Strings Attached/Manan FF / CHAPTER 50 page 147/ 05th may - Page 8

Created

Last reply

Replies

1k

Views

275.6k

Users

176

Likes

5.7k

Frequent Posters

Ragingleo thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Engager Level 2 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#71


Promo part 9

"Why is she bothering me soo much maan..?? Why am I concerned about her so much. What happened to her is her matter of concern ; her life ; why the hell I am getting charged up..??" Manik murmured as he was irritated with himself getting so much worried about her and thinking about her again and again.
.
.
"How to make those people trust us again..? What should be done to get their believe back in trust ; in love ; in friendship ; in us..?" He enquired as if he he was talking about just one person.
"Have patience ; believe in yourself and keep on trying. When your intentions are right ; eventually everything will be right..!" Manik lips moved a bit to form a tiny smile
Ragingleo thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Engager Level 2 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Part 9



Mukti's words were echoing in his mind over and over again. He was all disturbed. He was wandering in his room ; lying on the couch ; surfing his mobile and laptop ; watching tv ; but nothing was diverting his mind from what he came to know that evening. He took out a beer can from the refrigerator and went towards the balcony. He sipped some beer when suddenly the moments of yesterday night flashed in front of his eyes. He became frustrated and gulped the beer.
"Why is she bothering me soo much maan..?? Why am I concerned about her so much. What happened to her is her matter of concern ; her life ; why the hell I am getting charged up..??" Manik murmured as he was irritated with himself getting so much worried about her and thinking about her again and again.
.
.
He came back in his room and landed on his bed just like a dead man. For sometime he was just lying there on his stomach and covered his head with the pillow. After few minutes he kept the pillow under his face and dialled a number from his cell.
.
.
"Hello.. Maa..? How are you..?" Manik called his mom.
"Manik..?? I am fine beta ..? But how are you..?? All ok..?? Is your health fine na..?" His mom asked in her concern.
"Maa...!! Why do you always get soo worried when I call up..? Can't I call you just like that.? Is it necessary that when something will happen to my health then only I will call..? Manik who was already irritated got a bit more from his mother's concern.

"It's not that everytime I get worried. But Today my concern is genuine." His mom said.
Manik was a bit surprised at this statement made by her mother.
"Wwhhyyy..?? What's with todaayy..?" Manik fumbled.
"Manik.. Look at the time .. Your call at this hour will always be my concern." His mom said in a worried tone.

Manik at first was confused with her statement but then he removed his phone from his ear to check the time in it. It was 2.15 am.
"Shiittt...!" Manik said in low tone and face palmed himself. He was so lost in the thoughts of Nandini that he didn't even realise what time it was.

"Maa.. I am really sorry for disturbing you at this hour. I am absolutely fine maa ; it's just that I didn't realised it got so late. You please sleep. I will call you in the morning." Manik was now bit embarrassed calling his mom soo late and then talking rudely with her.

" it's ok beta. You can call me at any hour. I never get disturbed by your call. I know you are not fine. You may be physically fit but there is something bothering you. Beta you can tell me what is it." Manik's mom guessed her son's problem. After all mom is a mom ; nothing can be hidden from her.

"No maa.. Nothing . Nothing is bothering me. You don't worry at all. It's perfectly fine over here." Manik tried his best to avoid his mom but was failed in doing so.

"Your voice changes Manik whenever you are tensed. Beta ; you can share anything with me. I won't ever judge you on that. But just let your heart out ; don't hide anything ; don't carry any burden ; Just pour it out beta ; am sure you will feel better." His mom was trying every bit to let that thing come out from his mouth that was making him soo worried.

Finally Manik gave up. After a deep sigh , he finally started to share all his worries with his mom.

"Maa ; why do people Cheat others.? What happiness do get they get from hurting others and that too hurting those people who never ever think to hurt them even slightly not even in their dreams.?

