MANAN FF_ It Never Remains The Same DISCONTINUING (NOTE ON PG 24) - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...yaar...first of all congrats for becoming senior member in IF...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

3parts...thanks a lot for this long update...it was mind blowing...
loving this married couples a lot...the responsible fab5...wow all settled and alya is expecting...such an awesome news...u penned it so beautifully...
nandu and rishab convo and manik and cabir convo was perfect...
eagerly waiting to know how manan and cavya gonna discuss this topic...
thanks a lot for the pm
continue soon
take care


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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey princess! Really very shollyyy fr commenting itna late!!!!! Kaan pakadke sowwiieee!!!
Congrats on becoming a senior member!!
Part 1 awsm tha!!! It ws mindblowing gal!!! U rocked it!!! U penned evrythin so beautifully!!
Part A...manik is shooo sweeett n cuteee!!! Lovely MaNan...rishab cn speak wow!! Hw awsm is dat!! Rishab is a sweetheart! Manik ws sad...he had to sleep alone at night...nandu sensed it...aww so cute they are!! Their chotu sa romance ws lovely!!
Rishab-nandu talk ws incredible!! Rishab is chooo cute!! I wanted to pull his cheeks then n there wen he asked abt d babyy...aww thnq fr makin rishab speak!! He's such a sweetheart!!
Fab 5...i love them! Alya pregnant...dhruv taking care of alya ws so sweet n adorable...manik jealous!! Hehe...jaldi nandu ko pregnant bana do...lekin ismein u will bring twist na!!
ManBir talk...its ws awsm!! Cabir shud try...manik ws absolutely correct...gals want it bt they wont make d first move...this isnt my experience ok!! I said wt i feel...!! Cabir aur manik dono nahi sudhrenge!! Cabir ka questions aur manik k answers..."waise nandini raat ko pehnti kya hai..taki main navya ko tips dedu?" manik..."nothing"...i ROFLed...lyk seriously manbir r impossible!!! Loved it!!!
Update soon...21st ko update milega kya?? Kyy ka first bday hai...isliye asking...teaser bhi chalega...keep writing...ur an amazing writer:)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Toshna_1522

Hey princess! Really very shollyyy fr commenting itna late!!!!! Kaan pakadke sowwiieee!!!
Congrats on becoming a senior member!!
Part 1 awsm tha!!! It ws mindblowing gal!!! U rocked it!!! U penned evrythin so beautifully!!
Part A...manik is shooo sweeett n cuteee!!! Lovely MaNan...rishab cn speak wow!! Hw awsm is dat!! Rishab is a sweetheart! Manik ws sad...he had to sleep alone at night...nandu sensed it...aww so cute they are!! Their chotu sa romance ws lovely!!
Rishab-nandu talk ws incredible!! Rishab is chooo cute!! I wanted to pull his cheeks then n there wen he asked abt d babyy...aww thnq fr makin rishab speak!! He's such a sweetheart!!
Fab 5...i love them! Alya pregnant...dhruv taking care of alya ws so sweet n adorable...manik jealous!! Hehe...jaldi nandu ko pregnant bana do...lekin ismein u will bring twist na!!
ManBir talk...its ws awsm!! Cabir shud try...manik ws absolutely correct...gals want it bt they wont make d first move...this isnt my experience ok!! I said wt i feel...!! Cabir aur manik dono nahi sudhrenge!! Cabir ka questions aur manik k answers..."waise nandini raat ko pehnti kya hai..taki main navya ko tips dedu?" manik..."nothing"...i ROFLed...lyk seriously manbir r impossible!!! Loved it!!!
Update soon...21st ko update milega kya?? Kyy ka first bday hai...isliye asking...teaser bhi chalega...keep writing...ur an amazing writer:)


Awww toshna.!!!
Thank you so much.!!!
And infact while writing manbir convo, i was like laughing as hell..
Coz its too funny.!!!
And yes i will post soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Soo here's the promo, for next part..!!!
And just saw "Bajrangi Bhaijan" awesome movie..!!! Watch atleast for one time..!!
And enjoy reading.!!!

nandini: you know alia and dhruv mom dad banane wale he..
manik: nandini mujhe pata he.. aage bolo..
nandini(hesitated): manik we should also plan...
manik eyes got wide: baby..? 😊
Edited by Princess3618 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow wow wow!!!!!! Exciting interesting promo!!!!!! Update soonnn!!!! Love d promo!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
BEAUTIFUL BEGINNING... loved it soo much...really sweet...great plot...uh did a wonderful job...really looking forward to read it further...thank you soo much for the pm...really appreciate it...please update real soon...waiting eagerly...keep up the great work...best wishes... :) :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
thank youu soo much for all the love...
keep loving this ff...
thank you soo much all of you...!!!!😊

