MANAN FF: MANAN STORY OF FIREFLIES AND STARS PART-13A,B,C ON (PAGE-30) - Page 16

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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely I really liked it.
Do continue soon will be waiting eagerly.
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Posted: 10 years ago
NICE
LOVE IT
THANKS FOR PM
CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mera ghar hi toh tumhara sasural hai😆 lol manik... n how he dodged chachi's breakfast... osum update... thora late tha... but it's ok... 😃 ty for pm n update jaldi this tym ok??
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally with lots of struggle i post a banner yeaahhh😉😛

thanks cute-aly for this awesome banner i loved it mwaaahhh😉😊 thanks🤗❤️
love youu❤️
guys plzzz check d banner on my 1st page & yeaaa next part pakka kal ⭐️
have a look
lots of love
PANKHURI⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Banner is jst awesome dear..
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Posted: 10 years ago

{PART-11A}:




Unknown- awww my baby toh naam batao
Dhruv- you are the one who is sweeter than sugar who has mesmerizing eyes who has heart robbing smile who can make anyone fall for and who is most beautiful girl in the world my bae my heart my alya...
Alya-awww maine toh bas naam pucha tha tumne toh itni taarif kar di
Dhruv- accha ab ankhoon se haath hatoagi..
Alya- haaa haaa sorry
Abhi haatati hoon
And she takes her hands off and dhruv see those flowers
He was just lost in admiring those flowers.
Alya- pasand aaya
Dhruv- pasand aaya i loved it wow you are best but less than those flowers
Alya- you!!!!!!!

and alya runs to hit him and he runs far far
(Guyz you might be thinking yeh dono relation main kab aaye woh log starting se hi couple hai but fab 5 k alawa kisiko yeh baat pata nahi)

Fab 5 scene:
Mukti- yaar yeh dhrulya waha chale gaye kal elimination round hai aur practice bhi karna hai
Cabir- mukti tujhe sachme tenion ho raha hai we are fab 5 hum kabhi nahi haarte tumhe pata hai naa
Manik- cabir you are not wrong but not right also kabhi bhi humare competitor ko kam nahi samajna chaiye nahi over confident hona chaiye
By the time dhrulya comes
Alya- you are right manik
Mukti - lo aa gayi manik ki chamchi
Alya- shut up mukti yaar kuch bhi bolti hai
Mukti- acha acha sorry jokes apart kaha the tum dono
Dhrulya- wooo... hum...
Cabir- haa haaa tum dono hi
Alya- aaahhh
Manik- guyz leave naaa yaar kyu pareshaan karre ho tumlog indono ko..
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Posted: 10 years ago

{PART-11B}:




Mukbir- acha maaf kiya bas
Dhrulya- thanxxx

Manik was thinking about nandini he was wanted to talk to her but he can't as he had no reason
Manik- accha guys i have idea humlog aaj raat mukti k ghar practice karnege okkk
Everyone else yaaa okk
He made plan at mukti's house because he was planning to msg nandini and ask for them to practice at mukti's house
(as aryamann lives with mukti because he is from delhi and here is only for music)
But he knows nandini won't listen so he had plans
Manik msgs nandini same thing but nandini replys no i won't do that then manik says look tumhe pata hai naa mukti's like abhimanyu and abhimanyu likes mukti too soo this is goood chance to bring them together plz for there sake nandini agreed and both kept there phones

Nandini's scene:
Nandini- guyz i was saying ki kyun naa humlog aaj raat ko practice kare kisi ke bhi ghar par mere ghar toh nahi kar sakte my house is too small and navya aur abhimanyu k bhi nahi both stays in hostel
Aryamann- mere ghar chalte hai okkk

Nandini pov:
Isne toh kaam aasaan kardia wah
Nandini answer very cheerfully haa haa kyun nahi noo issue
Aryamann- par iss baat pe tum itna khush kyu ho rahi ho
Nandini- khush nahi houngi kya music ki practice karne wale hai wow...
Soha- pakka wohi baat hai naa??
Nandini- why doubt hai kya??
Soha- nahi nahi aise hi puch rahi thi
Nandini- hmmm
Navya- time toh bolo hume hostel se permission lena hoga
Abhimanyu- yes mee too
Nandini- 7??? I mean is 7pm okkk
Everyone said yes done
Nandini msgs manik okkk done 7 pm at aryamann's house done??
Manik replys okkk done...
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Posted: 10 years ago

{PART-11C}:




Manik's scene:
Manik- toh guyz 7 pm at mukti's house we will practice no if no buts i want you all

Everyone agrees
Manik- main canteen jaa raha hoon kisiko kuch chaiye
Mukti- haa chocolate shake
Alya- pizza
Cabir- burger coke ice cream
Manik- aur kuch
Cabir- haaa chicken puff
Manik- chup chap saat mei chal
Cabir- aree yeh toh galat hai jab in ladkio ne bola toh haa bola maine bola toh chal saath me ek taraf equality ki baat karte ho dusri taraf partiality karte ho
Manik- Ae nautanki natak band kar aur chal
And they go towards canteen
Manik- tujhe pata hai naa mukti wo kaise sad sad rehti hai but jab woh abhimanyu ko dekhti hai toh uska eyes kitna shine karti hai woh kitna khush hoti hai
(Actually mukti lost her mom in car accident she use to love her mom alot from that day she is in lil trauma only when she is with fab 5 and abhimanyu she will be happy)
Cabir- point pe aa manik
Manik- toh maine socha aaj humlog mukti k ghar practice karenge toh maine nandini ko bhi bola k wo uske band ko leke waha practice karne
Cabir- ohhh toh its about nandini
Manik- aisa nahi hai its about mukti
Cabir- chal ab mujhe mat bana samjha naa.. tu jis school ka student waha ka main head master hoon
Notice kar rha hoon main tujhe jabse nandini aai hai you are changed
Manik- nandini bhi reason hai but mukti is main
Cabir- chal mujhe mat bana i know all about you
Manik blushes
Cabir- awww baby is blushing...
red red tomato tomato...
kitna cute lagra hai
Manik- aee pagal chup and he hits him friendly.


pheww!!!! Done with today's update thanks guys for being so patient & wait for my update love u all so awesome u all are ...i love ur comments 😊😊
ur comments always makes me happy keep commenting guys... let me know u like it or not😊
Lots of love
PANKHURI

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