manan ff: holds the key to my heart?? part 12 page 70 (19th march 2016 - Page 24

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Posted: 9 years ago


DONT COPPY MY FF ITS A REQUEST😊


Part 8

Nandini give them deadly looks...manik was looking at her n then fab 5 and then at the sky helplessly...how can god be so cruel on him...how...nandini give them disgusting look..and went from there...with shadi and nandini...fab 5 follow them...nanvi and shadi dissapeard...fab 5 is still searching for them...nanvi was sitting in a empty class room...

na-tumhe pta hai nandini...hmne suna tha ki..ki yaha ake sabke sapne pure ho jate hai...or ye har koi ana chahta h ..ek dream place h ...

n-mera bas chlta to mi yaha bilkul nh ati...she lost in her thoughts...

flashback...

a girl-dont this to me..y r u doing this...nooo...u have to pay for ur sins...today...its a promise to me...

a boy-lets c...who will win...a rich brat or a comner...

g-ye comner kya kr skti h ..tumhe koi idea b nhi h ...

she rush towards airport...

reception-m sory mam..due to bad weather...all the flights are cancelled...

g-what??

Nandini nandi..nandini come out from the thoughts...when navya shake her badly...

Na-kya hua tumhe..y r u sweating

Yes nandu was sweating thinking of something-kuch nhi clearing her sweat...

Na-tumne ye q kaha tum nhi ana chahti..to tum yaha ai q ho...

n-meri am ski waja se...she forced me to come here..

flashback

a-kanna...dekh tra letter aya hai..

ams come nandini's room-kanna tra leetr aya ..by giving her letter

n-mera lettr..

she opend the leetr..n sw a scholarship letter from SPACE academy, mumbai..as she have a good talent in classical singing...so they have offered her scholarship to join space academy..nandini throw he letter on bed in frustration ..

a-kya hua kanna...kiska letter hai...

n-vo space academy se hai ams...scholarship letter

a-wow kanna...mereko ko pata tha..tra talent ek din tjhe asman touch krwaega..

n=ams..but mi space academy nhi jari...she went n stand near window folding her hand on her chest...

a-but q...kanna...treko ek bht achhi apportunity mili hai..make use of it beta...

n turn-ams..maine kaha mi nhi jaungi to nahi jaungi..na apko chhod k na...she stop in between abt to take the orphanage name...

ams-but q..mere liy plss.kanna...bhool ja hua..us bt ko 2 saal ho gaye hai...u should move on...

n-i cnt ams..i cnt...never...bcoz that shows...how week I was...tears fall from her eyes...

ams-kanna..kab tk..kab tk..to use jeetne degi..tra aise backoff krna..uski jeet h kanna...too have tears in her eyes...

n-ams plss..i don't wanna talk abt it...

about to go when ams hold her hand-no today kanna..mein treko tre carrier se pichhe nhi jane dungi...

n-ams plss..(shout while crying)I don't wanna go to Mumbai...plss...apko pta h na..kya hua thaw aha..ap kaise bhej skte ho mujhe waha..kaise ams...

ams-kanna...mein janti hu..jo hua vo thk nahi tha...but tu positive soch na...jaise pehle sochti ti..us incident ne tjhe kitna strong bna dia...ki ab tu dubara ...(the words got stuck in her mouth...tears was continuously flowing)

n-kya hua ams..words nhi mill rhe...jo ap bol b nhi skte na...vo hua h mere sath...then how can u let me go there...in that hell...

ams-kanna...jab tk us cheej se baghegi..vo br br tre samne aegi...pehle Mumbai k bache ko training k ai..ab ye letter...mumbai academy ka...kanna...give urself a chance..to prove urself..that u r not scared anyone(shaking her from her ams) tum waha jaoge..or jo tumhare samne aega..tum use takraogi..na ki darogi...

n-nhi ams...mere mi itni itni himmat nhi h ..pehle jb gai..to I lost...(words chok in her mouth...) agr ab apko ya...mere bache...

