MANAN FF: MANAN STORY OF FIREFLIES AND STARS PART-13A,B,C ON (PAGE-30) - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
Awesome story !!! 😊 Pls update!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
ky yaar chotu update q?? 😔
btw update was super fantastic
but plz nxt tym long long update denaa...
want more n more...
don't no aage ky hogaa...
ty for pm tc
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
awesome update
manik n nadu r to different in it
continue soon
thnks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Please update
Dont make us wait for long

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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
nice going... interesting moves... nw the ques is hw will manan gonna fall 4 each other...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: thamannamanan

Please update

Dont make us wait for long



Will post tomorrow for sure 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
amazing story...jus now i read all part in one go...i jus loved it
u penned it so well dea...
but its to short update...next part make it big one...
plss update Asap...eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
{PART 5 A}:

Nandini went out and navya was sending exactly out of door
Navya- nandini tum yaha kya kar rahi thi and she tries to open the door
Nandini- woh...
Pen i was finding pen and shows her pen
Navya- haa mil gayi chalo accha hai
Manik inside gettin angry yeh black and white madhubala jaa kyu nahi rahi hai then heards nandini's voice
Nandini- chale navya mujhe bht zoro ki bhook lagi hai
Navya- are pehle kyu nahi kaha acha chalo lets gooo
Both heads towards canteen but they stopped by five people they were none other than fab5 but this time manik was missing and you all know why
Mukti- stop you both
Nandini- look i am not in mood please get aside
Navya- please hat jayiye naa
Alya- look at this girls inhe lagta hai k inke request and anger se hum maan jayege poor baby they dont know us
Cabir- toh kya hua alya ab jaan jayege
Mukti- we are seniors and you have to do some tasks or else you have to bear consequenses
Nandini- and why would we follow your instructions
Cabir- wo isliye ki... (thinks and then snatches her pen)
Ki tumari pen mere paas hai
Nandini- give it back its not a joke. It means alot to me give it back
Mukti- yeh chahiye tumhe... toh tumhe task karne padege tum dono ko
Nandini and Navya- okk we will do say what i have to do.
Edited by angelsunshine07 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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{PART 5 B}:


Cabir taps nandini's back and says thats like a good girl
Mukti- we all will give you one one task and do that and get simple
Alya- nah nah it wont be that simple
Dhruv- guyz out of this
Cabir- kya tu bhi yaar mazaa kirkira kar raha hai
At the time manik comes
Cabir- lo manik bhi aa gaya manik tu hi samjha isse
Manik- kya hua buddy
Dhruv- dekhna yaar yeh log bully kar rahe hai and mujhe nahi karna hai tujhe toh pata hai na mujhe kisike majburi ka faayda uthana pasand nahi
Manik- leave na guyz usse nahi pasand toh why forcing waise whoz the bakra
Cabir- these are the bakra's and point his finger toward navni
manik shocked seeing nandini and pov
Ab main kya karu inhe manna bhi nahi kar sakta and lost in deep thoughts
Mukti- manik kya hua tujhe kaha kho gaya
Manik- ahhh wo kuch nahi actually na am not feeling well toh thinking to go home you guyz enjoy am going
Alya- kya hua tum thik toh ho hum sab bhi chale kya saathme
Manik- no guyz you stay i will go dont spoil your mood
Cabir- haa okay if you need anything just call us
Manik- haa haa pakka enjoy.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
{PART 5 C}:


Manik left from there because he cant say stop his friend they will ask for reason and he dont have reason he cant support nandini
Cabir- tum dono bach gayi k manik aur dhruv nahi hai but fikr mat kato humlog bhi koi aasaan task nahi dene wale
Navya- jo bhi hum karege par batao toh sahi
Mukti- curious haa.. acha ok i will start pehle task main dungi... sing song right now at this place they were standing in college corridor
Nandini- kya?? Are you mad.. no way i wont we wont
Alya- pen chahiye naa toh karo
Nandini- ok
Manik was still there matlab little far
Nandini started
Hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm
Hmmm hmmm
Hmmm
Dehliz pe mere dil ki jo rakhe hai tumne kadam tere naam pe meri zindagi likhdi mere humdum
And she was so lost in the she took a turn and dashed with a peon she was about to fall but by the tym manik came running and hold her she was so scared that she closed her eyes and when she opened it was manik holding her
Navya started haa sikha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena haaa maine jeena mere humdum
Naa sekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise na kabhi jeena mere humdum
Here manan were lost in each they were still in same position till cabir tapped manik
Cabir- bro
Manik- haaa
Cabir- gaya nahi abhi tak
Manik- jaa hi raha tha then saw this girl falling so came to help her
Alya- tum toh superman ho naa jo bhagte huye aa gaye help karne
Manik- humanity naam ki bhi cheez hoti hai
Mukti- manik humanity ki baat tu karra hai lolzz

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