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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsm update
with a new entry nd some
exciting plans r going to take place
too good

update jldi
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wowiii
It's so amazing
Spcly the way u added pics
It's like we r actually seeing whatever is happening
So so so awesome
Loved it
And Thnk u for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
i m one of the silent reader ..but really u r amazing writer
i m touched with this story.. waiting ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...
I lyked karan's character ...he's lively...
Nandu embarrassed...hehehe...
Fab5's plan is working...
Very well written...
Thnkz 4 the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
See as i said... I am back with another part in less then 24 hours...see how generous i am becoming...but more tgan you i am excited to write these chappies... Hope you enjoy it...

CHAPTER 28B - MAIN JO

As everyone was enjoying the basing each other nandini's head was chasing a different track...

(That chunni which was supposed to be drapped around Arushi... Was on me unknowingly... And I don't realise when I touched all the Shagun stuff before Arushi which was to be done by her prior me... This roka completed on note of manik and nandini eventually... Gosh!!!! I am going with all this... I better get a drink for myself to flush these thoughts out)

"One blackberry smash with half filled singke malt scotch please" ordered nandini at the bar.

"And what makes you think I you will get it" said Aryamann coming out of the counter.

"Aryamann, don't piss me off... I am out of my mind right now"

"I don't care... Last time at office party... My heart was pumping in my mouth because of your over possessive boyfriend was on verge of killing me for making you drink"
Said Aryamann with mocking smile.

Aryamann's 'boyfriend' clicked her over messed up head .

"Argghh!!! Shut up... Don't piss me off... I am already running out of space for hiding bodies... " shouted nandini at Aryamann taking him by shock.

"But nandini"" Aryamann tried his luck once again justvto be pulled by nandini closer by his collar "DO what is asked to... Don't stress you pea sized brain" which scared Aryamann to his wits.

"Calm down young lady! I will get it for you" said Aryamann loosening nandini's hold from his collar and ran towards behind the bar as fast as he could as shock was understatement for what he just faced.

"Like manik, like nandini... Totally made for each other" mummered Aryamann preparing her drink keeping scotch content less than needed.

"Here you go!!! Please if anyone asked you about who gave you this"" said Aryamann with pleading eyes.

"Don't worry I don't get tipsy with a single drink... I have come long way in it... No one will know" said nandini with a smirk and tasted the drink.

"Hmm... That's awsome man!! You did a great job" said nandini giving him a side huge and walked away.

"Dafaq just happened?"whispered Aryamann walking towards the sitting area with his own glass.

"What about the wedding...how you want it" asked karan while sipping his drink.

"See, I was happy with a simple court marriage... But nandini wants it to be huge...can't help it"

"I am happy with none" mummered manik under his breath.

"Karan, I want exclusively a destination wedding with whole pomp and show" said nandini being all pumped up, as the drink was showing its effects.

"Destination wedding... Hmm...nice idea" said mukti.

"But question arises where" said aliya.

"Phuket?" Said dhruv to which everyone nodded negatively.

"Tucson! It will be amazing place to wed" said Navya to which no one agreed again.

"Las Vegas, Nevada... Man!! Ultimate place for wedding" said Cabir.

"You can't be serious!!" Said manik giving him unbelievable looks " it wont be ultimate place for wedding because all of you will be found lying half dead on the casino floor with scotch in your hands..so chunk up with your idiotic ideas" said manik.

"What you have to say in it" asked manik looking at cute frown on nandini's face.

"I was thinking... How udaipur sounds" said nandini to which everyone's face lit up.

"Woah!!! Nanu... Awsome idea..." Said Arushi taking nandini in a side huge.

"Yeah!!! A royal happening wedding in a palace... How dreamy it is" said mukti with an dreamy expression to which Aryamann got closer to her and whispered in her ear "really!! Is it ... If so... I am ready to have such wedding or even huge than this when ever you want"

Mukti glared at him and kicked his leg hard making him scream in pain.

"Aryamann!!! What happened are you alright" asked nandini worriedly.

"Yes Aryamann!!! Tell what happened" asked mukti with a challenging smirk as if going to cut him down in pieces.

"Caaa...Crab...wild crab it was"
Said afraid Aryamann looking towards mukti to which mukti frowned hearing aryamann adressing her as ' wild crab' to which aryaman smirk and continued "Yeah!! A wild crab just bit me hard in my leg"

Everyone gave his a confused look but manik shook his head in disbelief knowing what exactly would have happened
" poor guy" he muttered under his breath.

"Crab... In the hall..mummy!!!!" Screamed horrified kids.

"Don't be scared we will find it and kill it"

"Yeah! Just be hear... Call the freaking manager of the hotel... What kind of nonsense is this!!!" Said Cabir angrily looking at her princess being all scared.

Manik don't reacted as he knew what happened.

He noticed nandini smiling looking aimlessly at the floor and giggled slightly while moving glass towards her lips when manik noticed the glass in her hand.

"Freak!" Said manik under his breath , standing up. He held nandini's hand and pulled her away while others were busy in finding 'nonexistent crab'.

"What the hell are you doing" asked nandini, losing his hold on her wrist.

"Whats this" said manik indicating towards glass in her hand.

"None of your business" said nandini pulling her self out of his hold.

