MaNan SS: M INCOMPLETE WITHOUT YOU [Chapter - 3pg-18] - Page 2

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Chapter - 1
London MANAN PARADISE[8a.m]
Good Morning all,today with me is a person who is inspiration for all youngsters the singing sensation,
youngest leading business tycoon MANIK MALHOTRA CEO of malhotra heights...
Rep: Good morning Mr.malhotra! How it feels to be the youngest leading business tycoon
M:it feels really good
Rep:its jst 1and half yr&you have achieved a lot infact you are nominated for the CEO of the year..well congrats for that& whats your mantra behind the sucess???
M:thankyou so much and its nothing bt dedication teamwork
hardwork of my employees n me my shining star who always shines for me as my lucky charm...
Rep: But still you are just 21,normally youngsters of this age spend their time in partying clubbing n what not!!!
M: you are right I too lyk partying n all bt as for now my dad has given me this responsibility with a hope and m just fulfilling his dreams n kisi ne mujhse kha h "jo bhi kro dil se kro"
Rep: ok well thats great!!!! Ummm... So tell something about your personal life!! I mean ny love as you are vry
handsome!!!
M:love of my life is only my SHINING STAR my NANDINI for me love itself means nandini!!!!(his eyes were full of
tears)
REP:wow!!!impressive!!so tell something abt her!!!
M: if i'll describe her then i'll be at loss of words bt still she is my everything my shining star my lucky charm who
has removed all the darkness from my life who has filled the once hatred and black heart with love her love
Rep:so you love her so much!!!
M: yes more than anything else in this whole world not more than her!!(rishabh comes their)
Good morning manik bhai!!! Sry for disturbance bt I came to say bye!!
M: its ok rishu bye n all the best for ur 1st day of school!!
Rep: Is he your brother???
M: yes he is my brother infact more than that!!!
Rep: so mr.malhotra when we can meet Ms.nandini...
M: kbhi bhi! But thoda intezaar krna padhega as m bhi pichele 2saal se uski awaaz sunne k liye tadap raha
hoon!!!
Rep: why??
M: she is in coma...
Rep: thankyou mr.malhotra
for giving us your time
M: its my pleasure!!!
Rep: so viewers we came to know abt manik's personal and professonal both life I must say he is very down to
earth person!!!! as you heard abt ms.nandini pls all of you
pray for her quick recovery
Scene 2
Mumbai [1.30p.m]
fab4 were watching that interview n all were sobbing
mukti: cabir what about our tkts???
cabir: kl ki book krwayi h as aaj navya ki recording bhi h
dhruv: buddy kitta bdal gya h phle jsa bilkul ni rha
alya: ab woh sirf nandini ke liye jee raha h with a hope
ki woh uthegi
cabir: tu sahi keh rhi h alya his hope their hope
alya: we were also not less jb hme uske sath hona chahiye tha we were not with him uss time hum sb kitte selfish ho gye the especially me n dhruv(dhruv hugs her) what if
woh sahi(interuppted by cabir)
cabir: no alya she will be up for him for them for evryone
scene 3
Mumbai [2P.M]
murthy's house warming puja
shanno:kitni kharab kismat h hmari murthy ji aaj ghar ka grah pravesh h aur hmare dono bacche hmare sath nahi hai
vishwa: esa mat kahiye shannoji sab theek ho jaega
amms: ayiapps kanna ko jaldi se theek kar do!!! Itti si umr mein hmari nandu ne kitta saha h phle venkatesh aur meera chale gye phr rishabh ka naa bol pana aur ab nandu
Coma mein chali gyi!!! Pta ni ayiappa aur kitte xams lnge uske
(sobbing)
vishwa: aap chinta naa kre amma manik hai na waha
hamare dono baccho ke sath
amms: haa vishwa manik hai tbhi toh mujhe chinta nahi nai
ushe ki wajah se aaj rishabh bol paa rha hai aur ab nandu bhi sahi ho jaega!!! M kitta glt smjti thi usko Aiyappa mujhe maaf kr dena
shanno: amma aap royiye mat aaj toh khushi ka din hai hmare rishe ke school ka phla din hai aaj!!!chaliye andar puja ko der ho rhi h... Nandu rishabh aur manik k liye
bhi puja krni h
scene 4
navya's house [2p.m]
(navya n cabir lives together n cabir will marry her in
future)
navya: matarani apki kripa se hmari zindagi bdal gyi h
aaj
hmari dusri album ki recording hai hme aashirwaad
dijiye
matarani talent hunt jeetne k baad hmari life bdal gyi hmari
phli album hit gyi amma ne hme maaf kr diya hmari beti neha ne hme phli baar maa bulaya bss
matarani nandu ko bhi theek kr dijiye kitti baate krni h hme usse
please matarani
scene 5
hospital,London [9.30a.m]
MANIK: Sorry sorry jaan aaj der ho gyi!! Pta h tmhara vry
own monster manik ceo of the year award k liye nominate
hua h aaj uska interview tha
chalo congraculate kro mujhe!!! Utho Nandini dkho m tmhare liye tmhare fvrt flowers n chocolate laya hoon
nandini pta h aaj rishu ke high school ka 1st day h aaj mujhe naa thoda kaam h shaam ko milta hoon bye
he kisses her forehead n leaves with teary eyes