n=manik..yeh kaisi awaz ha?? tumhe terrace ka door lock nahi kiya tha kya?

m=shit..shayed bhul gaya aj karneko

both stood up fixing their clothes. nandini put on her dupatta thinking if it was ams

n=manik itni raatko kaun hoga??

m=pata nahi..agar ams hui toa.. kitna ajeeb lagega ese raatko chupke milte hue pakde gaye..

n=manik we should hide.

m=ha chalo.

both of them hide behind the wall and wait for the person who was outside to go. they peep through the wall and see abhi entering the terrace. both smile and look at eachother

m=abhi?? yaha??? is waqt..usse pata chal gaya ke main yaha hu? but maine toa pillow ke upar blanket deke rakha tha..

n=ab samjhi...

m=what???

n=thori der wait karo..samajh jaoge ke abhi is waqt yaha kya karraha ha??

after a few moments mukti too enters wrapping herself in a shawl. now manik understood and smiled at nandini who was also smiling

n=ab samjhe???

m=yes..chalo pakadte ha unhe

n=ha chalo..

ab=kitna late kardiya aneme???

mu=sorry baba..kya karu..bari mushkil se ayi hu. alya so hi nahi rahithi isiliye nikal nahi payi.

MaNan make their entry coughing and giggling. Mukti and abhi were surprised to see them and were blushing

m=hello people..kya chal raha ha??

ab=tu yaha???

m=tujhse pehle aya hu, tujhse pehle sawal kiya ha so answer bhi tujhse pehle hi deserve karta hu ha na???

n=mukti?? whats going on?? bhul gayi mom ne kya kaha ha?? sagai ke bad milna jhulna kam karna parega aur tum yaha chupke chupke??

m=that too before haldi ki rasam??? mom ko bulau??

mu=bhai please na..abhi ap aur nandini toa kamsekam tease mat karo

nandu gives her a side hug and manik pats on abhis back

m=bacchuu... yeh sab chalta ha

meri behen ke sath adhi raatko shadi se pehle...

mu=bhai... ap aur nandu yaha kya karraheho?? hmm hmm??

nandini blushes and manik slightly slaps mukti

m=tu na bohot badmash hogayi ha...aur hum kya karrahethe matlab?? tum sabki wajase mujhe kaha time milta ha apni biwi se akele me milneka?? bass wahi thorider sath me bethke time spend karrahethe

ab=accha jee, dude tu toa ese kehraha ha ke mehndi ke time mujhe druv aur cabir ko phasa kar tu toa nandu se mila hi nahi

manik's jaw opened as he thought none of them had noticed him sneaking inside the house. nandini and mukti started to giggle

ab=bacchu... humhe bhi bohot kuch pata ha.. mujhe druv mat samajhna

m=teri toa...saley

n=accha theek ha suno tum dono, mukti kal haldi ha and iske baad u guys cant meet so jo bhi bate karni ha jaldise khatam karke room me chale jaw theek ha? cause ams ke jagne ka time horaha ha and u know ke agar ese tum log pakre gaye toa it doesnt seem good

ab=hum samajhte ha nandini and yes hum bass thorider yaha rukenge and then we will go

m=chal theek ha phir..tum dono bate karo. we'll leave

mu=thanks bhai

n=good night

manik and nandini came out giving MukBhi some privacy. both came downstairs holding each others hand.

n=manik..its quiet late..tum sojaw

manik smirked and pulled her closer with a jerk

n=manik..kya karraheho k..

m=koi nahi dekhega..sab kharate lekar soraheha..

saying he pulled her even more closer and nandini couldnt help but encircled her hands around his neck

n=mr malhotra.. raat ke 3 baj raheha... aur apka romance ka session khatam hi nahi horaha ha..

m=kaisa khatam hoga?? bhai jiski itni sundar biwi ha... kaise control karega bechara

n=mr malhotra.. thora romance bachake rakhiye aur filhal mujhe jane dijiye aur khudbhi jakar aram kariye

m=ek shart par chorunga..

n=kya???

m=my good night aur ha koi chalaki nahi..i dont want my good night kiss on cheeks

nandini blushed and lowered her gaze. he took it as a yes and softly placed his lips on hers. the kiss was a slow and gently one and didnt last for a long time as they knew it was not the time. he pecked her forehead and let her go

m=take some rest okay??

n=tum bhi.

after sharing a good night hug both departed to their rooms and took some rest while lost in each others thoughts.

...
The next day was another big day. Haldi ki rasam !! Mukti's haldi was going to happen in the house and abhi's haldi was going to happen in the outhouse.
nandini's look :
Alya's look