PART 2A

it was 3 pm in noon, manik was in his office, reading all those files, with giving full attention.

his phone started buzzing, without looking at the name, he picked it up, still reading the file.

manik: hello..(in quite lazy tone)

nandini: Mr. Manik Malhotra.. aap to apni wife ko bhul hi gaye.

hearing her voice he placed the file on the side, and gave full attention to his beloved wife.

manik: to tumhe bhi me kaha yad aaya, Mrs. Malhotra.

nandini: manik its 3 pm, tumhare friends kya aa gaye, tum to mujhe bhul hi gaye (she made a pout)

manik: aur tumhara bhai aya to tum bhi to mujhe bhul gayi na..?

nandini: aisa kuch nahi he, maine hi call kiya he, tum to apni boring si file me busy honge right.?

manik smiled that her wife knows him so well: nandu, you know na work is also important.

nandini: i know, but not more that me.

manik: of course. bolo, had lunch.?

nandini: yahh... and you..?

manik: hmm at mukti's place, i tell you she is a great cook, you should taste it for once.

nandini: yahh okk okk, i will.. vaise kaise he dhruv, alia.?

manik: very good, oo haaa me bhul gaya tumhe batana..

nandini: kya..?

manik: alia is pregnant...

nandini got up from her bed: what..? are you serious manik..?

manik: haa haa i am serious, wo log abhi doctor ke pass hi gaye he. she just tested at home, and got positive result.

nandini: wooww manik.. alia will become mamma.. and dhruv he'll become papa... thats soo..

manik: great... i know...

both got silent for some time, they had a awkward silence, so cutting it off nandini spoke.

nandini: achha manik.. i'll talk to you later, mujhe alia aur dhruv ko congratulate karna he.. bye...

manik: thik he... byee love you..

nandini: love you too bye..

nandini called alia.

nandini(singing): congratulations.. and celebrations...

alia: ohh nandini thank you soo much...

nandini: put the phone on speaker, i want to wish your hubby too..

alia: ohh sure... (she put the phone on speaker)

dhruv: hi nandini... kaisi ho.?

nandini: wo sab chhodo... congratulations... you will become papa... vaise tum log doctor ke waha gaye the right..? kya bola doctor ne.? sab kuch thik he na..? kuchh tention wali baat nahi he na..?

alia dhruv in unison: nandini...

nandini(confused): kya..?

alia: can you please calm down..?

nandini: i am alia, say..

alia: wo nandini, tumne rishabh ko bataya.?

nandini: nahi, mujhe bhi abhi abhi manik ne bataya... kyun...

alia: to thik he me abhi tumhare ghar aati hu... me rishu ko khud batana chahti hu...

nandini: okkk fine... vaise tum aa hi rahi ho to kya me navya aur mukti ko bhi bula du.? sari girls milkar kitty party karenge... i'll make chocolate mousse and pasta...

alia: great nandini... i am coming.

and they bid bye, dhruv dropped alia to nandini's house. by the time mukti and navya too came there.

they all settled down in the living room along with chachi..

navya: haa too alia batao... kaisa lag raha he..?? excited.?? nervous..?

alia: scared...

all in unison: what..??

alia: yess.. kya tum logo ne nahi suna..?? while delivery bahut pain hota he...

chachi: are alia beta... usme darna kya..?? uss waqt dard mehsus bhi nahi hota.. kyunki jab bachha aapke hath me aata he, wo feeling hi kuch aur hoti he...

alia: haa wo sab thik he par, doctor ne kaha mujhe bahut dhyan rakhna hoga. and you know what nandini, he said i cant wear dress now.?

nandini laughed: are buddhu.. of course you cant wear all this... your tummy will be big soon...

alia: ohh my god... me moti ho jaungi... dhruv to mujhe dekhega bhi nahi...

navya: iske bad wo tumhare aur karib aayega... dekh lena..

nandini: haaa...

chachi: waise nandu, tujhe aur manik ko bhi baby k bare me sochana chahiye...

nandini got shocked, because her chachi never talked about it so openly..

chachi: are aise kya dekh rahi ho.. 2 saal ho gaye he... you should try..

nandini: chachi aap bhi naa...

and she ran to her room, navya too ran to her room.


