Manan ss Tu Chahiye! Part 13 pg 80 updated 18/9

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rituparna

@mananpanirocks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

ur writing is so beautiful...i can even the sadness that nadini was going through...
atlast manik realized...but nandini shouldnt forgive him easily...since its a ff...there 'll be a happy ending...if i would have been in place of nandini...never would i ever forgive him for this!!!i just loved it...keep writing and update...soon😛😛😛

loads of love,
rituparna

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shwetparth143

@shwetparth143

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

superb yaar...nice update,,,love it plsss nandini ko jaldi se recover karke pls show us some manan moments

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@dreamy_doll15

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#63

itsss just nice yar..
finally realisation stuck..
love it..
fab ..

update soon
waiting

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sunset17

@sunset17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Heart touching...hope nandini recovers soon...

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suraiya77

@suraiya77

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Awesome..
At last he realized when it's too late..

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Mamiza

@kitkat5756

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Hey sweety really loved ur story .. Just red ur story in one go please do continue writing please... U portrait nandu very well ... Manik is being so rude to her atleast for humanity he could have atleast talk to her politely ..atleast now he realized his mistake but nandu shouldn't forgive him easily he have to work hard fr winning her trust .. Don't make nandu weak ...make her strong ... Nandu will be alright
Make manik work hard to gain her forgiveness and trust ...it was just a suggestion .. U can portrait ur story the way u like ... Tc... Please do update today .. Would love to read the next part ... Tc