MANAN FF LOVE IS MY LIFE INDEX ON PG 1 - Page 71

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Posted: 10 years ago
nandu has such lovely parents...they heard her out and they understand her :) :) :)
i liked the way nandu is trbling manik ...hahaahahahaha...
poor manik he is so nervous..hahahaha
best dialogue was...hum toh abhi sirf school mein hain...hahaha
good update overall !!
waiting for more :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update dea...haste haste mai pagal ho gayi manik malhotra the manik malhotra is nervous waiting for next continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Love your story... U are an amazing writer.. .
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Posted: 10 years ago
Super duper update dear...
I can't control my laughter because of maniks situation bichara...
Kitana darr gaya hai ab toh bahot maja aane wala hai nandini ke ghar par...
Please please please continue soon Can't wait further for next update Please continue asap...
Love you a lottt for this amazing update dear...
Keep smiling and rocking as always...
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 115 :

Soon manik and mohan reach moorthy mansion.

MOHAN : manikkk

MANIK : dad deere please

MOHAN : pagal hogaya kya thu

Manik looks sideways rubbing his hairs.

MOHAN : main tujhse bath karra hoon

MANIK : ummm

MOHAN : manik pechle pandra minute se hum yaha par kade hain main baar baar bell bajaneki koshish karra hoon aur tu baar baar mujhe rokra hain

Manik looks down and closes his eyes.

Mohan controls his laugh and manikkk main ab bell bajane vala hoon aur thu mujhe nahi rokega samja!!!!!

Manik nods his head as a no and looking mohan again as yes and then again turning his face as no...

Mohan controls his laugh with a great difficulty and finally rings the bell.

Reshma opens the door. Manik sees her but immediately looks down.

MOHAN : wo hum

RESHMA : jee pehle aap andar tho ayiye na

MOHAN : haan and goes inside behind her

Manik was still standing out looking his dad.

MOHAN : kya karra thu aa na

MANIK : haan haan and turning back starts walking out

Mohan comes back and holds his hand

MOHAN : thu kaha jara hain andar chel

Manik points his finger out and then towards house and then wo main

MOHAN : chup and drags him inside along with him

RAJ : welcome mr malhotra and offers his hand

MOHAN : thank you mr moorthy and shakes his hand with raj

RAJ : ayiye baitiye

MOHAN : jee

Manik was just standing swiping his sweat.

Reshma puts her hand on his shoulder. He turns and looks her. She smiles and asks him to sit with her eyes. He too smiles and sits beside mohan.

Mohan and manik were on coach while Raj and reshma were sitting opposite to them on another couch.

Manik was just tapping his shoe and looking every where possible except at Raj and reshma.

Mohan smiles seeing his son and "gar bahuth sundar hain"

RAJ : haan bada nahi hain par maa beti ne bahuth ache se sajaya hain gar ko

MOHAN : gar bada ya chota hone se kya farak padtha hain jab thak gar ke logon ke beech main pyar ho na koyi bi cheez mayine nahi rakthi hain

RAJ : jee bilkul main bi uss bath se sehmath kartha hoon

MANIK POV : ye madam hain kaha khud call karke invite kiya aur khud hi gayab hain ek tho yaha mujhe in logon ko dekhne se bi dar lagra hain aur upar se wo mere sath bi nahi hain

He was searching for her and mohan notices this.

MOHAN : vaise nandini kaha hain

RESHMA : jee vo thayar hori hain

MOHAN : achaa

Manik was sweating very badly and was continuously wiping his forehead

RAJ : kya hua

Mohan looks raj and sees that he was looking manik.

Manik was not listening anything and was busy in searching for nandini along with swiping his sweat.

