ManaFF~ AStory of Love N Seperation #chapter 7updated Pg21 15/2/16 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 5.

Sudden Encounter.


C'mon Manik.. Don't be a spoils sport. .! Cabir said mischievously.

Okay guys! ! I'll see. Manik gave in quietly.

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After the hectic workshop under some renowned Fashion Designer .She reached library.

Niti...!!! A voice called.

(Guys everyone call her Niti )
She turned around to find who was that ?

Ahh.. !! Aunty.. she ran to her.. smilingly.

Niti.. kab se tera wait kar rahi thi.. aj late kyu?? Lady at the canteen counter queried.

Are aunty.. poocho mat ! Workshop p itna tym lag gaya.. n see na m so late late saying she pouted.

Aww.. koi baat nai. Aunty replied caressing her face lovingly.

Achvha I've to go ! Bohot late ho gaya.. n on top of it Aaj Concert Hai! She stated n started to leave, when her aunt held her wrist n made her sit.

Koi nai ja raha hai. ! Pehle chup chap yaha baith aur khana kha. Then u can go anywhere u want to.! her Aunt ordered.

Ohoo.. how ziddi u r ?? She grumbled n started eating the yummy homemade food made by her Lovely Aunty. (Lovely is her name)

After eating she ran to her boss.

Good evening sir. ! She said softly.

Good evening Niti. He replied sternly.

Tonight we're having concert. We've to provide with instruments, all decor n everything !! So c"mon without wasting time , now let's discuss what's the plan !

They discussed the arrangements! After good discussion of Hows, where's, whats, session. It was 9pm.

Niti went to check on all arrangements.

Bhaiyya..!! That drape.. haan that kne she said pointing upwards. Plz Use wahan nai ..yahan lagaiyye...plz. saying she pointed it towards her back where unknowingly she hit her hand on the wall !

As it hit the wall. The bracelet "MANAN " bracelet fell off her hands.

Ahh !! She rubbed her hand. Only then she noticed it wasn't there. She looked atound n found it on the floor.

She picked it up n kept it in bag. Offo..!! There's too much of pending work yar. Saying she again Got engrossed in her work.

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Guys..we're finally here !!! Cabir said gleefully.

Yups saying Mukti jumped on him.

Alya n Dhruv were smiling holding each other's hands .

Navya was damm happy fr all her friends.

Manik went out airport parking n stood silently gazing the stars shining bright. He closed his eyes , Nandini's images started flashing In his eyes. He remained like that for few minutes n than he opened his eyes n caressed his MANAN Bracelet lovingly.

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Nandini was sitting looking at her MANAN bracelet. She was about to wear it when someone called her.

She went to her Boss.

Yes Sr .. all set.. We just need few touch ups which will soon be sorted. She informed him.

Oh That's great. Chalo thn will catch up with you soon. U handle Everything okay ? Boss asked.

Yeah sure Sir. She gave in happily.

As soon as her boss left .. she got a call.

Hello !! My baby doll !! How's ur day ?? His Abhi dearest has called.

Hmm .. it was good. Quite hectic, but m loving it. She replied lovingly.

Aww.. okay so when r u coming home ? He asked.

Are.. the concert has not yet started. I'll be late. She informed

Achcha.. so I have to have dinner alone.. he said melodramatically

Aww.. baby ko akele khana padega..?? She said mischievously.

Abhi hmm (ed)

C'mon yar Abhi. . Grow up. . Go n have dinner. M bhi kha lungi. She ordered sternly.

Pakka . U will also have? Abhi asked.

Yeah baba pakka. She replied.

Okays! Chalo bye. Take care haan . Call me if u want me to pick u up.

Okay ? Abhi said being protective.

Yeah baba .. I'll call u now go I've lot of work. Saying she disconnected the call.

Abhi's p.ov.
These two days are very crucial for her . I know she's herself volunteering for all these stupid concerts. Just bcoz she want herself to be occupied with something or the other.

I hope she gets over all this soon . He prayed silently.

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Niti.. !!! They've arrived. U just go n check backstage. Plz.. one of her colleagues requested.

Yeah sure. ! Saying she went backstage

...