"Who did that beta..? What's wrong...?Are you ok..??" Manik's words disturbed her.
"It's not about me maa.. I'm asking in general. Why do all this happen and why do people hurt others. And more over why the hurt ones punish themselves and others for it.? They have done noting. Then why do they get punishment for something like that.? The one who did the harm feels nothing but the one who's harmed and the people around him are the ones who suffer. Why maa ... Why...?? Why do this happen.? It's so frustrating maa.." Manik was very upset to know about the change in Nandini and that too because of some one who never cared.
.
.
"Manik...!! I completely understand what you are trying to say. But beta you need to understand that this is how it works. You will find all types of people here. Your journey can never be complete if you don't meet all types of people. This I even can't tell that why Do people hurt others and what happiness do they get ; but yes I can say one thing that such people and such incidents are the lessons of life. We learn from them and they help us to get mature. They make us understand that what exactly life is. It's never a path of roses for anyone. Every person had faced some or other hardships in life that we are not aware about. And about the punishment thing ; beta ; these incidents only change them. Let me tell you one thing today that I would like you to remember forever. Trust once broken can never be build up again. And we trust only those people who are special to us. When such special people ditch us ; break our trust ; betray us ; we are devastated. There's no courage left in that person to trust someone else. The thought that people will break their trust again keeps on hovering their mind. It's the most terrible feeling Manik ; most terrible. Heartbreaks are not even that painful as the trust breaks are. Don't ever try to break someone's trust Manik. You may never know where will you leave that person after breaking his trust and what turn his life will take after that one incident. Never do that to any one beta... Never."
.
.
"I promise you maa I will never do that to anyone. Will never break anyone's trust. I promise." Manik firmly promised his mom.
"Now are you feeling better..?" His mom asked him from the other side smiling.
He smiled a bit and replied ; "you are the best maa..; I love you.."
"Love you too mera bacha ; now take some rest." His mom ordered him.
"Maa.. Maa.. Hang on.. Just one thing .. Please.." He stopped his mom from hanging the call and went on.

"Yes. Say." She politely said.
"How to make those people trust us again..? What should be done to get their believe back in trust ; in love ; in friendship ; in us..?" He enquired as if he he was talking about just one person.
"Have patience ; believe in yourself and keep on trying. When your intentions are right ; eventually everything will be right..!" Manik lips moved a bit to form a tiny smile.
"Good night maa..!"
"Good night beta..!! Sleep well"
.
.
Manik had a content smile on his face. For sometime he kept looking the moon that was visible from his room's window and in no time he was in a peaceful sleep.


Edited by Ragingleo - 9 years ago
Ragingleo thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Engager Level 2 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#73

