Actually when i was writing I thought this part is to long but then it turned out so short🥱 i will try to update longer part.wow...interesting story
bt its vry smallnxt tym a big update plzzzcontinue soon...
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Actually when i was writing I thought this part is to long but then it turned out so short🥱 i will try to update longer part.wow...interesting story
bt its vry smallnxt tym a big update plzzzcontinue soon...
thanks dear will update soon.Originally posted by: Angel1312
very interesting concept ...please continue
thanks sweaty😳Originally posted by: masoomii
awsm.. :D I loved it
pagal and me😡 that i know. Hehehehe😉 and dont worry nandu ko theek kar ke hi shadi karwaongi or i will try my best to lead the story to ur expectation and pm me about the track i will surely use it in my story.Originally posted by: masoomii
hehe ur pagal.. this is just awsm..but plz.. ek kaam kario if ur going to show there wedding. in future..Nandani ko theek krkr krwaio.. warna wo bhot common cheez ho jaygi nd story mai uniqueness honi chahiye..baki I'm here to help u had a track in my mind for ur story :D haha madly in love almost done with next chap.. luv u :* tc
thanks dear the secret will be out soon.Originally posted by: parthadmirer
Really nice update...
the attitude of fab5 ... the description of its members.. all too good.so waiting for the secret to open...👏
oh thats Ok sweaty u liked it thats enough for me. Thanks alot. And yes manik is big casanovaOriginally posted by: angel2015
aahhh..i just read..i am late..sorry for that..but it was worth reading...
so MANIK MALHOTRA IS A BIG CASANOVA...Hmmm intersting..your 1st update is quite amazing...must continue soon..all the best..thanks for the pm..love youmahi 😊
Originally posted by: CROCKOMICHI
oh thats Ok sweaty u liked it thats enough for me. Thanks alot. And yes manik is big casanova
Love u 2 sweaty its all bcz of your enourgment or else i was thinking if i will post this story i will get tamatoes and chapals on my face ayooo.⭐️
CHAPTER 2.
Life is most complicated subject in this whole world whenever we feel that life is in our control it doesn't fail to prove us wrong the very next moment by surprising us. No matter whatever it took it can also be the bitter truth of our past or our worst fair. Same think was going to happen with The Manik Molhothra who think that he has all control over his life and everyone around who was sleeping fearlessly in his bad unaware of the fact that finally his life and his destiny has seen him with mercy they r going to take him to the place where he had lived worst days of his life to give him the most beautiful days of his existence the feeling which his heart always craved for. One day will come that he will think that these days are enough for his life Spain.
Location: Malhothra Mantion. Time: 10:30a.m.
Manik was sleeping on his king sized bad when his sleep got disturb by continuous buzzing of his phone he in sleepy tone pick his phone up.
Manik(sleepy):hello
Voice: hello Manik where r u
Manik(still sleepy):ahh Navya what's ur problem it's not cabir's no its mine get that. Now cut the bloody call.
Navya: manik I know it's your no. Wake up u sleepy head its 10:30 u all have to come to studio at 11:00 have u forget that.
Manik: no no how can I forget that I am just coming in ten by.
Navya: I know very well ur 10 mins r always 2 hour
Manik: what u just say
Navya: nnn nothing b b by.(nd cut the call)
Manik: stupid madhubhala how cabir toralate her. Uff. Ramesh bring my black tea and breakfast (Manik pull his duvet and went to his washroom to take shower after 15 mins of long warm bath he come out of the bathroom and saw ramesh arranging his bed and his breakfast was on table he quickly finish his meal and dressed up quickly in blue blazer and blue shirt and black paints his hairs nicely gelled up he was looking as usual handsome he took his car keys and left for the studio.
Location: FAB5 studio. Time: 11:30am
Navya: o God! These guys r again late when will they grow up (just then two hands took her I in a back hug she very well know whose touch it is) Cabir u r again late.
Cabir(resting her head on her shoulder):sorry baby I was gone to take these for u (saying this he give her red roses and navya turns crimson red and hug him)
Meanwhile FAB3 enter in the studio so kavya straighten themselves.
Fab3: hey gays.
Cabir: hey so whats up.
Aliya: Nothing I was having my beauty sleep till the time ur madhubala called me.
Navya: Shut up Aliya if u have decided the time u should come on that time na I can't wait whole day for u till the time ur beauty sleep get finished.
Before Aliya could say something Dhruv interrupted: ok guys enough for today where is buddy?
Navya: do I have to answer u that.
mukti:yar chuck these all. So where is our next concert navya
Navya: its in manali. Fab4 (shoked):what?
Aliya: Navya u cant be serious how can u say yes for manali r u out of your mind?
Navya:But what happen its not first time we r going to a place like this. Then whats problem in going to manali it's a beautiful place.
Cabir: Navya u don't know anything that place has worst memories of manik.
'which place cabir" asked manik standing at the door
Everyone get shocked seeing Manik. They were looking everywhere except Manik.
Manik (suspicious): can someone tell me whats happening? Navya.
Navya: wo wo ahh wo co co concert ahmm
Manik(angry): stop talking in puzzels speak straight.
Cabir: Manik we were talking about our next concert.
Manik: yes so where it is? (everyone was silent nd Manik got furious he shouted) speak up demit?
Dhruv: Manali
Whole room become silent and manik can only hear manali again and again
Manik's pov:
What what just I heard manali that place where my worst past lies where I lost myself no! No! know I am not that weak manik I am The Manik Malhothra I will show that place that despite of doing those all things I am still stronger and it couldn't break me I will show my destiny that he is loser in front of me I WILL GO THERE I WILL FACE THAT PLACE AGAIN.
END OF POV
Manik: so what we will go there
Mukti: manik r u sure u want to go there?
Manik (smirks): of course I am it will be fun.
Dhruv: buddy there is no need to go we will say no to them its ok.
Cabir: yes Manik, Dhruv is right we won't go there.
Manik: guys r u out of ur mind we r Fab5 we can't back off we will go there means we will go there get that navya when we have to leave
Navya: tomorrow night at 9 we have flight for chandighur then we will leave to go manali by road.
Manik: ok done (then manik look towards his friends they look concern) guys don't worry I am not that old manik who was weak and by the way manali is my birth place I have lived 6 years of my life there I want to see my birth place I will be fine now come on cheer up lets have a group hug.
And they all had a group although they know manik is not fine but they don't want him to feel bad.
Precap: Lady:so u r going to manali y what's left over there Manik only her grave is there. She who won't get up and hug u so what's the need to go there han.
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I hope its long I have written this update in jiffy so plz ignore mistakes and guys plz comment some r liking my story but r not commenting this made me feel very bad if u want u can criticize also I won't mind infect I will be very happy to know faults in my story and I will also get a chance to clear ur doubts plz it's a request.