Mukti's look :
The stage for mukti
nandini was walking from here to there. being the Bhabi of the dulhaan, she had a lot of work to do on the haldi function. for this she didnt get a chance to meet manik or call him. and our majnu was being restless to have a glance of his beautiful dulhan. he was desperately waiting for nandini to come to the outhouse for abhi's haldi ki rasam as once abhi's haldi would be done, mukti's part will begin
manik was pacing infront of the door of the outhouse when cabir comes
c=intehaa hogayi..intezar ki. ayina kuch khabar mere yaar ki
manik rolled his eyes and ignored his so called "taunts"
c=yar tu kabse yahapar khara hokar chaukidari karraha ha, nandiniko aneme abhi time ha.
m=aur yeh tujhe kaise pata??
c=muhahahaha.. you knw im cabiraa the spy
manik glared at him
c=alya se baat hui. mukti ko tayar karrahiha.
at that time navya comes.
c=lo agayi.. black and white madhubala
watching navya come manik becomes happy as now he could send nandini a message because since morning nandini had not been receiving or texting back to any of manik's call's
m=hi navya...
na=hey manik.. kaise ho? are wah..bare handsome lagraheho is white kurti mein
m=thanks
navya's eyes falls on cabir who was standing beside and making faces watching navya. she too made faces and ignored him
c=what?? ese bandaro ke jaise mu kya bana rahiho?? ya phir actual mein hi tumhari shakal esi ha
na=woh kya ha na..tumhe dekkar ultimately shakal ese kharoos hojati ha. you know, reflection???
c=ha ha very funny. kya kaam ha??
na=tumse toa koi kaam nahi ha. kaam ha dulhe raaja se, aunty ne yeh kurta pajama bheja ha aur kaha ha ke tayyar hoke bethe rahe..nandu thori der bad ane wali ha
hearing the last sentence of navya manik's face enlightened.
c=ha toa bol diya nah..ab sarko..chalo
na=tumse baat bhi kisko karni ha??
m=ab navya.. nandini ko ek message dedogi???
...
nandini finished putting the last bangle in mukti's hand. then she took slight kajal from the corner of her eyes and applied it behind mukti's ear
n=kisiki nazar na lage..bohot khubsurat lagrahiho
a=really mukti..your looking outstanding
mu=thanks both of u for ur lovely makeup and attire choosing
nyonika comes
n=mom... see apki beti kitni pyari lagrahiha
nyonika kisses on mukti's forehead
ny=meri teeno betiya aj ekdam pari jaisi lagrahiha
a=aunty..ek selfie hojaye???
mu=yes.. sab eksath.
alya takes out her phone and clicks a selfie. at that time navya comes
na=aunty jee.. ams ne kaha ha ke haldi ka time hogaya ha so nandu ko jana chahiye outhouse
ny=are ha..nandini beta, tum jaw aur jakar abhi ko haldi lagake ao and be quick kyuki same haldi mukti ko bhi lagega
n=jee mom.
nandini comes outside and navya pulls her into corner
n=navya kya karrahiho??
na=ssshh.. tumhare patidev ka message ha wahi dena ha
nandini realized that manik had called and texted her so many times but she couldnt reply him back.
n=bohot gusseme ha kya?
na=are nahi.. yeh pakdo
navya hands over nandini a tissue paper and leaves from there. nandini opens the tissue paper
" before entering the outside come straight to the backyard. i'm waiting. cant wait to see you "
nandini blushed and kissed the tissue paper
...
n=kaha ha manik???
nandini came to the backyard as manik had asked her to come. she felt his breath of her shoulder
m=was dying to see you
he whispered on her ear passing current through her body. she was about to turn around but he stopped her and hugged her from back. she closed her eyes and rested her head on his chest
m=jaan..u no na i like your open hair then why did you tie your hair??
nandini turned around and snaked her hands around his shoulder
n=um sorry manik.. but gharme function ha and main bahu hu.. isiliye thora traditional look you know, shadi ka mehel ha.
m=accha okay, but shadi ke din no hair tieng okay??
n=theek ha..jaisa tum kaho. but you didnt tell me kaisi lagrahihu main??
he looked at her from top to bottom and kissed her forehead
m=as i said yesterday..for me your the bride . looking absolutely stunning. the saree looks great on you
n=thanks... mom leke ayi ha
he tucked a loose string behind her ear and caressed her cheeks
n=um sorry manik, subhah se kaam me busy thi and mukti ko bhi ready karna tha so tumhare calls and texts ka jawab nahi de payi
m=its okay jaan. i can understand..i just wanted to be the first one to do this
n=do this?? do what??
manik smirked and closed her eyes with his palms. she smiled and stood there like that. after sometime she felt something on her cheeks. when she opened her eyes and touched her cheek it was
n=haldi??
m=hmm.. i wanted to be the first one to apply haldi on you. ams kehrahithi ke its considered a good shagun, agar dulha dulhan ko pehle haldi lagaye
nandini smiles
n=manik..hum dulhan aur dulha nahi ha..
m=mere lie toa tumhi dulhaan ho. bass aur kuch nahi
n=accha jee... ab jab apne lagaya ha toa humhe bhi toa haldi lagana chahiye mere dulhe ko
manik smiled and forwaded the small bowl of haldi in front of her. nandini smiled and pushed the bowl aside
m=kya hua???
she took a step closer to him and tiptoed to reach his height. closing the distance she rubbed her cheeks with his. manik was left surprised watching her this gesture.he smirked at her and pulled her closer by her waist. his hands caressing her bare waist making goosebumps inside her
m=i didnt know.. ke meri dulhaan itni romantic bhi hosakti ha
nandini too pulled him a bit closer snaking her hands around his neck
n=sabkuch mere romeo se hi sikha ha
manik touched her nose with his and sealed his lips with her. he sucked his favourite colour lipstick from her lip , entering her mouth making her weak and moan out his name. with great difficulties they broke the kiss as they knew where they would end up. he pecked her forehead
m=i love u so much..
n=i love u too.
Edited by MaNan_KaShian - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update..the way of nandini applied haldi is good..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Such a cute n amazing chapter
love ur writing skills
manan ka romance n cavya ki nok jhok is worth reading for
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome.
Looking forward to more of Manan romance.
Thanks for the pm.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
howw awsmmm...
such and awsm update
shadiii rasam...
ahm ahm manan romance...sahi kaha h pyar krne wale jaga nhi dekhte
manik ji apki hi behn ki shadi h uspe thosa concentrate kro..biwi wahi rahegi zindagi bhar...
ahhahaha lol...
awsm update
thnc for the pm
love sakshi
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ever lasting love story.

I love every moment they spent together.

They look so content with each other.

Please make Nandu pregnant, it will complete them. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg...kese karleti ho yaar
Awesome, amazing, superp update
Love the way manan are remembering their courtship and wedding
Will b waiting for your next update eagerly
Tq for the pm dear

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