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Posted: 10 years ago
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i can't stop myself to write this




"everything is over " he said as he heard her foot steps behind him

"Manik what are you saying ? and why you called me up here " she asked him and tired to hold his hand , he pull it away

" No Nandini , today they all blamed me that i was so busy in my love life that i didn't had time for them , my family " he took a step back , Nandini in shock look at him she took a step ahead as she saw tears running down his cheeks

" you were right we are not mend to be together " he said and turn around as he didn't had courage to look at him , she freeze at the spot . she look around at the sky it was cloudy any minute it will start raining , even in open air she felt suffocated , she walked ahead without touching him , she warp her arms around herself , she closed her eyes as if she could feel him hold her in his tight embrace ,she stand for a minute without saying a word she walk away

Manik composed himself and turn


"Nandini " that place was empty " she too left me " he look at the sky and kneel down on the floor he saw a same Ipod he picked it up and start listening it all Fab 5 songs , "Nandini you brought this for me " he cried



"Cabir " Nandini finds Cabir in music room playing his drum he was taking out his all frustration there . he look at her

"Manik " he asked her and finds tears in her eyes

" did he said something to you?" he asked her she held his hand and passed him a lunch box

"forget it i will sort that out , you take this and be with him " she said and tried to smile

"Nandini how you do this ?" he asked her

"Manik needs you i will talk to you on this later go " she took his sticks and gave him box she hurried walked out bang with Mukti "Manik is up there on the roof go be with him dont leave him alone" she said and without waiting she walked away



" Manik we are mend to be together , to bring you all back together again is now aim of my life , you will have you family back Manik " she saw Nyonika who was talking to the radio owner , she walked ahead with out waiting she walked in Nyonika cabin ,as she see off owner she walked back

" what why you are here ?" Nyonika asked her

" do you know what is happening in your son's life " she said and without waiting she walked out

" what is happening ?" Nyonika walked out behind her she heard gossips

" have you heard Fab 5 no more on friendship day they have broken their friendship bond " students said to each other


"FAB 5 no more this is not possible , as for SPACE Fab 5 is must " she at once text all the members of Fab 5



" Nyonika Mama will make sure you guys be together ,she can't let down her or SPACE reputation "

She smiled and walked ahead to her music class


Mujhko iraade de
Kasamein de, waade de
Meri duaaon ke ishaaron ko sahaare de
Dil ko thikaane de naye bahaane de
Khabon ki barishon ko mausam ke paimane de
Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro rahi hun main

She alone sang recorded it and send it to Manik " if Fab 5 is your weakness i will be your strength , i know after hearing this you will come to me " she smiles and bite her lips " your shining star will show you the right path , and next time no one will ever blame us , not my friend nor your's as we are mend to be together " she said to herself

I have high hopes from Nandini

i am ending here
If any writer who want to continue with next part PM me lets be positive we can make it a combine SS


Edited by naddiya26 - 10 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
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You're such a positive writer you have actually managed to think in a positive way and you have shown us another possibility and also lovely os I hope your prediction comes true 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely is nicely written
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
Nice os, very well written..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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So simple yet so impactful...loved it! Please write more..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nyc os👏... we shld think positive!!!
Hope everything is going to be well soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very nice.. nd positivity in ur update.,, i hp this time they wont break manan... i hp ur story gonna b in the show too..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it! Brilliant as always :)

But for the actual serial.. I don't think it will be true
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really hope dis turn to b true. Fingers crossed
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Joan4love

You're such a positive writer you have actually managed to think in a positive way and you have shown us another possibility and also lovely os I hope your prediction comes true 😊

don't know what is going to happened but after watching episode i was really depressed so i come up with this

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