ManaFF~ AStory of Love N Seperation #chapter 7updated Pg21 15/2/16 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Seriously asking whether you should continue or not even after having such an amazing plot do continue soon '
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Awesome plot
And MaNan broke up??

Curious to know about this story
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is definitely a new concept full of mystery and love...Just the way I like it 😉 and yes, that's a yes from me to continue 😳
PS - pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
plz continue and pm me when you do so plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey are u continuing dis story??
jst wanted to ask...cause m waiting n it lks like a reaalllyyy interesting concept!!
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Yes dr ! M continuing with my ff. Need sum tym coz I want to start with sumthin good n nowadays m all messed up 😛
Will post first Chapter soon.
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Woww,I luvd d intro..As of now i think its goin to b a grt story.. Really excited to c hw d story unfolds !! :) Do take ur tym nd giv us an awsumm update soonish.. #OkThanksBye ! ;)
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CHAPTER-1.

IT'S BEEN A YEAR !!

A year passed. .. n Fab5 is now very popular n admired by every one.
There songs got them the fame they deserved.

Dhruv n Alya are now back in Fab5. Cabir is RJ too along with Fab5's band member.

Tonight is Fab5's Concert.

Mukti, Alya , n Dhruv sitting on the terrace . Waiting for Manik for starting the rehearsals for the concert .
It's been almost a year .. since Manik n Nandini broke up .. bt Manik ... he still can't loose sight of the fact that" He loves Nandini. " asserted Alya.

Yeah Right !! N he's just not ready to except !!! Said Mukti in disbelief.

Hmm !! Bt Wat can we do .. ?? Neither he is ready to listen nor he was ready to listen at that time !! Alya stated helplessness clearly visible in her voice.

Guys !! Chill he'll be fine . It's just that he needs time . I know my buddy . He'll soon realise his mistake n make everything OK . Dhruv assured them. N Yeah Where's Cabir ?? Dhruv asked.

Haan he's gone to Radio station .. he'll come around in some time. Mukti replied .

Great. U know Wat I think we should do something .. Alya suggested.

Do something ??? Lyk Wat ?? Mukti asked confused.

Are I mean to patch up Manik n Nandini .. U remember last tym they broke up ??? Alya said.

Yeah !!! Ek do din m they were back together.
Mukti said !!!

Yeah !!! He didn't stayed away from her for long !! Alya said she had a slight smile on her face remembering how they patched up in just one day though he (Manik) didn't accepted that . Bt he wanted to be with her.


Yeah !!! Nt that was different n now the situation is different . At that time Nandini Humein chod k nai gayi thi .. she's not here n0w !!! Mukti stated the fact.

Hey Guys n Girls !!! Wat's up !!! Here I am ... banda aapki khidmat mein haazir hai !!!! Cabir jumped in their conversation.

Here he is !!!! Dhruv said with a smirk.

Think of the devil n the devil arrives. Alya asserted .


Nautanki !!! Kab se tera wait kar rahe the !!! Mukti said side hugging Cabir.

Are wo I got stuck yar !!! Chod na .. let's start with Jamming !!! Cabir suggested.

Jamming ??? Kaise ?? Mukti said .
Kaise matlab ?? Are jaise karte hain aur kaise ?? Cabir siad facetiously.

Manik !!! Mukti uttered.

Noo.. not again !! Cabir said bemused.

Yeah !!! He's missing .. Again !! Mukti informed.

Don't worry Guys !!! He'll come around soon !!! Dhruv assured them.
Yeah Bro !! U're right! ! He'll come around !!! But at night .. direct at Concert hall !!! Cabir added.

As usual guys !! Wat's new in this ?
Alya said smirking.

Don't worry Guys !! Let's start . We had already sent him the recording .. he'll manage in fact he'll nail it. Mukti assured.



That too as usual !!! Cabir added with a wink.


Hmm !!! So let's start guys !! Wat are we waiting for? ? Dhruv said .

All of them started with their Jamming session

It was 8.00pm . N now only half an hour was left for thr concert.

Kya yaar Manik has still not arrived. ..!! Cabir said anxiously.

Don't worry Guys !!! He'll be here anytime. . !! Aata hi hoga !! Dhruv asserted.

Hmm !!! Calm down Cabir. . Take a deep breath. . Cabir self assured himself.

Lukin at him Fab4 bursted out in laughter. .
Like Seriously ?? Cabir tu tension le raha hai ?? Mukti said laughing.

Yeah Cabir now that's something new !! Alya added laughing.

Are !! Tum log tension le sakte ho mai nai le sakta ??? Not fair yar !!! Cabir complained.

No no !! Cabir .. u continue Alya said.

Yeah ! Take a deep breath !!! Mukti added.

In... and out !!! Dhruv added.

Ok Guys !! Chill I was kidding. Cabir said playfully.

We know ..!! All said in unison .


It was 8.30pm n all were ready to perform .. It was dark with neon lights flashing on the stage making the Fab5 clearly visible but in neon colours.