n was shoked she told about kids...what will ams think

ams-tre bacho ka dhyan mein rakhungi...

n(shoked ams know abt them)-ams apko...

ams-ha kanna..mujhe sab pata hai..or maine tjhe isliy nhi roka..qki tjhe waha jana jaruri tha...ab bht ho gai punishment kanna..live ur life...fully...

n-nhi ams..mein unhe chhod k..

ams-kanna..i promise...i will take of them..unhe mein yahi gurukul mein le aungi..or koi adoption nhi hoga...i promise...

n-ams but...

ams-tjhe meri kasam...plsss..is br Mumbai ko face kr...bol de...nandini murthy is back.,,,..

both hug each other n cry

n-ok..ams mein jaungi...us hell mein...to find myself...

flashback ends...

na-are ab fon p kya lage tum to fr gayab ho gai kahi...

n-mein yaha apani ams ..dadi..unke force krne p ai hu...i think we should go now..its time..or mujhe ghr jana h m really tired...

na-ha chlo..hm b hostel chlte h ..

dey walk out from class...when someone was peeping from pillar...who heard deir convo..thats manic...

m-uski akho mein asu the...y was she crying...or vo kaha khoi hui ti..aisa kya hua h ..jo ams ne ise...force krke bheja..verna ye kabhi ati nahi...isne aise q kaha...ufff soo much of thought process manic...rubbing his face for relaxing...she is such a mystry girl...but...(smerk) I like mysteries..so ms..nandini murthy...ready ho jao...jitna maine jana h ..tum ye ho nhi..jo dikha rahi ho sabko..sooo..ready to find urself...by manic malhotra...he called everyone...guyzz...vo ghr jari h m following her...packing area mein milo...

c-now what is he upto...

mu- don't no...kya chahta h ...achhe khase fab 5 ki image ka bharta bana dia isne

d-lets go guyz...he must b waiting..vo hi bta skte h kya krna h ..

fab 4 meet manic and they all sit in car and start their journey...

c-q bulaya...

manic didn't said anything just smiling...

mu-bolega..whats going on in ur mind...

navni side

n-tum hostel mi rahti hoo..tum mere sath mere ghr q nhi chlti...mein waise b akeli rahti hu...

na-akeli??...kaha rahti hoo...

n-are mere ams jb yaha ewk music school mein music sikhati ti jb mein bht chhoti ti...jb unhone ye ghr lia tha..mein wahi rahti hu...akeli rahungi..isse achha hm dono sath rahte hai whats say...frnds h hm dono bht masti krenge

na-okk done...hm apna luggage hostel se le ate hai fr

okk they move towards hostel

manic look at all n then indicate them to something...yes he indicated nandini whom he was following from last 5 mints...when she was going home with navya and nandini..

c-what the...tu pgl h ..tu follow kr ra h in ladkio ko..manik dekh...we all love u ..but agr in logo ne complaint kr di..to...(took a pause) mujhe jail nhi jana yr...plss..ghr chl...

m-no guyzz..i have a plan...aliya...ladkio ko jo b cheeje pasnd hoti h ...which make a girl smile..flowers..gifts..chocolates.kuch b ..sab kuch order kro...hm unhone kuch der mein ek address denge waha pahuchana hai sab...

mu-ohh.ab smjhi..impress krne ki koshish...

m-yes...shuruwat wahi se krti h sab uske ghr deliver krwa k...

c-kya bt h ..tre charan kaha h ...aa chhu lu...

all laugh aliya make order ..

in another half n hour dey reach muthy's house...nanvi unloaded navya's luggage..(guyzz let me tell u ..they navya and nandini just started their cource in clg so they didn't unpack their pack...properly...so that y they reach early...:P)

m-to ms.murthy yaha rahti h...aliya...address dede or saman yaha mangwa lo...

dey all sit in car in some distance when navni entre the house...

n-navya...ye h mera ghr ..mgr ab hmara h ...tum upar jao...right side mein mera room n or left side wala tum lelo...frh ho jao..jb tk mein kuch khane k liy order krti hu..ghr mein kuch h nhi shopping jana padega ..vo bd mi jaenge...okk

na-ok..hm abhi ai...

