The Elevator- MANAN SS... CHAPTER3A,B on Page21 - Page 12

Originally posted by: Ashmita18

Superb... what an update... hehehe the kiss in the elevator... and then nandu's confusion about it being real or just her imagination... awww poor nandu... I mean what a brilliant concept uh have come up with... I was like what was that... I myself got confused that what was actually happening... but finally I got to know it was all for real and nothing was her imagination or should I say hallucinations... I loved the part where manik held cabir's neck for teaching hallucination stuff to nandini... and manik's craving for nandini well it's like she is oxygen to him... it was very extraordinary...I am dumbfounded... I mean seriously this was one hell of a post... just commendable... It was beyond the limits of brilliance... it was that awesome... uh have an amazing talent... your creativity is just mind blowing... uh always just amaze me with your such incredibly excellent and beautiful post... I loved it sooo sooo much... hatss off to uh... I bow down before uh and your talent... well done... thank uh soo much for the pm... really appreciate it yrr... please continue very very soon... waiting sooo sooo eagerly... keep it up girl... best wishes... :) :D

Bazz..ab yeh kl kab hogaa!!..I'm already jumping..hehe lamp..aessa bola meko :/ ..chl koi nhi bol le..kyunki kl you will update *-*...haaye !!..kb se intezaar kr rhi hun mei..intaaah hogai meri toh hehe..but I know you will reward my patience!!..

waiting..waiting..tick tick 1..tick tick 2...

love kavya!! :*

Originally posted by: star_struck

Bazz..ab yeh kl kab hogaa!!..I'm already jumping..hehe lamp..aessa bola meko :/ ..chl koi nhi bol le..kyunki kl you will update *-*...haaye !!..kb se intezaar kr rhi hun mei..intaaah hogai meri toh hehe..but I know you will reward my patience!!..

waiting..waiting..tick tick 1..tick tick 2...

love kavya!! :*

This cchapter war crazy but indeeed hot and funny I just loved it and I was laughing like a maniac iwhile readind this chapter plz plz plz continue soon loving itand sorry for not commenting in the first chapter

This cchapter war crazy but indeeed hot and funny I just loved it and I was laughing like a maniac iwhile readind this chapter plz plz plz continue soon loving itand sorry for not commenting in the first chapter 🤣 👏

Hey when you will update i am eagerly waiting plz update fast soon

Hey Aqsa!!! Awesome story dear!!! Today after so many days I got my mobile back and thought to read a story on IF and I Just came across your story today only and read it!!! N honestly telling uh I was very very dissappointed after reading the Prologue Coz I was thinking that the Girl in Cabin wud b nandini rather than Mukti!!! Hahahahaha But after that thought that you can't do this to MaNan Fans and after reading the First chapter I was so mch releaved that I can't tell Uh babes!!! Vo kehte hai na "Meri jaan mei jaan aa gayi"!!! hehehehehe Bahut zada funny ho gya na!!! But I loved the character of Nandini in Your SS!!! Itzzz amazing!!! And yeah The food part was hilarious !!! Bechara Manik kaha phasa diya tmne Usse!!! And coming to the second chapter It was just Awww!!! First the Auto driver and Nandini conversation!!! N specially the bhojpuri part!!! I loved it!!! Or uske baad MaNan kiss woh bhi second chapter mei!!! You made my day dear!!! And here goes the Entry or our naughty n funny Cabira!!! Loved the character of Cabira!!! Par "Hallucinations" Like seriously!!! I was laughing like maniacs while reading your SS!!! Btw lemme tell uh I am not That much fond of South Indian Movies but I watch them atleast 2 or 3 in a week!!! N yeah same pinch I am also a Allu Arjun fan!!! But I haven't watches Arya 2 till now!!!But after reading your story I am gonna download it today only and watch it!!! Bahut zada lamba comment ho gaya na par kya karu rok hi nhi payi apne aap ko comment krne se tmhari story par or comment bhi kiya toh wo bhi itna lamba!!! U r an awesome writer man!!! Love uh loads for writing such a awesome story!!!U r amazing!!! Hats off to your story!!! Keep writing like this!!! And waiting eagerly for the next update!!! Plzzz jaldi krna!!! Eagerly waiting for the next chapter!!! I am sending a Buddy request to you so uh dare not to forget me to send a PM of your story!!!N yeah HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY!!!

kal th aagaya aur kuch time me khatam bhi ho jaega plzz update fast naaa plzzz