RAJ : manik

MANIK POV : goddd jiska dar tha wohi hua

He slowly looks at raj and haa

RAJ : tum fan ke neche baite ho aur phir bi tumhe itna pasina aara hain

Mohan turns his face and smiles

MANIK POV : ab inhe kaise batao ki mujhe itna pasina aa kyu raha hain

RAJ : manik

MANIK : haa

RAJ : kya hua

MANIK : aa woo

MOHAN : actually iska body hi aisa hain agar ac main bi hoga na tho phir bi aise hi pasena pahunchthe hue baitega

RAJ : hooo acha manik tum aur nandini kaafi ache dosth ho na

MANIK : jee

RESHMA : acha manik wo kaisi hain matlab school main kuch zyada pareshan karthi hain kya tum logon

MANIK : nahi nahi bilkul nahi wo hame bilkul pareshan nahi karthi hain

RAJ : arrey rehma wo kisi ko pareshan nahi kar sakthi hain bas koyi aur iss bath ka faida utakar usse pareshan na kare na tho bas hai

MANIK POV : goddd what is he trying to say kya wo mere bare mai

MOHAN : jee mujhe ap logon se thnx bolna tha

RAJ : kyu

MOHAN : aap logon ne hame gar pe invite kiya aur

RAJ : ab itne formal bi math huyiye

NANDINI : papaaa!!!!!

MANIK POV : when I was busy in thinking suddenly I heard her voice. I slowly turned my head towards the side from where I heard the voice. My jaw dropped looking her standing wearing a million dollar smile. My lips automatically curved into a smile. I was lost in her. I was just looking her from top to bottom She was wearing a red sleeveless top and skin tight jeans. Her small diamond ear rings were twinkling as usual. Her hairs were open falling till her waist. I couldn't think or do anything except admiring the beauty in front of me.

NANDINI POV : when he turned his face and looked at me I felt frozen. He was looking into my eyes with great intense and I felt shiver running down my spine. I couldn't remove my eyes from him because he was looking completely breathtaking as usual. He wore a simple plan red shirt and half shaded jeans. His hair was slightly jelled at front. I was busy looking him while even he was busy scanning me from top to bottom. I felt my cheeks turning into crimson red so I simply looked down not making any contact with his eyes.

MOHAN : arrey wah meri beti tho kaafi sundar lagri hain aaj

Nandini smiles and slowly walking towards him sits beside him.

NANDINI : acha tho iska matlab main roj sundar nahi lagthi hoon

MOHAN : nahi baba thu roj sundar lagthi hain par aaj kuch zyada hi sundar lagri hain

NANDINI : thank you and hugs him

He kisses her hairs and your welcome

Manik was just smiling looking her all the while.

NANDINI : ab aap teek hain na

MOHAN : haan

NANDINI : mujhe laga aap yaha ayenge tho apka mood bi acha hojayega isliye papa ki bath maan kar maine aapko yaha ane ko kaha

MOHAN : haa acha kiya kyuki mera mood already acha ho chuka hain so thank you

NANDINI : your welcome

Mohan bends close and usse sach bathade bichara bahuth pareshan hora hain

She smiles and looks at manik who was already looking her and then abi nahi papa bas thodi der aur

RAJ : ye kya bath hori hain bai baap beti ke beech

NANDINI : wo tho secret hain

RAJ : ooo

RESHMA : aap logon bathe kijiye main kuch Kane ke liye lathi hoon and leaves

Raj gets up and "beta aap log bathe kariye main aur manik abi athe hain"

MANIK : kyaaa and makes his eyes widened

RAJ : kya hua manik

Nandini and mohan keep their hands on their mouth and control their laugh seeing manik.

MANIK : ku Ku kuch nahi

RAJ : chelo phir

MANIK : kaha matlab kyu mera matlab hai

RAJ : bath karneke liye manik aur kis liye

Manik looks towards nandini and raising his eyebrows bath...karne... Ke... Liye

Nandini nods her head smiling

RAJ : chelo na manik

MANIK : haa haaa and gets up

He once again looks at nandini and she signals him to go

Manik turns his face and lazily walks behind raj making faces.

Nandini and mohan burst into laughter and become mad laughing
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow...update was really nice...
Bechara manik...godd..😆😆
Really I laughed hard imagining manik's situation at nandini's house...ohh god...so sad he doesnt even knw the truth...jab usse pata chalega na toh nandini is gone...😆😆
Continue soon
Take care. ...😊
Edited by shubhshash - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 116 :

Mohan will be laughing loud and side hugs nandini laughing.

