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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: maniknandiniky2

I read the whole story in one go... rly interesting...

Love at first sight for manik... like rly...
I wasn't expecting for him to apologise to nandu like tht...
woh bhi itne urgency se... but it was rly cute... n nandu's finger on lips... she's falling for him as well nw... but whts this harshad planning nw... ufff tension yaar!!! Plz update soon... with more manan parts😉


thats so sweet of u
thankyou so much😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

{PART-8A}:



Nandini reaches to gate they sit in car
Navya- guyzz isse milo yeh hai humari bestfriend nandini
Soha- hii nandini i am soha.. soha khurana
Abhimanyu- and me abhimanyu thakkar
Aryamann- i aryamann khanna
Navya- agar yeh intro intro ho gaya hai toh baat aage badaye toh tell me hum kaha jaa rahe hai
Abhimanyu- pata nahi soha saying pool party
I say beach party
Aryamann says club
Ab tum dono apne raaye batao

Nandini Pov :
Yaar i cant swim pool party toh bilkul nahi and club no ways beer and all no aiyappa never
Nandini-beach
Navya- club
Aryamann- yeh toh locha ho gaya accha chalo lets do minority win toh lets do pool party

Nandini pov:
Aiyooo aiyappa ab kya karu i cant say no to them

Manik's scene
Mukti calls manik
Mukti- kaha hai tu kamine
Manik- ghar pe (actually he was still in clg and he lied to fab5 for the first that too for nandini)
Mukti- zinda hai ya mar gaya
Manik- mar gaya tujhse meri aatma baat kar rahi hai
Mukti- wow technology kitni badd gayi naa atmao ko bhi call kia jaa sakta hai
Manik- haa naa congo to technology and science
Mukti- chal dramebaaz humlog party karre hai tu aara hai kya
Manik- prty kyu???
Mukti- humlog ko kbhi reason ki zarurat padhi hai haa ya naa bol khali
Manik thinks alot and says ummm hmmm
Mukti- kya hai jaldi bol na
Manik- haaa thik i am coming tumlog jao main aata hoon.
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Posted: 10 years ago

{PART-8B}:



Fantastic 5 reached their destination oberoi hotel nandini and navya for the first time entered such grand hotel for them it was like dream
Navya pinch herself and says ouch nahi nahi yeh sach hai
Nandini- wow this hotel is soo beautiful i never saw such places
Soha- hmm i know even i love this place isliye i said lets go here
Abhimann(aryamann and abhimanyu)
Said haa bhai aap hi sahi the aap hi sahi ho aap hi sahi rahoge
Soha and navni laughed
Soha - lets go to pool side

Everyone together says haaa chalo
And All went to pool side and went to pool except nandini and abhimanyu... nandini she made a excuse that she is having fever and abhimanyu went to have some snacks and wine

Manik scene:
All were in car and manik was in other car even they reached the destination don't be surprised the destination is same they all went to pool side and found fantastic five already there mukti's mood got spoiled seeing navya there but her eyes were finding abhimanyu and manik got totally excited when he saw nandini he was so hapoy and blushing nandini was still unaware about fab5 being there as she was busy in her phone and she kept earphone on
Aryamann- guyzz even you came here mukti tum kitna stalk karogi humlog ko
Mukti- bhai just stop it haa.. stalk or main wo bhi apko
Aryamann- i just love when you get irritated
Manik- Same here

And everybody laughs

Mukti friendly punches on manik's tummy and says accha beta
All of sudden nandini noticed navha(soha and navya) and aryamann laughing at someone she took her eyes from them to the person on whom everybody of laughing and she recognized theres fab5 seeing fab 5 her eyes started searching manik and stopped at manik even manik was looking at her
***eye lock***
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Posted: 10 years ago

{PART-8C}:



Meanwhile abhimanyu comes aryamann ask fab5 to join them and they agree but manan were still lost in each other and cabir bring manik back from nandini land
Cabir- manik manik manik sunn sabko pata chal jayega
Manik- kya pata chalega
Cabir- dont act smart aur chal khelte hai and he leaves from there
Manik- aree aadhi baat karke chala gaya bolke toh jaa kya pata chalega
Cabir doesn't respond and jumps into pool
Manik watching nandini alone and everyone alone goes to nandini but cabir k nazro se kuch nahi chupta you know
Manik goes and sit beside and nandini and gives her pen
Nandini- thank you thank you soo much this pen means alot to me
Manik- yeah i know isliye meri duty bann gayi hai tum pen ghumao and main laa kar do
Nandini- laughs and says sorry
Manik- actually i am sorry mere friends k liye thode mastikhor hai but dil k ache hai
Nandini- i know

Before manik could ask anhthing alya called her
Alya- manik udar kya kar rahe ho come and play

Again nandini got jealous when she saw alya calling manik
Nandini murmur jao jao jaake khelo warna alya mar jayegi

Manik- tumne kuch bola
Nandini- nahi toh kuch nahi

Alya again calls:
This time nandini's jealousy crossed limits
And nandini says jao na kabse bola rahi hai
Arre jaa raha ho naa

And he goes and they play and have lots of fun but manik was still thinking about nandini how to take her down in pool

Manik pov:

Dimaag ki batti jalli
Manik throws the ball out of pool near nandini and ask her to bring it when she brings and come to give manik pulls her down in pool nandini scream i cant swim i cant swim she was trying hard to getup but she can't manik gave his hand to her
She holds his hand and get up and hold manik tightly tooo tight actually hugs him as she was scared.

Done with today's update...
Thanks all guys for your comments i totally loved it yar..
& sorry for being not able to reply each one once i get a time i rply to u all..
hmmm hmmm manan pool scene😳 whats their frnds reaction haan u want u know naa soo fatafat rply kro aur like kro😊
waiting for ur rply thoda to lamba rply kro na

Lots of love
PANKHURI
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nothing can hide from the eyes of the great Cabiraaa!!😆
But srsly... Manbir relationship is osum
Oh and... first reply I think...😃
Edited by maniknandiniky2 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: maniknandiniky2

Nothing can hide from the eyes of the great Cabiraaa!!😆

But srsly... Manbir relationship is osum
Oh and... first reply I think...😃



thanks & yeaa first rply😉
love you😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angelsunshine07



thanks & yeaa first rply😉
love you😊


Welcum dea🥱❤️
Uff not tht 1... 😊 this 1... n on phone idk how to delete it...
Edited by maniknandiniky2 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Cabiraaa!! So observant he is ;)

Alya toh mar hi jayegi seeing Manan hug 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update
Loved it
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wooahooo Fantabulous

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Amazingly awesome dear... ye Manik b naa Majnu kahi kaa 🤣
ty for pm update soon

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