nandini ordered some food...n relaxing on couch in lobby...

fab 5

a boy"sir apne saman mangwaya tha...

m-ya..manik payed him..n took the things..there were lots of chocolates...10 to 15 bouques, heart shade pillow...lot of smilies...cartoon smiliess...a big card of keep smiling...ja cabir ye rkh k aa uske door k samne...

cabir get 440wt shok-what...mwin..nhi nhi..mi nhi jaungi...mu, a, d laugh silently..-ye to gaya

m-q ..q nhi jaega..

c-tjhe patana hai na ladki ko..to tu ja...

m-are yr..mera impression khrb hai na...uske samne..usne mujhe dekh lia to...

c-haa ye sab tre hi muh p mar degi..but mi q...

m-are..m3era dos h na..tu mera bhai...

c-dekh manic..tu chahta h mi apni life se hath dho baitho to yr waise hi bata de..tu mujhe kutte ki moot marwana chahta h ..

m-are kuch nhi hoga..tjhe bs ye waha rkhna h..bell bajani or bhag ana h ..tjje samne nhi ana uske..

c-haa or agr use pta lag gaya ki ye meri harkat hai..to kal newspaper mein.mera naam hoga RIP k sath h na...

m-are yr..mere liy itna nhi kr skta...

and the emotional blackmail start...

c-thk h thk h..jata h ..but ye krne k ...bd mjhe party chaiy..ki finally u in love...:P

m-done...

cabir took all the things kept in front of nandini's house...ring the bell 2 times...n rush like a maniac..towards car and they all hide n see what will nandini do...

nandini heard the ring-are itni jaldi khana agya..she went n open the door...was shoked seing all such things on her door...all the bad memories started coming in her mind ..hi my love...this is for u..tumhe chocolate pasnd h na..tum chocolate se b meethi hoo...i love u...tears started following from her eyes..fab 5 was keenly noticing her..manik heart was shrinking seeing tears in her eyes...

n-navya..she shouted ...fab 5 got worried...nanya came running...

na-ky hua...

n-ye sab tumhara hai...

na-hmara..hm to yah kisi ko jante b nhi...hmara kaise...she pick up the card...aree ye to tumahra h tumhara naam likha hai...

n took card from her..n saw...shoked like anything..she become hell angry...she throw the card outside..took everything..navya was shoked and fab 5 too what is she doing..she kept itnear a tree...go inside the housee..bring match box..n burnt everything...tears was continuously flowing...navya came running to nandini ...fab 5 was hell shoked..

a-ye itni cute cheeje jala kaise skti h...

c-manik jaldi chl..verna yaha ye tjhe in sab k sath jala degi...

manic was shoked beyond...

na-nandini ye kya kr ri hoo..q jalay...

nandini clear her tears-chlo andr...she turn n saw a car behing the tree...was shoked to see..manik there...she become hell angry...she went towards the car fab 5 saw her coming

mu-manik jaldi chl..vo ari h

c-aj tomar gaye...is majnu k chakkar mein...

m-yr car nhi start hori

c-lo bolo..ram naam satya hoo...

look like even car don't want them to go before nandu scold them..nandu reach near his car

n-come out...

dey all gulp...n come out of car..navya shoked to see them there...

n-tum log yaha kya kr rhe h..

m-vo..mi...hum

n-ek mint..ye sab gifts tum logo ne rkhe the...

a(being stupid)-haa...just to say sory...

manic and everyone hide their face twith their palm-lo ho gaya kam

n-what the hell...tum logo ksam khai h kya..ki chain se rahne nhi doge yaha (litrally shouting on them)

m-nandini...

n-dont u dare to take my name from ur mouth ...

m-are magr meri bt to suno...

n-q sunu...ha..q...or nhi suna to...kya kroge..bolo..push him back ...again n again..bolo na..kya bolo ko..apne repo ka faida uthaoge...bolo...

m-listen...nandini stop it...

