ManaFF~ AStory of Love N Seperation #chapter 7updated Pg21 15/2/16 - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's really very nice update dear...
I loved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting 4 ur Pm...
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Chapter-6.

Hide n Seeks !

Manik found her sitting in between the crowd.. weeping badly.

Nandini !! He screamed, which qas quite audible to her.

She moved her head up slowly, as she was going to confront him..!

There eyes met ! As soon as Nandini looked into his eyes.. His Eyes sparkled, Joy.. ! His Heart celebrated its victory over his Brain.

He was just about to reach her , but the mad crowd jumped over him for selfies , n autographs.

She got enough time to elope. N by the time he got free from the crowd, she has already left.

His heart sank down...n fell on the floor with a thump ,right on his knees. He was numb. He didn't know what to do? ? Where was she ?

She was right here few moments ago! ! He cried.

He felt a hand on his shoulder. He held that hand . N cried.. She left me !! She..she. she... went away.. This was all he ciuld say in between his sobs. Why? ? Why Cabir?? He questioned helplessly.

N all Cabir could do was.. He hugged him tightly, Manik hugged him back n cried helplessly. ...!!

She left me Cabir..!! She left me !! She don't want me ... Am I that bad ? She didn't even wait for me to reach her! Ek baari mil to leti.. at leaat she should have given me one damm chance. !!! But she.. she left me...!! saying he again started weeping. His tears weren't ready to stop. He needed her. But she left. His heart ached, at the aingke thought of .. Loosing her , when she was so dam close to him.

Manik. ..calm down bro..!! Cabir said rubbing his back.. Manik we are here fir a week ... While Alya ,Mukti ,Dhruv n Navya will be outing we'll search for her. Tu tension mat le...wonmil jayegi. N one thing, Get this straight in your head.. She loves U.. mire than anything in this dam world. She'll definitely come to you. Be positive Manik. She has always been positive. Cabir tried consoliing him.

Manik wiped his tears ,n stood up straight. I think we should leave. Its almost 12 am. Saying they both left. Nandini was sitting in the library. She didn't know whether she should be Happy seeing him after ages..or she should be sad Seeing him so hurt. In so much pain... ..

Aiyappa !! What should I do ??? Kya main usse ...usse baat karu ?? She said in between her sobs.

Nai ! She sat in the library n sobbed helplessly!

After almost an hour , she realised that she's still in the library and now it it quater to 1.

Oh God ! She wiped her tears.

Abhi might be waiting for me! She stood up and gathered her belongings in her purse and rushe to the exit.

She stood at the door n waited for a Taxi, bt at this hour of the day how will she find a taxi?
She started walking thinking she might get one on the way.

After walking for a while she stopped because of her heels.. n she stood for a while.

Aiyyappa !! What to do ? She said helplessly. Ok I should call Abhi.. she slid the phone out of her bag. But to her dismay. . Her phone was dead!

Having no other option. She started walking again. After walking a few steps , someone grabbed her wrist and stopped her. She turned back to find he was a drunk street guy !

Leave my hand ,she said gritting her teeth.

Chod denge , itni bhi jaldi kya hai ? Madam ji ? He asked sheepishly.

Nandini slapped right on his face .
N he left her hand , rubbing his cheek.

Achcha ! Madam ji.. itne pyar se baat ki to apke raas nai aayi na !! Ab aap dekhiye .. saying he pulled her by waist .

Ahh! Nandini winced in pain.

She tried pushing him .. bt it was all in vain , he was strong enough to hold her firm.

Suddenly a strong pull , pulled her out of his grip n hid her behind himself.

She was so scared to see who he is ? But she stood behind him.

U looser ! Don't you dare touch her next time ! Else you won't be able to touch anything or anyone . He stated angrily, giving him a deathly glare.

Being drunk he was already not able to walk , n he kicked him right in his stomach. He fell down.

U okay? He turned back n asked.

Yeah , she nodded n hugged him tightly , n started sobbing.

Shh.. its ok Nandini ! Ho jata hai . Calm down. He said rubbing her back trying to pacify her .

But she still hugged him tight. Right now she needed it much.

He hugged her back . N they remained like this for few minutes.
So ?? Miss Nandini Murthy ! I see a new Nandini ! He said mischievously trying to lighten hee mood.

Only than she realised whom ahe was hugging,

U here?? She asked wiping her tears.

Haan main yahan ! Kyu u didn't attended our concert? He asked playfully.

Cabir! !! Saying She hit his chest .

N than again hugged him. As nothing can be compared to just a mere hug from your friend. Thattoo a friend like Cabir . Who helped her the most. Sorting her love life with Manik.

After a warm hug . Cabir asked :
So u shifted to Delhi ? N what were u doing here ? At this hour of the day. ?? He asked in a concerned manner.

Nothing. I was just returning home . I was not getting any taxi. So.. thought of walking! She replied.

Woah !! Chalo I'll drop u home ! Cabir insisted. His eyes were glittering depicting happiness n sorrow both.

Okay ! Nandini just couldn't deny.


Okay frnz. That's it. I know chotu sa hai. Bt really busy these days n m nt having my phone also , so it's really difficult for me to update.
Hope u all understand. Love u all for all ur support n lovely comments . It's really encouraging. Sorry for all gramatical mistakes . As I didn't rechecked before posting. (Plz Ignore such mistakes)
Thanks once again.

Love
Myra.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: alind713

Update the next part soon


Will try updating As soon as possible .
😛😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Bechara manik ...
Itna pain mei n Cabir consoling him
Oh leh nandu ne thappad mar diya uss drunk aadmi ko
Ooo cabir as saviour waah
Ab cabir ko nandu ka ghar pta chal jaayega... Yehh
Thnkz 4 the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArSha_ManNan

Bechara manik ...
Itna pain mei n Cabir consoling him
Oh leh nandu ne thappad mar diya uss drunk aadmi ko
Ooo cabir as saviour waah
Ab cabir ko nandu ka ghar pta chal jaayega... Yehh
Thnkz 4 the pm

Cabir has always played the role of cupid, let's see what happens next😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update cabir saved her now pls manan k beech sab jaldi se theek kar do.waiting for manans romance
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruchi116

Nice update cabir saved her now pls manan k beech sab jaldi se theek kar do.waiting for manans romance

Thanks dr M glad u liked it. 😛😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
first of all thanks for the pm dear...read all parts in one go...loved ur ff to the core...waiting for manan convo...and our own cabir again is gng to act as cupid...nice to see abhi again in ur story.. Plz continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
superb update i thought to b manik bt cabir ka twist was nice loved it update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome. ..
Manik is in so much pain... nandu should give him one chance...
Cabir is a friend in need is a friend in deed. ..
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly

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