"What makes you think that you are none of my business. Each and very thing about is my concern and business. " said manik leaning close to her.

Main jo teri
Baaton mein gayi pighal
Neeyat meri
Jaye na kahin fisal

He leaned forward and took the box from her hands, involuntarily brushing his fingers over her navel over her saree. Nandini widened her eyes and stood numb leaving her hands in the air. She tucked her tummy muscles immediately in a reflex action to his touch .

"Manik, stop talking rubbish... I am very much in my senses coz one drink doesn't make a difference to me neither do you" said nandini in frustration as her over messed up mind kicked her hard.

" Prove it then"
. He said leaning more closer and intoxicating her with his musky body perfume. Its not his first time coming so close to her. But everytime he closes that tiny gap between them, her sensitive senses shot up to the eternal wonderland suffocating her with new desires. She is already confused with the way her hormones are reacting to hhim and he is not just making it easy for her.

"Prove it nandini...let ne see how uneffected you are by me"He whispered huskily savoring her pink beauty who is dangerously close to him.

She lost in the moment, replied with same passion, Hmm?

"Nandini, say something" manik smoked seeing nandini reacting to the closeness.

Kya boloon? She is lost. She didnt know what's happening and what the whole discussion is about.


Main jo teri
Baaton mein gayi pighal
Mere bhi
Bas mein nahi hai sambhalna

Main jo oohh ohh
Tu jo oohh ohh
Ooohh ohh

Anything, but atleast say something His erratic breaths breezed over her ears and flicked the tiny strands onto her face.

I love you manik! She closed her eyes and spoke shyly.

Wo jo aadhe
Reh gye raat bhar
Lamhe poore
Jee le jo ab hum agar

Wo jo aadhe
Reh gye raat bhar
Tere bhi
Bas mein nahi hai sambhalna

Manik malhotra's heart skipped a beat hearing her like that for the first time. Seduction at its peak. The way she blushed, the way she turned her face to the side, the way she closed her eyes dramatically, the way her lips yearned to say those words everything just fell in his heart so beautfiully. He became most wealthiest man in the world at that very moment.

Do pal ki ye zindagi
Ek pal to jeene de abhi
Aye waqt tham jaa yahin

Do pal ki ye zindagi
Ek pal to jeene de abhi
Aye waqt tham jaa


He spoke nothing, just stood there in silence admiring her radiance. But he knew they both are living in that moment.

She opened her eyes as she didnt hear him say anything. She turned her face and looked at him who is boring his eyes onto her. He smirked totally feeling her quiver.

Main jo teri
Baaton mein gayi pighal
Neeyat meri
Jaye na kahin fisal


She lowered her eyes shyly and landed them on his smirking lips. She closed her eyes immediately as she started feeling their effect on her. She reopened her eyes and checked his lips again. His smirk became more and more prominent. She re-closed her eyes again, cursing for mentally losing herself to his handsomeness.

He noticed her opening and shutting her eyes. He also noticed that everytime she opened her eyes, it landed on his lips. He blushed and grinned at the thought that she, his wouod be wife is checking him out, and great possibility that she is now having dirty thoughts, considering her perverted brain track record.

You are checking out my lips! He said smirking with a teasing smile.

She wide-opened her eyes and stuttered,Nai, No. She looked frantic.

I just saw you doing that for last 2 mins.

"You have probably gone mad" said nandini plastering her embarrassment with smirk.

"If you say so" said manik with a liplop smile.


Part c will be even more fun...I bet on that...many more surprise but probably shock for the characters but you will love it...


For that... You have to leave comment lambaa lambaa...

Silent reader... I feel happy when one of my silent readers come up with their views...

I have noticed that many of my regular commenters have stopped commenting... Are yaar!!! Want a paakko shayari from my side to do that...


PS - I will be sending PMS from next update to only regular commenters of the ff... Rest please unbuddy me if you are not liking my work...


Stay happy stay blessed...

Mishshergill

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome...read 28a and 28b...loving these wedding functions and fab5 plans a lot...
manan scenes was as usual romantic...passion filled and magical...
u penned beautifully...
continue asap
take care
thanks a lot for the pm


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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsome awsome...
Manik malhotra and his charme
Woww nandini has gone hehehev
Waiting for the fun
Cont soon
Edited by Hadjer13 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
really nice yrr😊...update soon plzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
hyy it waas soo grt n awsum kya bolu mai i hope nandu relizes ki love is nt when we sacrifice but it when we shuld spend the happiest hours or days with it i hope manik made nandu realize soon n but other to nandinis point of view is right too uggrrggg sorry i cant think its ur job yarr pata nahi how the story will go but i knw itna ki u will entertain us at any cost n i m addicted to ur story for that thankqq soo much for bringing such a pure story in our lifes and a real ones as life is not a bed of roses...
grt n yaa big wala dil se thankyou for the pm ots grt how much efforts u put yarr cant even thank you enuf but i can nly pray for u ...i m soo proud to b fan of urs n u r awesum keep writting we all love u aloot n ur story too so yaa thats all update soon n pm me if possible...🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice updates..!! Read both of them..
Nandini n drinks... Bad combo... Hehe
Loved aryaman in this part.. He was so cute..

Will b waiting for ur next update... ASAP

Love.. Nandini
Thanks for pm..:)

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