nandu still pushing him back...

n-y..y should i...tum log jo chah kro...or mi kuch bol b nhi skti.u spoil brats...kisi ki feelings ki kadar hi nahi h..tumhari waja ek ladka marne jata hai..ek ladki apne dreamz ko pura hone se darti h ..koi rota h koi chillata hai..but tum logo ko farak nahi padhta..bht ameer log ho na...rich ..reputed..isliy u guyzz can do anything/...but mr..manik malhotra...mere sath ye sba nhi chlega...do u get that,...stay away from me and my life...(iving deadly glare to manik)

she turn to go..when manic hold her hand..

c(slowly) lagta hai...manik aj sch mein gaya...

mu-koi to rook use...

c-ja..tu ja..de sherni k muh mi hath..m not in...

meanwhile nandu turn see his hand holding her...get hell angry...slap him hard again...-how dare u to touch me...himmat kaise hue..tumhari...mr manic maholtra..aj touch kr dia..aj k bad kia..to nandini murthy kya kr skti h ..tumjate nhi ho...manik leav her handn hold his cheek...fab 4 and navya their eyes was coming out of socket...

fab 4 -again...

navya hold her mouth with her palm with her shoking eyes...nandini come towards her..n navni without giving them glare went inside the house...

fab 4 goto manic

c-kha lia...ab chle...

mu-manik q pange lera h use...jane de...tjhe to or b ladkia mill jaengi..tu ab iske samne nhi aega...

d-ha buddy..tu isse dur rahega

c-i agree...she is not at all good for u..usne tjhe 3 br thappad mara h ...

a-i agree too...

they all r hell angry on nandu..but manic was shoked due to her behaviour..y she always react like this...when someone come close to her..touch her...or say some good things abt her...or do so much to give her a smile...

precap- fab 4 hell angry on nandini wanna take revenge from her for slapping manic 3 tiiimes...and manan become partners...hiding from fab 4 and navya

dont coppy the ff plsss...its a request

thnx alot guyz for appriciating my ff so much..m loving that u all r liking my ffs sooo much

thnx for that...m really happy to see the response from u alll...and one more thing guyzz..actually i got the job..m joining from monday...so i will b able to update on sunday's only...or aftr 5 or 10 days..hope u guyzz will understand and still show ur intrst towards my ff

do read it like the update and give bada wala feedback coz i like it lol...

anyone want pm do send me buddy request...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Yaar parts me aise shock naa diya kro ek din padhte padhte marr jaaungi...
sorry but this part is good as only emotions are there which always reacted me 😔
but i love the precape as u say Manan will be partners then i surely wait for that update as soon as possible 😉 😊
tc ty for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi,i'm a new reader of ur story...
bt i like it as soon as i read its 1st part...
its a interesting story...n unique too...
majnu manik is very cute...
ty fr pm,,n cont soon with next part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Manik is tryng to impress nandu
But y is she behavng like that wat happend in her past hope u reveal her past soonnn
Manik again gotva slap
Continue sooonn
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
now we can somewhat makeout the reason behind her harsh behaviour...

i really wanna know how manik handles her now

cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fab update dea. ...
Continue soonnn
Tnx fr d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Such a
Nice update
Continue soon
And thanks for pm
Love
Diya😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow!!! LOVELY update... i jus loved it...tnqu sooo muchh for such a wonderful story...u penned it soo nicely...must say that u blessed with ur writing skill..hats off dea
again nandu ne manik ko thappad maara...hahahaha..but nandu ka past kya hai? aise kya hua hai past jo itni nafrat karthi hai mumbai se...m curious to know the past...plss i don want to read rape scene...plsss dont write rape scene..n update soon...waiting for ur update
keep writing..TC

LOADS OF LOVE
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Posted: 9 years ago
Its nyc... bt y nand behavs lyk dis yr ...plz disclse hr pst jldii
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Posted: 9 years ago
Interestng
mystery
precap so awesome
waiting for nxt parts
thanks fr such long part
intrstng story
u write so well
tc

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