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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter - 2
Evening!!8:00pm
London!!!MANAN paradise!!!
Manik and rishabh were sitting together!!!
manik: rishu!! How was your first day!! Frns bane tre!! Kisi
ne tujhe bully toh ni tra!! Koi ladki ke dil toh ni aa gya!! Bol
na rishu
Rishu: bhai bhai bhai!!! Aaram se aap itte saare qustns ek
sath puchoge toh main kaese bataunga!!!
1st day was awsomm bhai!! Bahot friends bane mere!kisi
ne bully bhi ni kara
pta hai bhai!! Jab dhruv bhaiya ne btaya tha ki main bhi bol
paunga toh didi ne kaha tha ki rishabh ab tujhe meri zarurat
ni padhegi aur dekho bhai aaj di mere sath nahi hai!!! How
badly I wanted to share my experiences with her!!!
manik eyes were full of tear bt he composes himself
manik: main hoon na rishu tere sath!! Aur tu chinta na kr!! Kl
rakhi hai na kl tu mere sath chalna nandini se milne!! Ab
chal ro ni!! Video game mein mujhe hara ke dikha!!!
manik and rishabh plays for sometime and after dinner both
retires towards their room!!!!
manik enters his room
and starts crying!!!
he sees a picof them and start talking to it!!!!
manik: nandini dekha na tumne rishu tumhe kitta miss karte
hai!! Aur aaj chacha chachi se bhi baat hui woh sab tumhe
bahot miss karte hai!!!
pls nandini wapas aa jao q tum esa kar rhi ho hm logo ke
sath bolo na
while talking he slowly drifted to slumber!!!
morning 07:00am
Hospital:
everybody was present their including fab4
nandini was taken to OT
after 5 hours!! Dr comes out, everybody rushes towards
him!!!
manik:how is she!!kaisi h meri nandini!!!
cabir: how is my sister dr.!!!!
rishabh:boliye na dr.uncle
manik:speakup god dammit!!! Why are you nt speaking
he grabs dr.s collar
cabir manages to stop him
dr.get a grip of yourself manik!!
cabir: m sorry dr. om behalf of him!! Bt aap btaiye woh kse
h!!
dr: m sory manik!! Nandini is no more!! Hum usse ni bacha
paye!!we tried our level best!!bt m sory!!!
everybody was numb they dnt knw how to react
the apple of their eye was no more bt the devasted one was
manik
he was sitting lifelessely on the chair!! When something
strikes in his mind!! He rushes towards OT n enters inside!!
What he saw was enough to boil his blood!! Nurses were
covering nandini with white cloth!!! and
and
and
hw wokes up with a jerk
he was sweating heavily
when suddenly his phn rings
caller id was cabir
cabir:manik kha hai tu!!hum kbse door bell baja rahe hai!!!
manik: what!!
cabir!! What what what!! We are outside your house!!open
the door manik: wait! M coming
manik opens the door and welcomes fab4
manik: (shocked) u all here!! Achanak!!sb thk h
dhruv: yeah!! Buddy everything is fine!!hum yaha tre aur
nandini ke liye aye hai!or tera b-day week kaise nehi ate
n they had a group hug
alya: manik i knw its not the rgt tym!!bt m so sorry for past
things!! manik: its ok alya!!that was past!!forget it!!!guys
tumlog rest kar lo!!tb tk m aur rishabh hospital ho ke aate
hai!!!
cabir:okahe!!
manik asks his butler to show them their rooms n asks for
preparing breakfst for them
all retires towards their room
manik's room
manik was sitting on bed with his head on headboard
his eyes are close
bt smiles as soon as he listens his favroite voice@...his
nandini
manik: nandini tumhe pta h maine abhi kya dream
dekha!!! Nandini tum mujhe chor ke toh ni jaogi naa!!! he
asks like a 2yr baby
nandini:manik m hamesha tumhare sath rahungi!!! Close
your eyes manik!!you need some rest!! manik adjusts
himself in her lapwhile she ruffles his hair!! manik:nandini
wapas aa jao naa!!m tumhare bina ab ni reh skta!!M
INCOMPLETE WITHOUT YOU!!Nandini ke bina manik adhura
hai!! he closes his eyes
Nandini please sing for me na...
Tum bin kya hai jeena, kya hai jeena Tum bin kya hai jeena
Tum bin jiya jaaye kaise Kaise jiya jaaye tum bin Sadiyon
se lambi hain raatein Sadiyon se lambe hue din Aa jaao
lautkar tum, yeh dil keh raha hai
n past memories flashes in fromnt of his eyes
...
(their fights,punch moment,accidental kiss,spot days,first
shower,mud fight,diwali kiss,musicana night,their first lip
lock,their 1st breakup)
Phir shaam-e-tanhaai jaagi Phir yaad tum aa rahe ho Phir
jaan nikalne lagi hai Phir mujhko tadpaa rahe ho Phir
mujhko tadpaa rahe ho Is dil mein yaadon ke mele hain
Tum bin bahut hum akele hain Aa jaao lautkar tum, yeh dil
keh raha hai.
