MananSS: Chupke Chupke Chori Chori ||COMPLETED|| ( Ch 10 : Pg 22 ) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Nice start...👏
very interesting to read as to how they will win in their love being business rivals...😲
but now interesting would be read as to who will win the project...
awesome..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: parthadmirer

Nice start...👏

very interesting to read as to how they will win in their love being business rivals...😲
but now interesting would be read as to who will win the project...
awesome..😊


Yeah, stay tunned. ;) thankyouu :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Hiii
It's fabulous part
Wow Manan r already in relationship
It gonna be so much fun to know their Love story
Curious nd excited to know who will get project
Yes their lunch date excited for lunch date
Thanks for PM.
Waiting for nxt update.

KEEP SMILING ND WRITING BEAUTIFUL UPDATES
TAKE CARE SOON UPDATE NXT PART


LOTS OF LOVE,
SAMRUDDHI
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
I Love this idea and those Secret meetings 😭
You choose a very fitting title for your Story
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
nice start intresting
i loved the title chori chori chupke chupke awsomeee
story matches it perfectly
waiting forr next part dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
This is so awesome!!!!
Very interesting concept!!!!
Excited to read the next chapter now!!
Update soon!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Sanskruti16499

Hiii
It's fabulous part
Wow Manan r already in relationship
It gonna be so much fun to know their Love story
Curious nd excited to know who will get project
Yes their lunch date excited for lunch date
Thanks for PM.
Waiting for nxt update.

KEEP SMILING ND WRITING BEAUTIFUL UPDATES
TAKE CARE SOON UPDATE NXT PART


LOTS OF LOVE,
SAMRUDDHI


Hey thank a ton :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Awesome plzz cont.soon and pm me wen u update the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice concept...
read 2 parts...wow yaar...its awesome...
loving this chupke chupke chori chori...love
u penned beautifully...eagerly waiting to read more
continue soon
take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER 2

Manik rushed and parked his car at their favourite meeting place: CAFE 02.

He entered and spotted her sipping her favourite fresh lime soda.
He sidehugged her and sat next to her.

Nandini: So, meeting kaisi thi?

Manik: It went well. Who can resist Manik's charm, you knoww
(He said and winked)

Nandini: self obsessed kahin kee

(She pulled his nose cutely)

Manik: lets order jaldi se I'm hungry.

Nandini: Already done.

Manik: but..

Nandini: Two chinese platters. That's your favourite here na?

Manik couldn't help pulling her cheeks adoringly.

Manik: Baby knows everything about me naa?

Nandini: Nandini moorthy hai hi itni amazing

Manik: now who's being self obsessed haan?

They giggled and soon food arrived.

Manik: eee, btw, meera ma ko kya bola?

Nandini: Mukti ke sath lunch. (She said while eating noodles)

Manik: waise tum mujhe mukti se milla kab rahi ho?

Nandini: pagal ho gaye ho? She doesn't know about us

Manik: what? But whyy

Nandini: arre, the manik Malhotra and Nandini Moorthy are a couple. Have you forgotten humari families ka ek dusre ke liye pyaar (she said sarcastically)

Manik took her hand in his and entwined their fingers.

Manik: Kya yaar nandu. I hate this, humari families kash normal hoti. Humme esse chup chup ke nahi milna padta then.

Nandini saw Manik's face frowing.

Nandini: Manik tum bhi naa bahaut boring ho I swear. (He pushed his head a little)

Manik gave a confusing look.

Nandini: what? Obviously na! Chupke chupke milne mein tumhe mazaa nahi atta. Mujhe toh badda mazza aata hai. I mean normally toh har couple milta hai. Esse jhooth bolke, sneak out karke, its so exciting nai?

(She said in a cheered up voice)

Manik: yaah..I..think so! (Manik was still confused)

Nandin: forget all that. Khanna. Eat eat eat.

After finishing their food they walked out together.

Manik: chalo I'll drop you

Nandini: marna hai? (She said while laughing)

Manik: seee! Another disadvantage. I cant even drop my girlfriend safely.

She quickly pecked on his cheek.
And leaned on him with her hands around his waist.

Nandini: awww, majnu manik. Don't worry. Soon wo day bhi ayega.

Manik smiled at her cute moves.

Nandini: acha chalo ab I got to go.

She again kissed his cheecks and left quickly.

She was moving and manik yelled from behind.

Manik: accha sunno?

She turned but didn't move.

Nandini: bolo?

Manik touched his cheeks where she kissed. This made Nandini blush.

Manik: I love youu!

"Love you too Baby!" Nandini yelled from a distance and smiled.

They left for their respective work then.

***

While Nandini was in the car she got mukti's call.

Mukti: whatsup nandu

Nandini: kuch nahi just heading back to office ...how is your trip going? You're liking pune?

(Mukti was in pune for a business trip)

Mukti: han thiek hai. But after 5 when work is over, I am super bored

Nandini: isn't your hot boss with you mukku?

Nandini giggled.

Mukti: hai na. But vo khadoos apni extra khadoos girlfriend ko sath laya hai.

Nandini: matlab tum unn couple ke sath wahan khoob enjoy kar rahi ho

Nandini mocked her and laughed

Mukti: HaHaHa..bahaut hassi aa rahi hai na? Wapas anne de, tab bataungi

Nandini: yes ma'am. Come soon. Missing you.

Mukti: same here. Parson, I'll be there. See yaa.

Nandini: yes. Buhbyee.

Mukti: byee!



*********

So here is another update in less than 10 hours, wuhoo. Flood it with comments now. :p
Btw, nandini is real life niti types, full on bubbly and fun. ;)

Buddy me for PM. :D

Love,
Isha :*

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