Part 10


Manik woke up the next morning with an enlightened mood. He was getting ready for office by looking himself in the mirror. His eyes fell on his own face and he started talking to his reflection.
"Hmmm... Not bad dude ..!! Really not bad..!! No wonder why still Girls go gaga over you . Your charm is still the same.." He smirked and winked on his reflection when suddenly his phone beeped.
~~~~~~~~~~
Please be on time today. We need to submit the reports till day end any how.
Nandini.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
He smiled seeing Nandini's name on the screen. He looked up from his mobile screen to the mirror again.
"Nandiniii...!!! Ahhh...!! There's something in you man ; really something for sure. You don't stop bothering me from that rainy night. Now I even know your deep hidden secret. Don't know whether you forgot to smile or you don't want to but I will make sure you smile again and that to from your heart. I don't know why I am doing this but I feel the need to this for sure." Manik was talking to his own reflection with a firmness on his face and full confidence. He then grabbed in car Keyes and left for office.
.
.
As usual Nandini was already there when Manik reached the office but today he was not late. He walked towards his bay and before going to his desk wished good morning to Nandini. As per her habit and routine she was fully occupied by her work but when she heard the morning wish she searched the voice from where it came and to her surprise seeing it coming from Manik she was shocked. They both have never been on such terms were they would greet each other. This unexpected gesture of Manik surprised Nandini but being courtesies enough she wished him back and again turned back to her.
.
.
Cabir noticed this unexpected courtesies behaviour of Manik towards Nandini and felt something fishy. He went upto him and started his enquiry in a low tone which could not be heard by Nandini.
"What's wrong..?? Morning and all ; that to this Gabbar..?? What's up..??" Cabir was suspicious.
"No yaar.. She's not Gabbar .. She's quite sweet and it's nice to wish morning .. Don't you think so..?" Manik defended her that she's not that bad.
"Sweettt...?? Really..?? Let me tell you this Gabbar name is given to her by you only.. All of a sudden this change ..?? Sweet and all..?? Something's fishy..!!!!" He raised his one eyebrow in suspicion.
"Relax mr. Sherlock homes.. Nothing's fishy..!! Soo just relax..!!" He calmed down Cabir who was trying to figure out the reason behind Manik's changed behaviour towards Nandini. Cabir then went back and Manik too got indulge in work as he needed to prepare the reports.
.
.
Whole day went by in working only. Nandini and Manik had to submit the reports so they were working upon it ; sometime together and sometime alone. Finally at 8 in the evening they finished with their reports and submitted it to Vaibhav.
.
.
Manik was talking to Cabir about an official topic ; when their phone buzzed at the same time.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Guys meet me in canteen before leaving ; something important.
Vaibhav.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Manik and Cabir headed towards canteen and waited for Vaibhav over there. Just then Nandini too entered the canteen. She was also called by Vaibhav. She saw the two of them sitting. Manik was about to ask her to join them when Vaibhav came from behind and asked her to come up as he needed to talk something with all three.
.
.
"Guys ; I have this internal information that there's going to be a flood of work in coming 15 days. We all need to gear up as there's no scope of rest or relax for coming 15 days. I can depend upon you guys only for the output. Manik and Nandini ; you two need to show your talent once again. This flood cannot be handled by anyone else. Also the result of this will surely decide the coming promotions. And Manik you really need to pull up your socks. Just give it for these 15 days and trust me no one can question your promotion and that's my promise. Forget all previous notices and warnings . These 15 days and there you are where you deserve."
Vaibhav informed them about the coming scenario of the office and the result thereon.

"Don't worry Vaibhav ; our team will not let you down. I may be unpunctual and bit careless but You know very well that when it comes to work ; I see nothing. So don't worry. And it's not about my promotion but its for you cause you have always supported me so don't worry we will give the best." Manik assured Vaibhav that every thing will be handled smoothly by them.
.
.
"I know ; I can depend upon you guys. New Interns will help us in this and this will be a deciding factor for them too. So the new interns and others will report you guys and then you all will report me. Pressure will be big so I have decided to divide the team in two sections. One section will be handled by Manik ; you and Nandini." Vaibhav said pointing towards both of them. This pairing up was not a strange thing for anyone because they have been teamed up together before in past also.


"The other section will be handled by Cabir ; you ; as after you both I can rely upon him only." Vaibhav further added.

