MANAN FF: MANAN STORY OF FIREFLIES AND STARS PART-13A,B,C ON (PAGE-30)

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Ky2holic

@Ky2holic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#181

Awesome! Loved the way Manik is shown making cute plans to meet Nandu😛 Cabir the Cupid😆 plz make manik realize his love for nandu soon😃😳 keep writing! Love it!

Love,

Aishwarya😊

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#182

hehe i am missing my caibra so badly
richa mam interview pada cabir death was predecided... but still miss him like hell
miss manan fights
please do continue
bbye sumi

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harshanisha

@harshanisha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#183

Amazing update
👏 waiting...

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Pankhuri jain

@angelsunshine07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#184

(Part-13a):-

Cabir went from there leaving manik in deep thoughts

Manik pov does its really love or attraction no no its not love how can i love someone except fab 5 kuch bhi bol raha hai cabir if its love toh ek minute i will check he takes out his phone and goes to google and check "how to findout its love"

Cabir was going but he saw nandu coming that too alone he went to her

Cabir- hi nandu.. acha hua tum mujhe mil gayi mujhe tumse hi kaam tha

Nandu- mujhse??? kya kaam hai bolo

Cabir- woh... ummm. Hmmm...

Nandini- are say naa

Cabir- do you like manik

Nandini- yes he is good guy but thoda akdu like coconut hard from outside soft from inside

Cabir- areee dumb main uss like ki baat nahi karra hoon main crush wale like ki baat karra hoon

Nandini blushes and say aisa kuch nahi hai i dont crush on him kuch bhi mat bolo tum

Cabir- acha aisa kuch nahi hai so why are you blushing bolo say say dekho mujhe mat banao i know about you and him

Nandini- wo actually i dont know its crush like or what but whenever you guys tease alya by his name i get angry i dont know why but i does

Cabir- its lau dumbo

Nandini- lau???

Cabir- matlab love in cabira's language

Nandini- aisa kuch nahi hai kuch bhi mat bolo

Cabir- aisa hi hai you both has falled for each other and he starts singing

pyaar hua ikraar hua hai pyaar se fir kyu darta hai dil and goes from there leaving nandini in deep thought

Nandini pov is it love i mean is it really love but he said both does manik loves me too is it true and she blushes

Manik was busy in finding out is it love or not navya was paasing by manik was so busy in phone that he didnt notice her navya went there and peeped in his phone and she read loudly "how to find it is love" manik got shocked by hearing her voice he hidded his phone

Navya- ab chupa k fayda nahi maine toh padliya

Manik- kya?? Kya?? Kya padha tumne

Navya- jo tumne sunna

Manik- aisa kuch nahi jao tum yaha se (angrily)

Navya- accha accha jaa rahe hai gussa kyu ho rahe ho and she goes thinking kya yeh bhi nandini ko pasand karne lagaya hai mujhe kuch toh karna padega

Nandini and cabir informed everyone both practicing together

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Pankhuri jain

@angelsunshine07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#185

(Part-13b):-

Cabir was coming back alone navya saw him and thought to talk to him about manan

Navya- cabir ruko ruko ruko

Cabir- kya hai rajdhani madhubala

Navya- are baat karni thi tumse

Cabir- kya baat jaldi bolo

Navya- yaha nahi chalo akele main

Cabir- aeee akele main mujhe tumari niyat thik nahi lag rahi

Navya- aree aisa nahi hai kuch mujhe tumse manan ke baare main baat karni hai

Cabir's pov

manan isse kya baat karni hai and says chalo chalte hai and they go to lawn

Navya- woh actually na nandini is in love with manik but woh accept nahi kar rahi

Cabir- what and mujhe nahi nahi bol rahi thi woh you know what even manik loves her but even he is not accepting

Navya- i found manik googling "how to find its love"

