The Elevator- MANAN SS... CHAPTER3A,B on Page21 - Page 11

Originally posted by: kitkat5756

hey aqsa ..kya likhte hain yaar tu 😊 awsome writter u r dear... first congrats to u for ur new story "the Elevator " really loved the prolong & chapter-1 ..u certainly give long long wala updates..loved to read ur all updates ...your both stories are really beautiful and totally different from each other..just have a chotu sa request please do continue with both of your stories dont give a halt to any of your stories please 😳😳
now coming to the "the Elevator" the concept is really good ... manik here is a bit arrogant and rude and on the other side nandu is bubbly girl with childish nature really sweet.. its gonna be fun to read their love story... love at first sight its gonna be intresting... but we want cabir in ur story please bring him in your story..its really fun to read cabir in any story just loved his nature and as he always act as a cupid for our manan and give character stretch if possible then we can get an idea about all the characters in your story...really loved ur first chap and chaps in "loving her is red"... please give updates jaldi se..really looking forward for your updates of both of your story ...may Allah bless u..tc ...with lots of love and hugs😳

Originally posted by: musicialtie

ohhh myyy godd I am do in love with this ff.

girl I want to hug you fr this awesome funny blushy mushy mushy cute romantic adorable ff.

spclly the part 2.

The hallucinations
the manik spell
the elevator kiss
those steal kisses
the cuddles to the smirks.

god I am so in love with this ff.

plc do update soon

Originally posted by: sarita2393

Wooowww

Its just amazing

I lyk nandu hallycinating part
N ofcorse their frst kiss
In lift

Oh my god

Mtlb kaha se itti energy aati h

Itti achi n romantic lynes
Likhne k liye

Hatss offf to u dear

N thanx for pm
N pllss next part update soon

Originally posted by: manan_0711

Ty for d pm...

OMG...!!!

I was laughing lyk hell I had to hold my stomach...

hahahahahahahh poor nandu...😆

manik oh god he is too much...

God dat auto scene was hilarious...I couldn't stop my laughing...

d elevator scene...hahaha...

d way he was behaving with nandu...freak I was going to fall down my bed while reading d whole update...

seriously loved d update to d core...

it was so much fun reading dis chapter...

God cabini talk...it was already confusing n after reading I got more confused...

but on a serious note d update awwwsummm...

hahaha nandu...😆wat 'll happen if she 'll come to knw dat all things were happening in real not her imagination...manik baba u r dead...😆

God dat movie scene n manan scene was awesome...n damn funny...😆😆

loved manbir conference room scene...

all d whole...d update was super super super awesome...

plz continue soon...

'll b waiting for d update

Originally posted by: shruthi.kumar

Aqsa... wow wat an update bhyee :*
Auto vala n nandu scene .. hahaha XD
manik kissed nandu..dat too just like dat..my reac was same as dat if nandu..my eyes popped out..
n manik behavious y so chilled out bhyee..n bichari nandu .. hahaha..
N lol..d way cabir said abt hallucination.. do teen br pdhna pda .. tb bhi smjh ni aya XD XD
den i hve dis major doubt..aise kaise.. mtlb kaise manik nandu k aas paas..ghr pe bhi.. n den he disappears.like how???? :O dont tell me vo koi vampire kuch h Xd
In all mst update.. dat too looonnggg one.. ahh i love u so much.
n dis crazy nandu is fun.. n manik (i dont knoe wat to say) bs i loved it :* :*

Originally posted by: star_struck

why? why? why?..I read both chapter together and I know chapter 2 was really long..but why it ended..I never wanted it to end!!..I loved it soo much..!! poor nandini hallucinations hehe!!..kuch bhi mtlb!!..manik kitna sharif banta hai..aur kitna chalu hai hehe!!..pagal kr diya nandu ko!!..hahaha..I just can't stop laughing and blushing na!!..hehe loved all kisses..ghr mei bhi ghuss gya!!..can't wait for the realisation hitting nandini..bechari pagal hojayegi!!..manik ki real identity ptta chali toh..toh ptta nhi kya hogga!!..uff too much fun!!..loved cabir and alyas reaction on maniks loveria!!..waiting for party fun..!!...

Please continue soon..!!..


Ps-I too love Alu Arjun..but I've watched only dangerous khiladi and lucky the racer :P

Originally posted by: star_struck

chala..chala dimag abhi chala..abhi samja muje ss ka naam elevator kyun hai...*-*...hehe!!..hass mat..!!

PS-tub light bhi nhi phool-jadi hun mei!!..time lagta hai analyse krne mei calculate krne mei!!.. :P