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PART 2B

she was standing near the window.

navya: nandini.. kya hua.?

nandini: navya hamne kabhi socha nahi iss bare me.. we never talked about family planning..

navya: to usme kya he.. ab karlo.. its not too late..

nandini: but navya..

navya: nandini, talk to manik first, if you two are ready then only think about it.. baki sab ki bat sunane ki zaroorat nahi he.

nandini nodded: navya, what about you and cabir.?

navya(hesitated): hamare bare me kya.?

nandini: i mean dont you wanna be mother.?

navya: haaa i want to be.. but we never...

nandini: you should talk to cabir..

navya: he is a boy, come on nandini, he should make first move na..

nandini: thik he...

they all went to dining table, had their dinner, soon all left.

nandini was waiting for manik, he too came there, sit awhile with chacha chachi and rishabh. and after bidding everyone bye, they both left.

in car. manik was humming a song, while driving car...

nandini was just exchanging looks from him...

soon they reached at their home. they both changed in their respective night suit..

manik was resting his head on backrest of the bed, reading a book.

nandini sat beside him and hugged him, manik too encircled his left hand around her shoulder, and another hand was holding book.

nandini got irritated that she is with him, still he is not paying attention.

nandini (snatch the book from him): manik..

manik(little annoyed): nandini, what is this..? i was reading na..

nandini: i want to talk. and you are reading stupid book.

manik snatched it back and put the book on side table: it is not stupid.

he hold her handsin his

manik: bolo kya baat karni he.?

nandini again hugged him: you know manik aaj meri navya se baat hui..

manik playing with her hair: achha, kya.?

she faced him: woo she and cabir... (she stopped as she is not finding any words to say the problem)

manik understood, he sat on the bed properly and adjusted his pillow: haa meri bhi cabir se baat hui.

nandini: kya..?

manik: that they both aren't physically active.

nandini: exactly. manik tumhe nahi lagta, they should talk about it. i mean they are married from last 3 years, and they didn't done...

she stopped as she know she cant say the word.

manik: i know same maine cabir se kaha, i think they will talk, maine cabir se bola he.

nandini just hmmed and again hugged him.

manik: kya baat he aaj bahut pyaar aa raha he..?

nandini: manik...

manik: achha achha.. bola kya baat he.?

nandini: woo manik...

manik: hmmm..

nandini: you know alia and dhruv mom dad banane wale he..

manik: nandini mujhe pata he.. aage bolo..

nandini(hesitated): manik we should also plan...

manik eyes got wide: baby..?

nandini nodded in yes..

manik: soo you are ready..?

nandini just blushed and hugged him..

manik too hugged her back.

Manik took first move, he caressed her face and tuck her hair behind her ears.. And started kissing her all over her face, except her lips, she was moving to his lips, but manik was teasing her. She got annoyed and took his face in her hand, and started kissing like madly, yet manik decided to tease her, so he didn't open his mouth, she was trying, but he did not let her win, after a while nandini got irritated she stopped kissing but yet her lips still on his lips..

Nandini(huskily): stop teasing me manik..

Manik couldn't control much, so he gave in and started kissing her pouty lips, he entered in her mouth and started exploring her each and every corner, without breaking the kiss, manik lay her down on the bed and he was on top of her, his hands stopped at her navel, and he pinched it, nandini moan in the kiss, and broke the kiss...

Manik was moving down to her neck, he started kissing her on neck and her shoulders, and his hands are working on nandini's night suit top, soon he removed her top.. She was now in her lingeries. He was mesmerised seeing her cute wife in just two piece.

He went near to her ears: you are beautiful nandini...

Nandini blushes and twisted him,and now nandini was on top, she started kissing him on his neck, shoulder and on his bare chest. Nandini knows, where his weak point, so she just kiss him on his earlobe, just then manik moans her name..

Nandini grinned while kissing him. He again twisted their positions now again manik was on top, soon he reach down to nandini's stomach, he kissed every inch of her stomach, and filled it with wet kisses...

Nandini could now feel her orgasm.

And soon they made love... Love that was never fallen apart, the whole room was filled with nandini and manik's moans.., and they slept peacefully in each other's protective arms, letting the whole world behind.


soo writing this update i was blushing all the time... soo thoda sa intimate sa romance... i hope you'll all like it... if not please tell me...


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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome..
Eagerly waiting for nxt part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update dear and romance is also well written
and update soon

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