MOHAN : maine usse aaj thak aise nahi dekha bichara bahuth nervous hain

NANDINI : apka beta bichara nahi hain ye tho kuch bi nahi hain apko patha bi nahi hain ki kis tharah wo mujhe pareshan kartha hain

MOHAN : acha chel manthi hoon vaise sach kahu tho mujhe bi bada maza aya usse pasina pahunchthe hue dekh

NANDINI : use pasina aara tha??

MOHAN : aur nahi tho kya wo tho tujhe dekhne ke baad thoda normal hua varna mujhe laga aaj sara din wo aise hi baitega pasine ke sath

NANDINI : hmmm and smiles

MOHAN : vaise raj ko manik se bath kya karni thi

NANDINI : patha nahi

MOHAN : I just hope ki wo nervous hokar kuch ulta seeda na bolde

NANDINI : nahi papa kuch nahi hoga relax

Reshma comes with juices and all three get busy in chit chatting.

Raj takes manik to library room.

Manik forgets about raj and gets busy in glancing room.

RAJ : manik

MANIK : aaa haaa woo sry actually

RAJ : nahi koyi bath nahi aao baito

MANIK : jee and sits on chair.

Raj and manik were sitting opposite to each other.

RAJ : manik main bathe seede seede karne main believe kartha hoon

Manik widens his eyes and aaammm aaa haaa

RAJ : mujhe bathe guma phirakar kehna acha nahi lagtha hain

MANIK POV : goddd nooo please ye kehna kya chahthe hain agar mujhse directly nan

RAJ : manik

MANIK : haa haaa

RAJ : kya hua tum kya sochre ho

MANIK : Ku ku kuch nahi

RAJ : tumhe nandini ne bathaya hoga na ki usne hame sab kuch bathadiya hain

MANIK POV : ye baap beti dono milkar mujhe ek din zaroor heart attack dilvayenge

RAJ : manik tum sunre ho na

MANIK : jee and slowly mutters kash ki main kuch sun hi nahi patha kash ki main baira hotha

RAJ : kyaa

MANIK : kuch nahi

RAJ : manik ye sab aisi umar main matlab jab tumhe zyada kuch patha nahi hain kisi cheez ke bare main

MANIK POV : inka matlab nahi nahi ye main kya sochra hoon main main aise nahi hone de saktha hoon mujhe mujhe kuch karna hoga

MANIK : aap kehna kya chahthe hain

RAJ : dekho manik ye jo kuch bi hora hain in dono main ya pichle kuch dino main wo galath hain

Manik closes his eyes tightly and looks down

RAJ : ye tum bi bahuth ache se janthe hoon

Manik feels very sad and doesn't even open his eyes

RAJ : par beta iss main hum kya kar sakthe hain

Manik opens his eyes and looks him.

RAJ : I know ki ye sari bathe aise karna kitna weird hain

MANIK POV : mujhe kuch samaj nahi ara hain ye akhir bolna kya chahthe hain

RAJ : manik agar tumhe uske bare main bath nahi karni hain tho teek hain main tumhe

MANIK : usss matlab kis kiske bareme

RAJ : tumhare parents ke bare main

Manik smiles hugely and parents ke bare main

RAJ : haan kyu tumhe kya laga

Manik controls his smile and nahi kuch kaas nahi

RAJ : dekho manik I know iss age main apne parents ko aise dekh kar tumhe kaise lagtha hoga

Manik becomes sad and looking down aisa kuch nahi hain uncle wo tho

RAJ : manik mujhe dekho

Manik looks him.