Soon Fab5 reached the stage n Nandini was still busy with backstage arrangements.

They all set themselves as per there performance...

Nandini heard the audience hooting for Fab5.. !!!

Soon they were all set to Set The Stage on Fire.. amusic started wiyh low beats

N they started..

Manik initiated

Sau dard hai sau raahatein
Sab mila dilnashin ek tu hi nahin..

His senses started poking him telling " She's here .. ??" His mind stated " No she's Nowhere"
But what to do..this heart.. it never leaves u.. same was in Manik's case.. his heart was not ready to listen...
Brushing off his thoughts. ..

He continued. As usual thinking about her..

Sau dard hai sau raahatein
Sab mila dilnashin ek tu hi nahin

He thinking about the days.. when they were happily together. The way she used to care about him. There love which was pure. N now he is searching for her.. n she ..she deleted everything about her.. he r phone..switched off.. chachi not knowing abt her whereabouts. . Her Facebook id disabled.

Rookhi rookhi si yeh hawa
Aur sukhe patte ki tarah
Shehar ki sadko pe main
Laawaris udta hua
Sau raaste par teri raah nahi

Sau dard hai sau raahatein
Sab mila dilnashin ek tu hi nahin..

N his tears started flowing. .Eyes bloodshot read depicting his helplessness, hurt heart , anger , love , hatred, all kind of emotions...

N here Nandini heard his very own Manik singing from backstage. It took away his breath. She was numb. Only she could feel that pain in his voice. She couldn't believe her ears.. her tears started flowing, knowing no bounds to stop. Sbe rushed towards the stage. N Stood in between the crowd.
N Finally she saw her Manik.. her Love.. in such a vulnerable state.

Though he was seen in the flash lights. Which were dam too dim for her to see him crying. But she could feel him.. she could feel his pain.

N than his next phrase made her weep even more. She sat on the
floor.

Behta hai paani behne de
Waqt ko yunhi rehne de
Dariya ne karwat li hai toh
Saahilon ko sehne de
Sau hasratein par tera gham nahi

N the crowd which was going all mad for this Rock star Manik Malhotra started singing out loud .

Sau dard hai sau raahatein
Sab mila dilnashin
Ek tu hi nahin...

But Manik felt her presence. . He jumped down the stage .. n now was in the mad crowd ,going ga ga oved him. But it wasn't his concern . He wanted her.. His Shining Star..

Finally he got his life ,when he saw her sitting in between weeping badly.


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Hey Frnz finally updated this chapter.

Hope u all like it.

Do let me know how it was ??

Plz ignore the grammatical mistakes ,as I haven't rechecked.


Don't forget to leave ur lovely comments.


Love

Myra.

Tiara115 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
Finally u updated. . Manan meet finally... Let's what's in store ahead..
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
uma88 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Read all parts in a go.
Interesting.
Waiting for them to meet.
Continue soon.
nara26 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
finally they meet
Nice updat tnx for pm
fireflies10 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
amazing update
finally the met and the song was damm perfect
continue soon
Manishadevnani thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Finally bt pls. Ab ye happiness na humse lena na hi manan se pls...
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
Superb update
Abhi nandu convo was cute
Both of them wid MaNan bracelet
Finally they saw each other
Thnkz 4 the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
Hey dear...
Update was amazing...
song is perfect in this situation...
When manik start singing... its was emotional ...
Finally they saw each other...
Very nicely describe dear...
Thanks for pm... Continue soon..
Keep smiling... stay blessed...
Lots of love..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
read al parts in 1 go... it ws nyc.. atlst manan met...cnt wait fr d nxt update.. eagrly waitn...
if u cud add up.an index it wud b nyc i gues fr ppl hu r readn.ur stry frst tym... jst a suggrstion..
update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Woah!!I want to hoot for this update!!!That's bloody awesome!! Sorry for the bad language! But really this is freaking awesome!Nice song selection anyways!!! I loved the song!!!This update was seriously adorable one!! Got the Goosebumps out of me!!!Loved the update to the core!Continue soon!
Will be waiting!
Thanks for the PM!
You rocked!
Keep smiling! TC!

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