"But Vaibhav ; I am sorry to say this but this will huge and Cabir can't be the sole responsible for everything. It's really hectic. I think he needs a partner to. And Cabir am sorry." Nandini interrupted Vaibhav and apologised to Cabir.

"Nooo actually ; I was about to say this. It would be better if I am too given a partner. " Cabir said to them as it was difficult to handle that all alone.
.
.
"Ok then ; Danish will be there with you. So all set. Tomorrow as soon as I get the official call I will announce this. But you three better pull up your socks because I will catch your neck only if anything goes wrong." Vaibhav said this with a smile and all four of them started giggling.
.
.
After that meeting all dispersed and in a short while left for their homes.

The next 15 days there was a total chaos created in the office. There was no timings for anyone. Whole night people used to work to meet the target and give the desired output. Manik Nandini Cabir Danish and Vaibhav were the ones who were totally cut off from the world. All they had was to give their best for the sake of the company.
.
.
And finally there hard work was been paid off. The targets were met more than what was anticipated. Head office gave an appraisal letter to Vaibhav's team and he was indeed delighted to have such responsible and hardworking team.
.
.
All the senior members were in the conference room.

"Congratulation guys.. You all did it.. And I am soo proud of my team. This kind of result has yet not been given till now. We have set a record ; thanks to you all guys. And of course Manik Nandini Cabir and Danish ; thanks for your support guys. Nandini and Manik you both have again proved that you as a team are best." Vaibhav was appreciating the results given to him by his team and with the last sentence ; Manik looked at Nandini with a smile who was as usual not much bothered about the appraisal given to her.

"After so much of hard work there needs to be party for sure. So this Saturday party from me to my team." Vaibhav continued and there was an applaud from the team.
.
.
They all dispersed from the conference room and got back to their work. Manik and Cabir were still with Vaibhav whereas Nandini left for the canteen. When she was returning from the canteen she saw something strange to her eyes.

"Danish ; tum yahan Kya kar rahe ho , Manik ki desk par..?" Nandini was surprised to see Danish on Manik's desk using his system.
"Wohhh.. Nahi kuch nahi ; actually wo ek report check karni thi ; toh I was.." Danish replied to her. Although Nandini was not satisfied with his answer but then to she went back to her desk without further questions.
.
.
In the evening Nandini was in the parking lot ; ready to leave for her home when Vaibhav saw her.

"Nandini ... Hii..! I wanted to thank you personally. You need a great job once again." Vaibhav appreciated her.

"That's my job Vaibhav ; you don't need to thank me for it. I am glad we ever able to make you proud." Nandini replied to him in a pleasing manner.

"With such talent like you and Manik ; my team will always be the best. By the way you are coming for the party right..?" Vaibhav questioned her.

"Vaibhav ; you know I don't attend the parties. I won't be coming and I apologise for that." Nandini said very pleadingly to Vaibhav to let her excuse from the party.

"I know you don't ; but this time you have to. This occasion is big. The target was a record setter. You have to come this time and no excuses. Take it as an order." Vaibhav insisted her to attend the party.

"But..." Nandini was about to say something when Vaibhav interrupted her ; "I want no buts.. You are coming."

Nandini smiled at his insistence and after taking a deep breath said "ok" and agreed to attend the party.
.
.
It was the Saturday evening ; the party night. All were excited for it. They had worked really hard in the past few days and now it's the time to party freely. Everyone reached the party venue one by one. It was around 9 but Nandini was still missing from the party. Manik although knew that she never attends the party but still was waiting for her. After seeing the time he decided to inquire Vaibhav about her.

"Vaibhav ; thanks man for this amazing party. Aap jaisa manager agar sabko mile to har employe khush rahe" Manik thanked him for the support he has always given and of course for the party. Vaibhav smiled and bowed down his head in assurance.

"Waise this time it was huge. The target ; no one expected this. Itna bada Kaam hua ; sabko aana Chahiye tha party mein. I see some people are missing." Manik indirectly tried to figure out about Nandini.

"Yup ; all are not here ; Nandini is not here to my surprise. Iss baar I insisted that she has to come Aur usne haan bhi kaha tha aane ke liye ; I don't know where she is." Vaibhav splitted out that Nandini had to be here as she said yes to Vaibhav. After listening to what Vaibhav said ; Manik's eagerness for her arrival was increased.

His eyes then and now were stealing the glance of the entrance , to see she has arrived or not. After around 10 mins ; Manik's wait was finally over.

Nandini entered the party ; dressed up in a full length black gown which was decent enough to be worn at a office party. She had left her hair open and accessorized herself with small black studs as earrings ; black wedges and black clutch. She was indeed looking like a black beauty for the evening.