RAJ : hum pehli baar milre hain so shayad tumhe uncomfortable feel hora hoga mujhse ye sab bath karne main tho

MANIK : please aisa kuch nahi hain in fact am happy ki aap mujhse is bare main bath karre hain

RAJ : beta tumhe strong baneki zarurath nahi hain at least mere samne nahi

Raj gets up and sits on his knees holding manik's hand

RAJ : Mr malhotra ke samne tumhara strong hona zaruri hai tho is liye chahe jitni bi mushkile kyu na aye tumhe unke samne strong rehna hoga I know bahuth mushkil hain isliye beech beech main mere paas ajana kyuki mere samne tumhe strong baneki zarurath nahi pedegi

Manik smiles and looks him with teary eyes

RAJ : manik jo kuch bi hamari zindagi main hotha hain na wo sab hamari hathon main nahi hotha hain isliye uske bare main zyada sochkar pareshan honeki bilkul zarurath nahi hain

Manik nods his head as a yes

RAJ : ek bath hamesha yaad rakhna tum kabi bi kisi bi bath ko mujhse share kar sakthe ho

Manik smiles and blinks his eyes

RAJ : kisi bi bath ka tension math lena deere deere sab teek ho jayega

Manik smiles and agar main aapse kuch mangu tho aap usse mana nahi karenge na

RAJ : bilkul nahi

MANIK : kya main aapko papa bula saktha hoon

Raj smiles and jab meri beti ko do do pithayon ka pyar mil saktha hain tho tumhe kyu nahi hmmm

Manik smiles and hugs him tighlty saying thank you papa

Raj smiles and hugs him back more tightly saying always welcome beta

RESHMA : kya hora hain bai yaha

Manik breaks the hug and kuch nahi aunty wo bas

RESHMA : awww tum na mujhse bath math karo

Raj gets up and manik too goes near reshma

MANIK : kya hua aunty mujhse koyi galthi huyi hain kya

RESHMA : haan aur vo bi bahuth badi

RAJ : arrey isne kya kiya aur

RESHMA : aap bech main math boliye

MANIK : okk okk ek minute lijiye main khan pakadtha hoon mujhe nahi patha ki mujhse kya galthi huyi lekin please aap mujhe uske liye maaf kardijiye

RESHMA : bilkul nahi

RAJ : arrey par isne kiya kya hain

RESHMA : aapko papa bulara hain aur mujhe aunty ye konsi bath huyi haan and turns her face

Manik and mohan smile hugely

RESHMA : hasiye math

Manik goes near her and makes her look him

He holds his ears and sry aunty main aaj se apko kabi bi aunty nahi kahunga

She just looks him and doesn't say anything

MANIK : mama apne bete ko maaf nahi karegi and makes a pout

Reshma smiles and hugs him

RESHMA : bilkul karegi

Manik smiles and a unknown tear falls from his eyes

Reshma breaks the hug and sees manik tears

RESHMA : manik kya hua tum aise

Manik holds her hands and kisses them.

"Thank you maa"

Reshma kisses his forhead and "smile please"

Manik smiles and hugs her once again tightly.

Reshma breaks the hug and cheleyi ab neeche kaafi der hogaya hain

RAJ : haan

Manik,reshma and raj go down and settle on couch.

Manik ignores nandini and gets busy in chit chatting with raj and reshma

NANDINI : papa

MOHAN : haan

NANDINI : ye isse kya hua hain

MOHAN : main bi wohi sochra hoon

NANDINI : shayad sach patha chel gaya hain

MOHAN : haan aur ab naraz hain shayad

NANDINI : aap tension math lijiye main hoon na chutki main sab teek kardungi

MOHAN : haan haan jantha hoon

NANDINI : aapko bas thodi si help karni hogi

MOHAN : kyaa

NANDINI : aap kisi bi tharah ham dono ko yaha se bahar bejiye

MOHAN : okk done

NANDINI : maa ye aap log kya bathe karre hain

RESHMA : kuch nahi bas aise hi

MOHAN : nandu tu manik ko apni room dikane le ja na thab thak ham yaha bathe karenge

MANIK : nahi wo mujhe and again mujhe nahi dekhni hain

RAJ : jaa na beta aur nandu sirf Tera room hi kyu tu manik ko pura gar dikha

Nandini gets up immediately and haan

Manik doesn't look her and simply walks out from there.

Manan reach upstairs and without looking nandini manik starts walking towards library room. She tries to talk to him but he ignores her so she gets angry and drags him into her room holding his hand. She locks the door and stands leaning to it folding her hands on her chest.

Manik again doesn't say anything and simply sits on bed getting busy in his cell phone

NANDINI : manikkk

He doesn't say anything and in fact doesn't even look at her.

