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stars_fireflies

@stars_fireflies

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Posted: 10 years ago

#761

Very nice update ... I was like.. ye kabhi khatam hi na ho .. though it's a long update nd m sounding like a greedy person bt can't help yr ... it was damn brilliant dear nd when it end I was like shit yr khatam!!! (Sad pout)

Bt girl!!! Hats off to uh!! It was fantastic, mind blowing, perfectly perfect update

The way u penned each nd every emotions. . Take a bow!!... I love everything be it fab 4 teasing ... mani mano bond, jealousy or possessiveness, manik's self talk, their patch up nd family moment. . I love it to the core...

Nd m really thankful that u sort the problem amid manan in this update can't see their fight they had already faced seperation of 4 long years

It was fabulous update

Ty for pm

Continue soon

Lots of love

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anum_6

@anum_6

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#762

Chapter 5 is superb amazing
Manan romance
Manvi n manik bath scenes
Thnx for pm

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anum_6

@anum_6

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#763

Chapter 6 is awesome
Fab 5 and manvi scenes are awesome
N toy shop n ganda teddy hahaha
Manan always rock
Thnxfor pm

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anum_6

@anum_6

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#764

Chapter 7 is amazing
Manvi is too naughty
Loved It
Thnxfor pm

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anum_6

@anum_6

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#765

Congratulations for 100 pages
Its awesome update
Love it
U scared me
Manvi is so scared to see her mama like this
They sang amazing
Thnx for pm
Update soon

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Addrita Islam

@Addrita.Jesin

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#766

awesome update..insecurities, guilt, father daughter moment, manan, manani..all were there..
Felt bad as manik behaved too harsh..but at least he could understand his guilt..
Part a was superb..as manik manvi moment rocks..
plz make nyonikas entry as soon as possible..want to knw abt her reactions..

Update soon..
Take care

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crazzy_girl1999

@crazzy_girl1999

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#767

1st of all... A big Big Congrats!! U crossed 100 pages in jus 8 chapters... tats wonderful!! ❤️ Bt u really deserve all of dis!! Actually much much more than dis!
Comin to d update..
Wat an update!! ❤️ Jus wat an update!
Woow... Amazing... Superb... dese words r less... I swear!
I am speechless... I got goosebums reading n I literally cried... !! ❤️ ❤️
It was sooo damn AMAZING!!
U potrayed it very well... I could feel wat I was reading! 😳
MaVi were AMAZING!!
MaNan ❤️ last scene was superb!
All d parts were jus damn awsome!!
*Lovestruck* *Awestruck* reading dis update! ❤️
It was jus tooo good!! 👏 👏
keep goin!
U r simply AMAZING!! ⭐️
n I am in love wit yur story... ❤️ ❤️
I literally crave to read d nxt part!
N jus dying to read its love too... ❤️
Desperately waiting!
Update soon!
N tyssm fr d pm 😊 👏

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subbatanisha

@subbatanisha

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#768

Wwo ...itna lamba upadate ...superb yaar ...it was amazinggg...

😊 😊 😊

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muskan

@muskancute

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#769

Sorry...i am again late...sorry appi...And the update was.. superb Mindblowing...Awsome...lovely...And u are Awsome...

Coming to Update...

8A...fab5 convo was Awsome...then manik nandini phone convo was nice...Awww!! Manik Manvi ko bhool gaya...so sad...but thank god use yaad to a gaya...and then manvi scene was so emotional...use laga uske mamy paap use bhool gaye...so sad...and then manvi and manik scene was Amazing...I love the way manik concole manvi...loved it...then Manvi Manik ko chor hi nhi rhi thi...Awww...!! Lovely scene...Then manik and manvi ice cream scene and...all scene awsome...

8B...OMG!!😲 Nandini in yash arms...Or manik ne uae galat le liya...And then there fight...😭or manik wahan se chala gaya...manik nandini par kaise shak kar sakta hai yrww...i mean howw...??...and then song choice was nice...and there scene was...heartbroken😭...and nandibi got cut in her fingers...and she faint...😭

8C...Thank god manvi ne manik ko phone kia...And manik heart and mind talk was Mindblowing...And he come back home...or nandini ki halat dekh kar he feels guilty...or hona bhi chahiye guilty...he deserved it...Then Manvi and Nandini talk Nice...Then Manik Ne apne haton se dono ko khana khila ya.. Awww...Lovely...And Then Manik and Nandini Scene...Thank god Manik ko iski galti ka ehsas to hua...Lovely Scene...And again the song choice was Awsome...Loved it...

The update was full of all emotions...Sad,caring,love and jealousy...Awsome...loved it...

THANKS FOR PM...

CONT SOON...

LOVE U