III - MaNan FF : Life With Nandini [Ch46 - PG137/Thread4 Link - PG153] - Page 88

awesome update...

Awsm update juhi.
um rly worried for nandini.
bt hav complete faith n ew.

Wow amazing update .. Cute and funny attitude nandini has got . Such caring and loving manik is ... Waiting for the update ... Thankz for pm

lovely song

so start fighting ..:)

they love birds I know they will makeout

I hope just nandini will b fyn

Awesome...that ws amazing
Manan fight...let's see what happens..
Continue soon

just wow wow is d word i cn say u knw i cnt explain in words hw much joy i get aftr reading ur updates its just so pure n blissful so contentful i love it i want to see manan like dis or may b pani if nt reel den real n if nt real den in imagination ..i just love ur updates ur way of penning d story d usage of words d description of scenes is terrificly amazing u r one hell of a great writer ..keep writing ..may god always bless u

Awesome update...
MaNan romance... Their talks...and their fight...
Superbly written...
Fab 5 ka song ... Perfect choice...
Nandu's tantrums...
Oh ab kahan gyi nandu...
I hope she's okay...
Manik making noodles... Best scene...
Thnkz 4 the pm

Amazin'
don't have words to explain how much I love ur story
I've never seen such true love in any other ff ur every update touches my heart and I love this story to the core
poor Manik now has to bear his wife's moodswings
in the 1st para their convo. was so cute
nandu is demanding for peanuts!
Stubborn nandu and protective Manik!
Awesome..
Love them a lot
update soon

It was really outstanding i was thinking ki manik toh nandy ko sab kuck la dega jo bhi she wants i wanted ki woh kuck aisi chiz ki craving jo vo na de paye nd here my wish is fulfilled nd i also wanted ki unki nok jhok nd here it is i really love u for this update it was totally fab update all wat i wanted to see u just nailed thnx for super duper update now coming to cliffhanger i guess vo manik ke liye koi surprise plan kar rhh hogi yaa somethimg else it would be worth
Lots of love

You know you are a Magical writer? You literally make me imagine everything that you write, its like I can see it happening! For the first time you ended a story on a cliffhanger & also for the first time you've showed MaNan having a fight! It's good cause now we get to see other sides to their relationship. I would love to see a little more of these tiffs, as according to me it would make us see how they overcome these small arguments. Just a suggestion though.
Coming to the update, Manik feeling her weight less, he really lives her a lot! He controlling his urges for her! Taking care of her & her health, fulfilling all her cravings, he's just so Perfect! Manik went to cook for her just so he can fulfill her cravings. Nandini teasing him was so cute, poor guy his face fell when he came to know she ate breakfast! These two are Pure love. Manik can't take a risk with her health & there was no doubt he wouldn't let her eat the Peanut Pie! Her cravings & mood swings did aggravate the argument! Poor Manik must be tensed on not knowing where she is! But I fell her disappearance has got go do with Abhi's entry! Can't wait for your next update.
And do write that OS & post the link here would love to read it!