Cavya- kya sachi matlb dono ka wow

Navya- hum kya bol rahe the lets bring them together kuch karte hai naa

Cabir- yeah good idea kuch karte hai will bring them together

Aryamann was alone in his room he was finding guitar soha came finding him aryamann was messed up as he was not getting his guitar he was roaming in whole room and soha came from behind she was about to tap but aryamann turned himself and both dashed each other and soha falled but aryamann catched her

*** eye lock***

both lost in each other but then nandini came and she saw both of them together without saying she went from there directly to manik after some time arha realized there position and both released each other and both were feeling awkward

Nandini- manik tumse kaam hai jaldi come with me

Manik's pov:

isse kya kaam aagaya ab yeh kya bolne wali hai and says accha chalo

They both goes to pool side

Manik- kya hua say

Nandini- woh naa... ummm.. ammm... hmmm..

Manik's pov:

yeh itna soch kyu rahi hai kya bolne wali hai abhi

Nandini- manik tumhe kya hua kya soch rahe ho

Manik- kuch nahi waiting for what you gonna say toh say

Nandini- wo naa arha love each other specially soha she is crazy for aryamann can we do something to bring them together please

Manik- kya we??? Are you nuts hum kaise karege

Nandini- yaar manik lets try na (sad face)

Manik pov:

yeh toh sad ho gayi nahi nahi i cant see her like this and says ok thik hai

Nandini gets sooo happy she is like ty ty ty manik tysooosooosoomuch and she hugs him

Manik pov: hug

haaye and he hugs her back

Edited by angelsunshine07 - 9 years ago

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Pankhuri jain

@angelsunshine07

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#186

(Part-13c):-

Nandini leaves manik and says Time to go

They both go to living room where already everyone was present except cavya and cavya came that too together all were shock but were happy too that cavya getting closer

Everybody took there places and started mukti started guitar string hmm hmm hm hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm...

Manik looking at nandini

(dehliz pe mere dil k jo rakhe hai tune khadam)

Nandini-

(tere naam pe meri zindagi likhdi mere humdum)

Cabir looking at navya and point manan showing her about manan

(haaa sikha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena haa sikha jeena mere humdum)

Navya looking at cabir

(naa sikha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena naa sikha jeena tere bina humdum)

Dhruv looking at alya

(dehliz pe mere dil k jo rakhe hai tune khadam)

Alya looking at dhruv-

(tere naam pe meri zindagi likhdi mere humdum)

Soha looking at aryamann

(haaa sikha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena haa sikha jeena mere humdum

naa sikha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena naa sikha jeena tere bina humdum)

Abhimanyu looking at mukti

(Hmm hmm hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm... sachi se hai yeh tarife dil se jo maine kari hai-2 .. jo tu mila toh saji hai dunia meri humdum tere naam pe meri zindagi likhdi meri humdum)

Mukti looking at abhi-

(aasmaan mila zameen ko meri adhe adhe pure hai hum tere naam pe meri zindagi likhdi mere humdum)

Everybody together

( haaa sikha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena haa sikha jeena mere humdum

naa sikha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena naa sikha jeena tere bina humdum

Hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm hmm hmmm)

Finally update yeaahh so sorry for delay ..

Enjoy the update

Happy reading

Lots of love

Pankhuri

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nandu00sr

@nandu00sr

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#187

First of all.. Thansk for pm.. Such a cute update... Haha all trying to make the other couple realize their feelings.. Wow... Interesting... And the ong sequence.. Awww... Manik googling how to find it is love.. Hahaa god.. Manik u r amazing man.. Y dnt u search ur mind?? U l get a perfect answer than google 😊 ... So manan cavya mukbhi arsh dhrulya.. Manan r on their way... Yippee... Loved ur update dear.. Thanks for pm.. Take care.. Love u.. 😊

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#188

Wonderful update...loved his googling and how CAVYA helped them, h reaction to the hug and ofcourse the song, that song is MaNan ...beautiful update, great job, can't wait to see what happens with them...