MaNan || The Indivisible Hearts || ON HOLD

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Index
Prologue: Down
Chapter-1: Page-3
Chapter-2: Page-5
Chapter-3: Page-7
Chapter-4: Page-10

Prologue!

"I am sorry. I can't marry you, I am engaged." The girl spoke caressing her engagement ring lovingly.

"Then why are your parents finding a guy for you? Aren't they aware of your engagement?" The guy asked curiously.

"They know about it. But they don't know the amount of love I have for him. They want me to get married to someone else. But you tell me, how can I marry someone when he never leaves my heart." She spoke sadly still caressing her ring.

"Oh! Where's the guy then?" He asked.

"Why should I tell you?" The girl asked cutely.

"You can think of me as your friend. Now tell me where's he?" He asked again, hoping to get an answer. He was really interested in knowing her love story more.

"There!" She pointed out somewhere and the guy went numb.

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Yo! I am here with another story.
It maybe a short one because I already know what all I have to write in here.
I am getting more and more ideas in my bed, hehe.
Do tell me how's the prologue?
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vyshnavivaiga thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nyc prologue.
nd huz de guy???
um curious..
SONIAGHOSH thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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NICE PROLOGUE
PLEASE UPDATE SOON AND IF YOU CAN ALSO PM ME
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice prologue...seems interesting
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
suraiya77 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome! Cont. soon.. I think manik may be dead..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice actually quite
Interesting😊😊😊
But please
Make both of them
Alive
I want happy
ending😛😛😛

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Posted: 10 years ago
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It is nice and catchy .. The title is wonderful ! Over all the story was very well written .. And why do I have a feeling that guy is dead !!!!! I don't know maybe ! I am a sadist that way 😛 .. So yeah do write more .. Will be watching out for ur story 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sounds good. N interesting
Before uploading plz if it emotional then I have to read it arrange my tissue so reply me
Amzzzing
Kept up
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb prologue but I think she is pointing to manik's poster. ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting one
Liked the concept
Even the title is nice

And I think that the guy is dead? And I am having a feeling that she's talking to Manik about her lover. Is It So????

Curious to read the next part
Continue soon dear
Edited by Roshni8 - 10 years ago

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