MaNan || The Indivisible Hearts || ON HOLD - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
It was superb
Thanks for the pm. ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ohk ...firstly ...the concept of frenimies ...is very very close to me ...i just love it ...
secondly ...the clothes throwing away ...omg ! i was laughing for long ...osum ...srsly where did get that idea from ?
please write soon and yes ! i would love if u keep the relationship intact ...like the comeback lines typical of this relationship ...n yes ! pls pm for each update ...i love to read this one now 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 4 Hidden feelings

"HAIN DHRUV?" Manik almost shouted after getting back his senses.

"Are yaar ye Cabir pagal hogya hai kuch bhi bole ja rha hai!" Dhruv spoke and glared at a Cabir to stay quiet.

"Wo kya pagal ho rha hai? Tu pagal ho gya hai mere bhai. Nandini and me, we are going to get engaged soon aur tu hai ki..." Manik spoke holding Dhruv tightly from his shoulders.

"Bro listen to me! It's just a mere crush. Tujhe mere crushes ke bare mein nai pta kya? Mera to har dusri ladki pe crush hai! And it's not more than a day or two so just chuck it man!" Dhruv spoke and chuckled lightly to cool down the suggestion.

"Lekin ye koi dusri ladki nahi hai hmm? She is my would be wife and you, you have to stay away from her bro." Manik spoke narrowing his eyebrows. If it would have been someone else other than Dhruv, he might have killed that guy. But, fortunately or unfortunately, Dhruv was his cousin. Even if he wanted to smack him, he couldn't.

"Tujhe darne ki koi zarurat nahi hai bhai! I am going to California tomorrow." Dhruv teased him while poking on his shoulder.

"California? God! Tera bhi to college hai yaar. It means you won't attend my engagement? Bhai..." Manik was hurt as his best buddy was not attending his engagement but somewhere inside he was doing somersaults as now Dhruv would stay away from his Nandini.

"Yup bro even I have a college." Dhruv smiled and spoke while giggling and Cabir sighed.

"Acha tumhra ho gya ho to main jaun? Nandini must be waiting." Manik spoke and turned to go.

"Yaap jaa tu! Bye!" Cabir waved and he left.

"Main bhi chalta hun." Dhruv spoke.

"Tu kahan jaa rha hai bhai? Tu to idhar aa." Cabir said narrowing his eyes and holding him from his shoulders.

"Please, Cabir!" Dhruv snapped and jerked his hands off him.

"No brother. Listen to me. I know you have feelings for her!" Cabir exclaimed and Dhruv turned white.

"What feelings man? I LOVE HER!" Dhruv shouted and turned.

"Dhruv if you want Manik's happiness then don't ever come in between. Stay away from them!" Cabir spoke and patted his back. He left from there leaving Dhruv alone with his thoughts.

"California! Please get me mixed up. I don't want to remember her anymore. Aur agar main usse bhool nai paya to I am sorry Manik, my love for her is greater than my love for you. I have to get her by hook or by crook." He heaved a sigh and too left from there.

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"Is everything okay Manik?" Nandini asked for the umpteenth time.

"Nandini. I said na, keep quiet! Let me focus!" Manik said turning in her lap.

He was focusing on something in his mind, lying on Nandini's lap, from past one hour. Even after Nandini's thousands of pleadings he didn't tell her the reason behind his suffocation.

"Manik! You are getting on my nerves right now! Are you telling me or not?!" Nandini raged and almost threw Manik out of her lap at once.

"Peace, woman, peace!" Manik raised his hands above his head and spoke.

"Shut up!" Nandini snapped and sprinted out of the room.

"God! This girl is going to make me crazy." Manik spoke and laid down on the bed with his back.

He texted her, You wanna go to shopping?

At 1 a.m.? Of course why not! She replied and he chuckled.

Then get ready we are leaving in 10

Shut the f*ck up.

Baby, please.

No

I will behave

NO!

We are going for ice cream nothing else

Come out of your room

What?

Come out!

Yeah, I am out now?

Take 10 steps towards the dining table

Yeah, okay, now?

Turn 90 degrees towards your left

Done

Open the refrigerator

Yup now?

TAKE OUT THE ICE CREAM AND SMACK IT OFF YOUR FACE ASSHOLE

*Sigh* Who was that? My girlfriend or my best friend?

Your frenemy! BYE

Good night, take care love you *Wink wink*

**

"Uh I hate you Manik!" Nandini murmured at went off to sleep.

"I hate you more!" Manik snapped from outside and Nandini put a pillow over her face.

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So, I have edited the last part as I didn't like it much.

How was this one? Do tell me okayyy and yayayyayay my laptop is back! I will be posting the ext update soon.

Edited by shavashava - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Nice lovely update

Manik should not be bothered about it as Nandu loves him not anyone else so instead of ruining their relationship he should focus on making beautiful memories of it with his love Nandu

He should have shared it with Nandu if its bothering him so much as she can give him new perspective of it to see

Continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Manik must share this with Nandini. He shouldn't be insecure and yeah, the texting part was hilarious
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hope dhruv doesn't come in between manik n nandani
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hhahhahahahhaahahahah!!! The last MaNan part was so funny!! "Take out the ice cream and smack it on your face asshole"" ahaha can't stop laughing!! Nice one!! And hope Dhruv doesn't do anything *sigh* cont. soon
Edited by parthholic - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Awesome

Fab



Rock



Confused


What's going on in dis story
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Posted: 10 years ago
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NICE UPDATE
BUT DHRUV HE IS SO OVERREACTING
I JUST HATE HIM
THANKS FOR PM
CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 10 years ago
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what was that!!??gosh!!I miss their romance!!!please make it up for them soon!!anyways loved it! continue soonthanks for the pm

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