The Elevator- MANAN SS... CHAPTER3A,B on Page21 - Page 21

Originally posted by: yash7717

All your fault...all yours...because of you my rommies kick me out of room
Hahahha...i was laughing like hell...
It I the frst time...I was tolling on floor and laughing...

Nandini's piya ghr aya...hahahha...o m g...
And hawan krenge...like seriously ..????...

And that song...sare mnu kyu shraabi khnde ne...

Dear...u r awesome...
Hehehe...
Hallucination word sun sun k meko hallucinations aane shuru Ho gye ...
Hahahah


This story have a different plot from all...

And I loved this funky nandini...


And Manik have his infinite shades...
Jitna discover kro kam.



Please update next part soon

Most interesting story have ever read...
I am obsessed

God bless u...
Continue soon
Pm me please

Originally posted by: Natashaaa

zonni my bachaaa its awesome dear ...

superrr se v uppperrr😉...

hahaha our nautankii nandu 🤣 ...

I like dis nandu very much full on dramaqueen ...

poor manik he is suffering 😆and that apartment wala scene😳 m blushing very hard ...

and after that nandu got jhatka its hilarious...

finally he said I love u and nandu get to knw its not her hallucinations but real...

update soon..!!!!👏

and come to DM need to talk

Originally posted by: miniagrawal

Woww yrr damm awesoem...
Completely enjoyed it..
I mean so much fun..hehe.
Seriously nandu is fun on nautanki...
Omg what a song selecting...which she is singing during her drunken state...
Hehe..omg he puked on manik..
Driver seen was damm comedy...poor man...pehle monster manik then our mini monster...bhag gya.
Apartment part was hot...spevially mr. Grey part...
She us giving him hard time to control...aww.
Morning was like a dhamaka..
Poor pizza boy...me hi jaate hu kaise apni hasi control li he mene...bechara ka pizza bhi gya or wallet bhi...
But the truth is out that she is not hallicuating...
She is seriously really dumb even after seeing tgis much she think she is still hallicuating..
Unbelievable...
Omg so finally manik enter as an MD...sab bhi band baj gye...
Aww he propose her in front of eneryone...great.
Cabir part was also amazing...specially water splashing part...bechara gya kaam se...heheeehe
Stairs part was great...manik lifted her..
Haww nandu's appa is there...
Lets see whats nxt.

Awesome update.
Enjoyed it alot.
Update soon please.

Love...mini

Originally posted by: Fairy_Manan

OMG... How do u manage to write so well...???

Seriously! ! Beautifully expressed by u..!!!

Loved it. ..

Hallucinations. .!!! Hehehe no it was reality. .

Manik Malhotra. . MD.

His own apartment !!

These all came as a shock to Ms. BHOLI Nandini Murthy !!!

Cabir bechara.. got a nice one in the name of hallucinations.

I loved the part yar !!! It's awesome

Originally posted by: asangel

Sch an amzng updt... really vry fnny... chrctr of nandu is hillarious... jahaha drunk nandu is superb... nd poor mnk... Fnlly he cnfssd...nd trth reveals dt he is nt hr hallucinatn... Bt nandu must be angry on him.. i mean wt mnk did is nt good so she mst be more angry na... Wse mnk lvs hr a lot bt kissng any grl without hr prmissn nd dn cvr up dt act by namng it hallucinatn is quite embrrssd fr any grl... Bt must say u r suprb... Thnks fr dis wndrfull stry nd plz post nxt one soon...jst cnt wait

Originally posted by: 86MISHA

Most interesting story have I ever read

Fabulous job

Incredible story

Awesome mindblowing

Perfectly written

Please update soon

Eagerly waiting... .