Manan SS'Two Hearts'beat as one part 6 update pg 49 28/5/16 - Page 12

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Am I dancing heheh yes I am 🥳
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okk guys everything is sorted now so here I am with my update n again I want tell u that plzz Barr my poetry agar pasand na bhi ho to I am starting this with my poetry
here is part 3

Ehsaas ki khushboo kahan,Awaaz k jugnu kahan

Khamosh yaadon k siwa ghar me rha kuch bhi nahi

Socha tujhe,dekha tujhe,chaha tujhe,poojaa tujhe

Meri wafa ,meri khataa Teri khataa kuch bhi nahi


Manik don't know what to answer so he remained silent, nandini knows what he gonna say next

Manik:Pari u know I love u lot but as a friend and nothing more...manik started calling her park from that day she started calling him monster...

Nandini: I know ...but u also know that I love u more than a friend and I can't leave without u ...and I can't b with someone else...u r everything to me how many times I have to tell u this??... marry me manik ..aliya is not good for u ...u know what she did??... she...nandini is about to say something when manik stop her

Manik:Stop it pari...just stop it ...apne pagalpan she bahar aaooo...aliya be kya kiya kya nhi issue mujhe koi dark nhi pasta ...one thing I know and I want u also know that I am going to engage with her and also marry her soon ...plzz pari wapas aajaaoo us raaste se ye pyaar ishq kuch nhi hota surf ek dhoka hai ...plzz pari don't make it hard for all of us...

Nandini: r u done with ur lecture??..ye San Jo tumne kaha ye San mere liye meri zindagi hai ..u r my love ,u r my life,u r my everything manik...plzz try to understand ..mai kisi or ko dhoka nhi de sakti plzz manik don't do it...
Manik: mai q tumse apna sar phod raha hoon ..manik said irretatedly.

Nandini: u to don't love her na intact u don't love anyone phir bhi u r getting married so y can't u marry me ?? mujhse achchi tumhe koi nhi milegi..she also said irritetedly..
on the other side of phone manik laugh ...he found its funny...
Nandini: Manik its not funny...said nandini angrily... this boy always taking me granted she said to herself..
Manik: it is funny ...funny for me u n me can't b together...now he was serious clear one thing in ur mind agar mai aliya se shadi na bhi karoon to wo San bhi kabhi nhi hoga Jo tum chahti ho...manik knew he was very harsh towards her but it is very important for him to do this he want her parish her friend back n for this he can to anything except to love her and marry her...
Nandini eyes full with tears but she control n asked him in fresh voice
Nandini: dekhna manik tumhari shadi surf mujhse hogi just wait n watch... anyways u r coming naa its bhai's birthday...manik didn't say anything n cut the call
Nandini : monster...kahi Ka samajhta hi nhi kuch
but nandini get ready its time for party ...she said to herself n came out from her room ...mukti n her mother is in the kitchen preparing dinner its just small party only his family n his two buddies manik n dhruv in it...she helping mukti in the decoration of hall when bell rang...mukti was about. to go when she stop her ...
Nandini mai dekhti hoon...she open the door n found dhruv standing there with six or seven box in his hands...breath nandu breath she muttered herself and gave dhruv a plastic smile...

Dhruv: hi nandini this is for u he really having tough time to stand there coz of heavy boxes he wanted to enter inside the house but...
Nandini: for me dhruv its Bhai' s birthday not mine now multi also came. there ...or isme hain kya??

Dhruv : arrey u said yesterday na ...my foot ..so I thought u wants new shoes.. that y I bring it ..noe multi had really tough time to control her laugh ...
Nandini : itne sare??


Dhruv: wo mujhe pata nhi tha tumhe kaun sa achcha lagega to Maine itne me aaya number7

Nandini: 7 multi k hain mera 6 hain
she said clenching her teeth..
Dhruv : an neeche kaun drkhta hain nandini manage kar Lena ...dhruv said innocently n nadini glared him...suddenly they heated a voice in which nandini founds her peace.

Manik: hey buddy u already here ..asked manik coming close to them

okk here is part 3 I didn't know what I write ...this is on the request off my friend tishaa
do like n comment n ignore mistake

Love paarsaa
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Awww love u so much Paarsaa and u knw what ... I really really love ur poetry. Keep writing gal
And thank ya so much for updating ... Really means a lot to me :)) I love ur story Nd the plots you think
Wohoo u r back :D
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Originally posted by: Tishyy

Awww love u so much Paarsaa and u knw what ... I really really love ur poetry. Keep writing gal
And thank ya so much for updating ... Really means a lot to me :)) I love ur story Nd the plots you think
Wohoo u r back :D



comment on enchanted also u know naa...
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its nyc one but m shocked to see nandu lyk dis ...she is totally opposite from real one...she is too stubborn ...exactly like our manikkk ...hope manik will realise soon his feelings 4 her...love u muahhh update soon
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Nice part . Continue soon.
Thanks for PM.

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I check u check urs
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this was nice i mean i like nandu... n how she was sayng manik k shadi to mere sath hi ho gi hahahah tht was vry nice... keep posted waitng for nxt
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Originally posted by: paarsaa



I check u check urs

check again 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
nandu was too stuborn
manik wa iirtating by her friend
the way dhruv was too cute
bt nandu was irrtating by his good nanture towards her
continue soon
keep writing
stay blessed

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