MaNan New FF- Jab Miley Hum Tum (part17-pg131) Thread#2 link on page 1 - Page 89

Oh maisha!!! What an update yaar!!! Just married ka toh super hot!! N yeh kuch kum nai tha!!! God...u've driven me nuts!! Like srsly...im blushing hard!! Hard means hard!! Freakin' awesome chappy!!!
The beginning ws incredible!! Nandu just blurted out so frankly n manik smirking...aww...loved the healing session lots!!
Harshad alya...gosh! He's such a jerk!! Yuckk...disgusting!! Hw cn a brother raise his bloody hand on his sister???!!! He deserves to get d worst punishment ever!!! Cabir mukti dhruv were fadu!! Spclly cabir..kya sunaya uss jerk ko!!
CaVya gonna happen soon!!! Great!! They were soo cute n adorable!! That awkward silence...awww. Friends...future lovers!!
MaNan...beach...waoo...!! How manik cares d minutest probs of nandu!! He's such a caring guy!! Manik's star theory always touches my heart...its just pure n beautiful!! The waves just splashed over MaNan n they closing their eyes...that ws cute! Manik adoring nandu...awww...nandu feelin his gaze on her evn wen her eyes were closed...how enchanting is that!!!
Nandu's POV: vry well written!! How she ws sayin somethin unlike her..n slapping her thoughts were so adorable! She wished k manik's lips will never leave her body!! This ws amazing!! The way she ws feelin manik's touch ws pure bliss!! Manik asked her permission to kiss her! God this guy is impossible!!!
Manik's POV: so loved it!! He ws gettin worked up coz she wasnt stopping him!! Alele shooo cute!!! Nandu pulled manik closer??!!! This ws surprising! MaNan kissed!!! Woww!!! Mesmerising kiss!!! It ws an OUR moment fr MaNan!!
Loved d chappy!! N thnx fr giving this chappy aftr such an emotional epi!! I've not watched it yet! But cried readin d update!!
Beautifully penned update maisha:)
Update soon maisha...will b waiting...i hope u dont mind if i dont cmnt regularly...my schl is on full speed to complete d portions + i've joined swimming class so no tym evn to read d chapters nowadays!!
Thnx fr pms:)

nice update.

wow...beautiful update...manan first kiss and that to beach backdrop...wow blissful...no words to explain the beauty of ur writing...simply superb...manik asking for permission and nandini didnt bother to proceed further...that shows the trush ahe ia having on manik...great gng dear...waiting for ur next update...

Wow wow wow .. M speechless.. It was awesome update .. Like seriously complete package.. Aggression anger emotions feelings friendship ... Perfect blend of every thing .. Loved it completely... I liked how nandini pacify angry manik... Face off between fab 4 nd harshad... Liked the beginning of new friendship between cavya .. Nd manan moment toh ... Omg that was masical mesmerizing romantic hawt full of new emotions .. Wow they shared their first kiss .. How adorable couple they are... Pure bliss

Awesome update
Loved it
Amazing
Their first kiss aww really cute
Update soon
Thnx for pm

So beautiful and so blissful.

Oh my God. Oh my God. Oh my god.

Superb update
Nandu trying to calm manik...
Ohho cabir n navya became friends
The beach scene was awesome
Their kiss...hayeee
Hot hot hot
Thnkz 4 the pm

Nice update. ..

Wow awesome superb fabulous fantastic update

Manik was so angry and couldn't seem to let out his anger by thrashing harshad as Nandu stop him from doing anything and he calmed down now and took her to beach to relax and couldn't resist himself for kissing her

Continue soon and thanks for pm