Manan SS'Two Hearts'beat as one part 6 update pg 49 28/5/16 - Page 15

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oye Afghani jalebi where r u ??
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Poor Nandini feeling rejected
Hope Manik suffers the same as Nandini

I tried to understand your poem but I am sorry I couldn't
My hindi is very bad

How many parts have you planned because it said it's a OS
Is it a ss or ff?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chair1992

Poor Nandini feeling rejected

Hope Manik suffers the same as Nandini

I tried to understand your poem but I am sorry I couldn't
My hindi is very bad

How many parts have you planned because it said it's a OS
Is it a ss or ff?


may b three or four more but plzz dear like it also
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Posted: 10 years ago
luv ur this part.post nxt .n so tumhare story me bhi dhruv yeda hi hai use topi pehanado thodi akal ayegi ..i mean seriously manage kar lena..lol..but dont like it wen manik said ki l ll marry alia..nooo..
post nxt part n ye dhamaki hai manik nandu ko mila do cant accept tht fact manik wed alia.
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Originally posted by: sonali_ace

luv ur this part.post nxt .n so tumhare story me bhi dhruv yeda hi hai use topi pehanado thodi akal ayegi ..i mean seriously manage kar lena..lol..but dont like it wen manik said ki l ll marry alia..nooo..

post nxt part n ye dhamaki hai manik nandu ko mila do cant accept tht fact manik wed alia.



go n read part one usme un dono ko shadi karwadi maine
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Posted: 10 years ago
Read all parts in one go
I just love it
But please don't make us wait for along
Please please please update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally I commented
Sorry sorry for late comment

Abt update
Its awesome update
Nandu is stubborn she said shadi toh meri Tu se he ho GI hehehe
Y not manik agree
Or Kia kiya alya Na

Abt ur poem
Paari I love ur poetry the depth in it Na its amazing
N u used Urdu usually that I loved the most
Every word of ur poem


Love u so much 🤗
Anum ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anum_6

Finally I commented
Sorry sorry for late comment

Abt update
Its awesome update
Nandu is stubborn she said shadi toh meri Tu se he ho GI hehehe
Y not manik agree
Or Kia kiya alya Na

Abt ur poem
Paari I love ur poetry the depth in it Na its amazing
N u used Urdu usually that I loved the most
Every word of ur poem


Love u so much 🤗
Anum ❤️



yes coz I love Urdu our mother tounge but I love u also..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey...dis part waz awsum...
I m loving da way how da story z proceeding..
So nandini here z madly in love wid manik..
Somewhere down da line manik also has a soft corner
For her...lets c wen n how he will realize..
As da story z goin in flashback...I m actually eagerly waiting
Wen uh will come up wid da present track ...
Bdw dis part wz truly entertaining...👏..
Continue soon..😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow it so good ts, luv reading it

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