(,jungle scene,manaofy
session,hospital scene,nandini's jealusy towards
soha,farmhouse romance,first date,storeroom fire
incident,courtroom scene,manik's hatred,)
Kya kya na socha tha maine Kya kya na sapne sajaaye Kya
kya na chaaha tha dil ne Kya kya na armaan jagaaye Kya
kya na armaan jagaaye Is dil se toofaan guzarte hai Tum
bin to jeete na marte hai Aa jaao lautkar tum, yeh dil keh
raha hai...
(holi
scenes,manik's jealousy towards pandit,confession ngt )
Tum bin jiya jaaye kaise Kaise jiya jaaye tum bin Sadiyon
se lambi hain raatein Sadiyon se lambe hue din Aa jaao
lautkar tum, yeh dil keh raha hai...
(nandini's kidnapping,her bday moments,their first intimate
night,evryday romance,and finally their love making
night,and then blasts scene)
with this he wakes up with a jerk
he looks around and found no one!!!
meanwhile rishabh arrives and asks him to get ready as they
have to leave for hospital
hospital
manik:morning!!sunshine!!dekho aaj tumse milne kon aaya
hai
rishu: hy di!!kse ho aap!! Pta hai aapko aaj rakhi!! Chlo jaldi
uth ke mere bandho!!
manik:come rishu i'll tie it on behalf of her
he ties the rakhi n asks rishabh to tie rakhi on nandini's
hand also
meanwhile chacha chachi and amms were on video
conferencing
chachi: ksi h meri nandy!!tujhe pta hai!!iss naye ghar mein
maine tra room bilkul phle jse decorate kiya hai!! Aur pta
hai!!main na SHAH RUKH KHAN se bhi mili aur tere liye bhi
autograph liya!! Haa pta h pta h tere paas tra shah rukh
khan hai!!!
chach: nandu tu jldi india aa na!!m akele teri chachi ke hath
ka khana kha k bore ho chuka hoon!!koi company dene
wala ni h!!
amms: kanna kaise hai tu!! Haa haa mujhe pta hai acchi he
hogi!!manik jo hai tra khayal rakhne k liye!! manik:yeh kya
chacha chachi nandini ko dekh ke aaplog mujhe aur rishu
ko bhul gye chachi:arre ni mere sone munde!! Waise manik
happy bday!!
all three of them wishes him
rishabh:chachi pta mera school bahot acha hai!! Aur ere
dost bhi bahot saare bane!! Aur manik bhai mera bahot
khayal rakhte after some more chatting they
disconnected the call
malhotra heights!!
manik was sitting in his cabin!! Thinking abt soething
actually he was thinking about that dream
he was not showing but he was very much scared
what if something happens to her
as uska half dream sach ho chuka hai fab 4 london aa gye
h n what if pura sach ho gya toh!!!
meanwhile
in hospital:dr was talking to mr.malhotra
dr: mr.malhotra sirf aapke kehne pe hum nandini ka
treatment kar rahe hai warna woh ab sahi nahi ho sakti!!
mr: dr.m smj sakta hoon lekin aap jante hain naa manik
jeete jee mar jaega!!pls aap uska treatment continue rkhye
dr: i knw mr.malhotra isliye main aaj uska ek operaton
karunga!!if she will respond toh kuch chances hai!!
Warna... they hang up the call!!!
In india
mr.malhotr was thinking
agr nandini ko kuch ho gaya toh manik bhi mar jaega!!
nyonika main tumhe kbhi maaf ni karunga!! Tumhari wajah
se aaj woh nandini lifeless hospital mein hai aur manik woh
bhi ussi din mar gya
Evening!!
London!!!
everybody are in hospital!!!
nandini ka operation ho raha hota hai!!
after 2 hours
dr.comes!!!
everybody rushes towards him while manik was taking
small steps coz his dream was turning into reality bt least
he knows is ki its this bday will be his biggest nightmare!!!!
cabir: how was the operation!! Is she regain conscious!!
dr:m sory manik bt she...
again a suspense ending!!!
but guys grab your tissues coz next part is gonna be very
emotional
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
nice update...waiting fr the next part
so plz don't make us wait fr long time
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
nice update dea...
continue soonnn
tnx fr d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
nice update
loved the rishu n manik convo
fab4 had reached to there friend

hpe for best
tht is gng to fine
continue soon
thnks for pm
keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
nice update
cont soon
thanks for pm :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Lovely updatee .. .
Emotional too...
Plzz do everythng achaa achaa..
Updatee sooon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Hey
Look I have
Request
Please don't make
Manik nightmare
True
Plzzz don't separate
Them😭😭😭
Plzzz I can't see them
like this
Plzzz don't make them
Separate
Continue soon
Love
Diya😛😛😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Nice update
emotional too
suspense ???????????
Update soon
eagerly waiting for your next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Nice update
Please post the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
No no no pls don't kill nandini pls usse manik ke pass wapas laa do

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