There stood a tall guy !!! Having few bands in his right hand n a watch in his left . He as wearing black jeans .. n white Tee.. with Black blazer. He was lukin damm hot.. n handsome.
He had a dark, unshaven jawline. And his stubble added class to his sauve look.

Girls go crazy just to have one look of The Manik Malhotra !!! N he was in some other world n had no escape from his world . Or u can say he didn't wanted to come out of his own world . The walls around him were created by himself. . N he didn't wanted to come out of his domain.

He was standing in the middle of the stage with Dhruv n mukti on either sides standing with guitars n Cabir at back with Drums n Alya on the right with synthesiser.


The performance was just about to start n every one was cheering up for them ...
Fab5
Fab5
Fab5

Clearly audible !!! The dream they all had seen together . Finally they were standing on the platform they always wished for n yeah we must say they really worked hard to reach here.

Arrre ..!!! Cabir !! Humne kaha tha na .. humein pick karlena !! Humein bhi to tumhara concert attend karna tha na !! Navya complained.

Oh !!! M sooo sooo soo sorry Navya. . I completely forgot !! Plzz yar understand na!!Cabir apologised

Hmm thik hai koi baat nai !! Dekho hum tumhare kiye kya laye hain Navya said n forwarded a box towards him.

Oh God !! U'r too good Navya .. Nai seriously !! U'r the best Cabir said opening the box impatiently .

Yummm...!! Cair said munching the Jalebis Brought by Navya .

All the best Cabir !!! Achche se perform karna !! Navya wished him luck

Haan meri maa !! Achche se perform karunga .. U wait n watch ..

N the song began! !!

Manik held the mike in one hand n guitar in other. .

Baatein ye kabhi na tu bhoolna
Koi tere khatir hai jee raha

Thinking abt Nandini's first meet How they met on the highway.

Jaaye tu kahin, bhi ye sochna
Koi tere khatir hai jee raha

Reminiscences there First kiss..on Musicaana Night !!! There performance together in the opening of musicana . She was wearing white gown in which she was looking Breathtaking! !!

Tu jahaan jaaye mehfooz ho
Tu jahaan jaaye mehfooz ho
Dil mera maange bas ye duaa
Remembering how Soha attacked her trying to burn her alive n Pandit incident. Pain was clearly audible in his voice n face.

Baatein ye kabhi na tu bhoolna
Koi tere khatir hai jee raha
Jaaye tu kahin, bhi ye sochna
Koi tere khatir hai jee raha...

He remembers when he was having emotional breakdown. . The tym when Dhruv left Fab5 . Blaming Manik befor Fusion Concert .. n he was left all alone .. he was so heartbroken n devastated. His buddy left him saying he was overshadowing him .. n there she was .. who stood by him... always .. whenever he was at his worst .

Humdard hai, humdum bhi hai
Tu saath hai toh zindagi
Tu jo kabhi door rahe
Ye humse ho jaaye ajnabi
Tujhse mohabbat karte hain jo
Tujhse mohabbat karte hain jo
Kaise kare hum usko bayaan

Remembering How he was lying in her lap n she was ruffling his hairs the same night .. trying to calm him down !!!

Baatein kabhi na tu bhoolna
Koi tere khatir hai jee rahaa
Jaaye tu kahin, bhi ye sochna
Koi tere khatir hai jee rahaa...


There sudden fight n then there verbal brawls !!! Blaming each other n Nandini leaving. . All the sight flashed in front of his eyes. .. A sudden pain .. scratched his heart .. a wound which was left without any aid again started to bleed .. pain knew no bounds ... Eyes turned bloodshot red ..


Jaagi bhi hai royi bhi hai
Aankhein ye raaton mein mere
Kyun har ghadi milke tujhe
Lagti rahe bas teri kami
Hum toh na samjhe tum hi kaho
Hum toh na samjhe tum hi kaho
Kyun tumko paake tumse juda...

Baatein ye kabhi na tu bhoolna
Koi tere khatir hai jee rahaa
Jaaye tu kahin, bhi ye sochna
Koi tere khatir hai jee rahaa. ...!!!!!

Song ended leaving Manik devastated n hurt .
it seemed impossible to everyone that anyone could endure such pain for so long... Bt he was living that pain since 1 year.


Ok Frnz !!! I posted the first chapter !!!
Hope u all like it . I know it's not that good start . But I was just stuck with my assignments n now this kyy ending news
Feeling very low.

I'll try making next chapter interesting n long.

Thank u sooo much for liking my plot 😊😊
Plz do leave your comments ... It really encourages me n makes me feel happy ...😛

Love
Myra

Edited by Fairy_Manan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
hey
really liked your idea.
do continue asap...
And pm if possible.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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such a nyc chap but my heat pinching to see manik in this condition...HE is leaving everyday in pain 😭...can't see him lyk dis ...were is nandu ...wat happens between dem ...my curiosity incresinh day by day ..better u should update asap

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