Manik's eyes were sparkling when he looked at her. This was the first time he saw her in this attire and manner. Her beauty was pleasing his eyes as he did not blink even for once from the time when his eyes felt on her. He was mesmerized.


Edited by Ragingleo - 9 years ago
Ragingleo thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Engager Level 2 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#74

Part 11



Manik was just mesmerising her beauty. His eyes were glued on her and lips were curving to form a tiny smile on his face. Just then Vaibhav approached Nandini ; "thanks Nandini for coming ; I am glad you kept my words." Nandini nodded in affirmation with a smile.
"Please get yourself comfortable" Vaibhav added on. Nandini went towards a couch and got herself adjusted there. She was there only for the sake of Vaibhav. She took out her phone and got busy into it as she was least interested in the party.
.
.
Nandini was occupied in her phone when suddenly she saw a glass in front of her eyes. She looked up to find Manik standing there with glasses in both his hands one of which he offered to Nandini. She questioned him with her eyes.

"For you ...!! Aahhh..!! Don't worry it's pure mocktail ; no alcohol." Manik offered her the drink. She looked at the glass and then again at Manik who with his eyes asked her to take it. After few hesitant seconds she took the glass from his hand into hers and replied with ; "thanks". Manik smiled at her and nodded.
Nandini expected Manik to leave from there but instead he too seated himself on the couch but away from her ; maintaining a distance.
He wanted to talk to her but was not getting words in his mouth. After few minutes of silence ; he finally gathered courage to speak up ; "it's good to see you here. Tum parties attend nahi karti normally. I am glad to came up ; after all it's our success party." Manik was trying to initiate a conversation but Nandini just nodded with a smile.
Manik's attempt was in total vain as she was not participating in the conversation. Manik was annoyed and frustrated on her reaction. He was knowing the reason behind this silence and was just not able to accept that all this while this girl is punishing herself for something she hasn't done by not letting anyone come close to her. He was staring her and she had no idea about it. She was just too busy in her phone. Mukti's description of real Nandini and the one in his front was making him furious.
His frustration came out when suddenly in a bit high volume he asked her ; "why are you doing this..?? What are you getting..? Kya proof karna hai tumhe Aur kise..? Kyun kar Rahi ho ye sab..?" Manik was firing questions on her and she was all surprised. She narrowed her eyes as she was blank about what he was upto.

"What's wrong Manik..? Kya Bol rahe ho..?" Nandini was just clueless about Manik knowing her deep hidden secret. Manik realised what he just said , it seemed he was back into his senses. Anxiety , worry , anger , embarrassment ; all expressions were visible on his face. He was not getting any answer to Nandini's question and wasn't able to look at her either. Nandini was still looking at Manik with a frowned forehead and confused look. To avoid further questions and embarrassment Manik stood up with a sudden jerk to leave when suddenly he banged himself into a guy..

"Wooohooo...!! Watch out bro...!" The guy said as the drink in Manik's hand was about to spill over him.
"Sorry" ; Manik replied and was about to leave when his legs stopped on what he heard.


Edited by Ragingleo - 9 years ago
RomComFan thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Loving Manik's concern for Nandhu...wondering who the guy is...and what was happening on Manik's computer...terrific updates. lovely job!
NAVYA64 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#76
3 updates together Wow
Wonderful Update
Loved it
Cont soon
Edited by NAVYA64 - 10 years ago
parul.pandey thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#77
nice
vaibhav ne kuch to kiya hai
so ab nandini handle karegi sabko
and thanks
amrutha.shetty thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Nice story ...its been picturized beautifully ...nandini's trust was broken by her two best frnds whom she trusted more thn anything nd she has landed at this state of course it would take time for manik to make her smile bt she would definitely ...nd wht was tht danish doing in manik's system bt no probs as nandini had witnessed him ...now wht made manik froze on his place ...want to know waiting eagerly ...continue jaldi se ...waiting n waiting ...
Lots of loveee❤️
Cooldude101 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Where is you feet? Such amazing talent of writing is only in the hands of some people and I am lucky enough to be one person who can read such amazing work. Please updates soon! I really hate cliffhangers!
Ragingleo thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Engager Level 2 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: Cooldude101

Where is you feet? Such amazing talent of writing is only in the hands of some people and I am lucky enough to be one person who can read such amazing work. Please updates soon! I really hate cliffhangers!


Haha.. Thanks for the love I comment...Will update soon..help me get more comments ..

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".