Manan SS'Two Hearts'beat as one part 6 update pg 49 28/5/16

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parthadmirer

@parthadmirer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#131

Amazing update...

nandini loves manik very much..

she is crazy for manik..

but manik dont love her and neither wanna marry her..

though he does not love aliya too..

but wants to marry her..😲

and dhruv...😲

tne sare pair of shoes...😲

very well done...👏

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pinky

@kimnana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#132

NICE POETRY ...MANIK IS TAKING NANDU FOR GRANTED ...The more often we see the things around us - even the beautiful and wonderful things - the more they become invisible to us. That is why we often take for granted the beauty of this world: even those we love because we see things so often, we see them less and less...thanx for pm ...n continue soon
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Jyoti

@bhagupur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#133

First of all your poetry is awesome😛👏. Storyline is very different and refreshing. ..keep it up. ..write more and more. ..Thanks for update.⭐️

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Absa hasna

@Hasi-Pani1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#134

omg!!omg!!omg!! such a lovely story...jus now i read all part in1 go...i jus loved it all 3 part..
u penned it so well dea...
tnks for the wonderful story...
its jus WOW..m totally in love with ur ff...ur such an amazing writer...
plsss update soon as possible...desperately waiting for ur next udate
keep writing

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..paarsaa..

@..paarsaa..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: Natashaaa
knock knock koiii h

ha hai bol
n Congo for becoming dazzler

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AAVANI

@vani86

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Posted: 10 years ago

#136

part 3 was awesome dear...loved it..and ur poetry was beautiful
continue soon
thanks a lot for the pm take care

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..paarsaa..

@..paarsaa..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: anglemanan
Hey paarsaa I just want to tellu that it this story its amazing
u r an amazing writer u portrayed different character of nandini in enchanted she is shy n in thus she is bold I just loved it
thanks for continuing it

thanks for liking it so much...

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soothu

@soothu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#138

nandu is so diffrent...😛 i like it,,,,,,,,,,,,manik dont lovee alya...phirbe he want 2 marry alya,,,,,,,,,,oh god...i love d druvs entry,,,,,,,,,ur poetry,,,,,carry on dear.its amazing