NANDINI : manikkk

No reply

She goes near him and snatches the cell. He gives her a look and she too gives him a look. He gets up and tries to take cell but she moves back and doesn't allow him to take it. He looks her seriously and she nodding her head turns back but he holds her hand and pulls her close. He tries to take cell from her but she moves her hand here and there and makes him more irritated. He looks her seriously and she suddenly bursts out laughing looking him. He gives her what-so-funny look and she laughs even more looking him. She frees her hand from him and laughs like mad. He doesn't say anything and just looks her.

NANDINI : you became a fool manik malhotra became a fool hahahaaa and shows her tongue

Manik just stands looking her

NANDINI : patha hain kitna maza aya tumhe dekhe seriously matlab pehli baar the manik malhotra bahuth dar gaya aur wo bi kiski vajah se the great nandini moorthy ki vajah se hahahaaa and once again laughs like mad

He folds his hands around his chest and stands staring her.

NANDINI : papa kehre the ki tum pure pasena pasena hogaye haha I know I missed it par main imagine kar sakthi hoon aur aur and again bursts in laughter.

He suddenly moves closer to her and pins her to wall holding her hands tightly.

With in fraction of seconds her laugh gets vanished and her cheeks turn into crimson red due to his proximity.

He leans his body on hers not allowing even air to paas between them.

She was breathing heavily looking directly into his chocolate brown eyes because he was very close to her.

She gulps and with a great difficulty utters a single word ma..niii...kkk

He presses his body on hers making her shiver like hell closing her eyes.

He goes near to her lips and "kya hua ab hasi nahi ari hain"

She opens her eyes and looks him

He entwins their hands and "so I am a fool right"

She looks down and woo main woo

He once again presses his body on hers which makes her look him. He smirks and "wo main kyaaa"

She closes her eyes tightly. He leaves her hands and holds her waist making her sandwich between him and wall. He digs his nails on her waist making her moan his name.

MANIK : ankhen kolo

She nods no and he presses her waist more tightly due to which she clutches his shirt tightly.

He slowly moves her top up and starts playing with her waist making her moan his name. He moves his hands up and starts caressing her stomach.

She tries to move but his grip on her was very strong so she accepts her defeat and stands letting him do whatever he wants.

He looks her and going close to her ears "tum apna pasena pahunchri ho ya main pahunchu"

She immediately opens her eyes and looks his evil smile. She tries to free herself but he pulls her close once again and "itni jaldi bi kya hain abi thak maine kuch kiya bi nahi aur tum"

NANDINI : ma..nii..kkk mu.jh.e ja.na ha.ii..

MANIK : acha

NANDINI : haa

MANIK : tho teek hain na jaldi se apna punishment lelo aur chele jao

NANDINI : punishment????

MANIK : hmmm

NANDINI : aur wo kya hain

Manik slowly looks her stomach and she realises that his hands were still inside her top one on her stomach and other on her back. She widens her eyes and looks him. He smiles and slowly caresses her belly button making her tremble closing her eyes.

MANIK : wooo

She moves her hands and holds his collar tightly feeling very week on her knees

He goes on making circles,triangles,squares and everything he knew on her back along with caressing her belly botton making shiver run down her spine.

She shivers and with great difficulty slowly mutters ma...niii...kkk ple...as...eee

He smiles and starts sucking her lips hardly. She moans loudly and holding his collar tightly stands surrendering herself to him.



Looo done my work as I promised aur ab start commenting again because the more u comment the faster you will get another update shayad aaj rath hi jo ofcourse manan ke romance se bara hoga
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update
Loved maniks condition has it is rare to watch

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Posted: 10 years ago
wow amazing hilarious ..
full of fun..
bichara manik ko kitna sataya yaar ..
love the part of manik raj n reshma ...
its so pure n touched the heart ..

manik nandani ko kabhi nahi chodega punishment yaar seriously ..
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update next two part soon plzzz ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awssuuumm ..phele manik ki condition thn nandini ki ..deklhne layak thi .. Awsum girl.. I luved it ..continue soon

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