Manan ss Tu Chahiye! Part 13 pg 80 updated 18/9

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<font size="5">Here's a new story for you all. Have a look an</font><font size="4">d comment how it is. Love you all!!
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<font size="4">Index</font>
<font size="5">Prologue- below</font>
<font size="5">Part1- pg3</font>
<font size="5">Part2 - pg5</font>
<font size="5">Part3 - pg9</font>
<font size="5">Part4 - pg 13</font>
<font size="5">Part5 -pg 17</font>
<font size="5">Part 6- pg 20</font>
<font size="5">Part 7 - pg 23</font>
<font size="5">Part8 - pg 30</font>
<font size="5">Part9 - pg 38</font>
<font size="5">Part10-pg 52</font>
<font size="5">Part 11- pg 58</font>
<font size="5">Part 12 A/B -pg 67</font>
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Part 13 - pg 80
size="5">Prologue</font>

<font size="5">Manik entered his room and found Nandini sleeping with her head down on the table. He went thereand picked her up and laid her on the right side of the bed. He noticed dry tears on her cheeks and also a diary kept on the table. He picked it up and being least interested to read it he kept it beside Nandini and slept on the left side. Next morning he got up and did not found Nandini beside him and as a matter of fact he did not even wanted to find her. He got up and freshened up and after having breakfast went to office. Meanwhile Nandini was walking on a busy road amidst her thoughts.</font>
<font size="5">Nandini's pov</font>
<font size="5">After yesterday's incident I don't know what should I do.</font>
<font size="5">end of her pov</font>
<font size="5">While she was thinking all this she came to the middle of the road and was knocked down by a speeding car.</font>
<font size="5">Hospital</font>
<font size="5">Cabir was pacing in front of the OT.</font>
<font size="5">He called up Manik and said "Manik jaldi aa Nandini ka accident ho gaya hai"</font>
<font size="5">Manik replied in a carefree tone " abhi meri meetings lined up hai main raat ta aata hun" and before Cabir could say anything he cut the call.</font>
<font size="5">At night Manik came to the hospital and saw Cabir sitting in front of OT.</font>
<font size="5">He came to him and kept his hand at his shoulder. Cabir jerked it away.</font>
<font size="5">Manik said " Buddy kya hua?"</font>
<font size="5">Cabir did not say anything.</font>
<font size="5">Manik again asked it in a little higher pitch. Cabir then said " Chilla mat Manik!! I don't know what is your problem?? Maanta hoon ki teri shaadi teri marzi se nahi hui but phir bhi teen mahine se tumlog saath ho phir bhi tu uski thodi si bhi care nahi karta aur vo tujhe itna pyaar karti hai. Main to hairan hoon kaise kal ke incident ke baad bhi vo tujhe itna pyaar kar sakti hai."</font>
<font size="5">Manik replied" Tujhe pata haina ki Jenny aur main ek dusre se pyaar karte hain to phir"</font>
<font size="5">Cabir yelled " Kaisa human hai tu. Itne time Nandini ke saath rekar bhi tu use chah nahi paaya. Itni pyaari hai vo main to usseitna kam milta tha phir bhi main usse apni behen jaisa pyaar karta hoon aur haan ye jo tera misconception haina that You and Jenny love each other main usse kal hi door karta hoon."</font>
<font size="5">Manik " Agar tu ye provebhi karde ki Jenny mujhse pyaar nahi karti to tu yeh kaise prove karega ki Nandini mujhse pyaar karti hai."</font>
<font size="5">Cabir said " Theek hai pehle mujhe Jenny ko galat prove karne de phir maib tujhe bataunga. Chod main tujhe abhi bata hoon. To sun apni cupboard kholna and Nandini ke section ko ache se search karna wahan tujhe uski personal diary milegi and usme koi bhi aisa page nahi hoga jisme usne ye nahi likha hoga that 'I love him enough to let him go'</font>
<font size="5">End</font>
<font size="5">If I get good reviews I will update a new part today pakka promise!!!</font>




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yaaa...
quite nice update ...
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Plz... do post 2dae only.. i dont know abt review.. bt.. the stry is perfect... plz 2 post... i loved it... plz.. for me.. nd may be silent readers... ty... plz do post.. waitng for it... luved it... 😊
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Hey its really nice strt.. 👏
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looks interesting...do cont soon and plz pm me
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Byc prolouge...post chappy 1 soon
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Nice concept !!!! Really very interesting !!! Plz update the first chapter today !!!!
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interesting prologue
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Amazing update...
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