manan ff: holds the key to my heart?? part 12 page 70 (19th march 2016 - Page 22

Originally posted by: ruchi116

Nice update

Originally posted by: mini_manan

Fantastic...
Amazing...
KYA KHAKE PAIDA KIYA HE TUJHA- KAASH MUJHA PATA HOTA.. 😆 😆 my fav part...
Loved it.
Cont soon.
Love..mini

Originally posted by: Riyamm

nice update dear
waiting for next part

Originally posted by: aavani

awesome yaar
loved it a lot...manan scenes ..awww...manik again lost...ha ha ha
fab4 was so funny...
and fab5 impression infront of nandini...😆

eagerly waiting to read more...
u penned so beautifully yaar...especially dialogues...good work dear
continue soon
thanks a lot for the pm
take care
stay blessed..

Originally posted by: yashu_varshney

Very nice update..

Thanks for the pm..

Keep writing..

Stay blessed..

Take care..:)

Originally posted by: thamannamanan

rofl

so funny

kya khaake paida kiya tha tujhe ??

everything went wrong for manik

navya then shahid

pehle sehi image ithni kharaab hai ab tho kuch bacha hi nahi

manik ab kyaa karegaa???????????/

Originally posted by: kitkat5756

Thanks for the pm meri jaan ... Update was awesome ... Superb ..full on tashan ... Sad to see manik's broken condition but when he was his lady love his face lit up instantly .. Fab-5 and their pranks totally made for each other ... But due their pranks our manan come close to each other and nandu kissed manik for the first time so sweet... Navya ne fab-5 ka bhanda Phor dia and nandu again got angry with manik ...then shahid's suicide attempt make nandu more angry...manik ko bohot papar bel na parega nandu ko manane ki liye ... Fab-5 kya karenge for their mnik's love life easy ...hoping for the best... Awesome update meri jaan I was just a mere silent reader but from now on will try to give my comments as token of appreciation thanks a lot for pm and update ...loving ur story ...tc sweetheart...with lots of love and hugs

Originally posted by: HTA111

Awesome update

Manik you are so dead as Nandu already misunderstood him and now all this drama in college how will manik prove his innocence in front of her

Continue soon and thanks for pm

Originally posted by: ArishaKhan

its awesome loved it plzz continue soon

Originally posted by: nikki.smiley95

hahhahaaa...it was awesome yrrr...manik ki izzat ka to faluda ban gya yrrr😆😉

ab kya hoga tera manik😉😃