manan ff Ur_Possessiveness_Kills_Me, imp note pg 42,27/09 - Page 17

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome chapter
Very well done by Nandini n cabir
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow!
Amazing..
Poor nandu!
Nandu shouldn't forgive manik so easily..
Nandu loved manik! That's why she left!
So sad!
I think u should make entry of rahul to make manik jealous
and try to give some parts of their present life also..
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Posted: 10 years ago
U love to irritating me surly no precp
I want that nandu not so easily manik ko maf kardeay


N I love dis bold attitude nandu

Make manik realise his feelings 4 her

N jealous
New entry someone 4 nandu
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update...
Cabir is so caring...
Manik should do something good to make it up for nandu's apology...
Will be waiting 4 next update...
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update...
loved the ending
can't wait for nandu to become manik's star again
keep up the good work
priota thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
nxt part sooon plzzz... can't wait...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wat a story yr..

m new reader of ur story..

kal padhni strt ki tumhari story..

nd tellin d truth dat

in

starting parts I dnt like ur story much

bt


jb tum hume past mei le kr gye tbse I strt liking ur story..

I like it manik is nandani's Choco pie nd nandani is manik's Star..

Well done keep it up..


Update soon


Waiting eagerly fr update
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Posted: 10 years ago
prsnt track...

nandini was lyng on her bad n was rmmbrng her past whn manik came to the room...

manik doesnt say anythng n ly on the odr side of the bed...

nandu was jst gong to hug him as she knw manik might b hrt bt she cntrol n thn she saw tht manik was asleep n in his sleep he hug nandini nandini was feelng gud n bad both...

gud bcoz manik was with her so she doesnt need have tnsn bt bad for rahul n manik both...

as rahul was in hosp. n manik was becomng angry man day by day n nandini think this all was happng jst bcoz of her...

so she take a decisn to go away frm manik frm his lyf forevr so tht he cant start a new lyf...

nandini jst wanted to have a lst cute movmnt with manik...

she hug him tightly n with tht manik opn his eyes n saw nandini's head on his chest...

manik kiss on her head n thn sleepng huggng her...

morng tym...

nandini get up n saw manik was not thier... she see the tym n got tht he might have gone to colg n thn she pack her bags n take her passport n wnt to Airport...

n thn she goes to newyork...

n on odr side manik came home n see nandini was not thier... n thn he check tht her clothes were also missng he shout loudly... NANDINI TUM MUJHE CHOD KR NHI JA SKTI... NANDINI...

nandini was in flite... n again start thinkng abt her past...
as she herslf dont knw abt manik possivness... bt she was not able to stay with manik...bcoz of his ovr possivness...

flashback...

manan were sleepng huggng each othr...jst thn nandini door get a klok... n she opn her eyes n jst thn she saw she was sleepng with manik...

n was shock as in nite cabir was with so frm were manik came bt thn she again lisn cabir klokng the door... n askng her to opn it...

nandini jst said bhai mai bath lene lgi hu thodi der ruk jao mai khud niche ah jati hu... cabir said ohkk... n thn go down...

nandini - manik utho yaha se or yaha kr kya rhe ho tum...

manik in sleepng voice - star plzz sone do na vase bhi bot dino baad itni achi need a rhi hai...

nandini get angry n push him n he fall down frm bed... ( poor manik hehhehe )

manik opn his eyes with jrk n said yr kya hai star i knw u r angry with me bt mujhe niche kyu gera raat ko to bot hug kr rhi thi... ab tumhari need puri ho gyi to tata bye bye... so mean u r yr...

nandu - jst shut up ohkk n mujhe lga cabir bhai hai es liye maine hug kiya hoga vrna mai or tumhe hug kru impossible...

manik - acha tbhi raat ko need me bol rhi thi... manik i missed u so much...

nandu - jhoot km bolo maine asa kuch nhi bola...

manik - acha ab chodo us baat ko or mujhe sohne do... sayng this he again ly on bed nandink jst said manik yaha se jao plzz...

mujhe or tng mt kro olready head me pain ho rhi hai n med. bha k pass hai so plzz jao mujhe med. leni hai...

manik was tnse bcoz in night also her head was painng n now again... he thought he should ask dr. so he without sayng anythng wnt frm thier...

nandini too get dress up n wnt to cabir n ask him for med. as her head was painng badly... cabir gave med. n ask her to take rest...

cabir take nandu to her own house n she take rest...

on odr side manik n dr. cnvo...

manik - dr. meri frnd kl stair se gir gyi thi or ab uska head bar bar pain kr raha hai...

dr. - i think vo stress le rhi hai es liye... kya unhe koi baat prob. de rhi hai...

manik - dr. i didnt abt tht...

dr. - so u should find it bcoz asy to unka head bot pain kre ga vo prob. create kr skta hai... apko uska ache se care krna chahiye... koshish ki jiye k vo apni baaty share kre ap se ya apne kisi close se...

manik nodded n lft frm thier to nandu house n thier he get to knw tht vo apne ghr vaps chli gyi...

manik wnt to cabir house...

cabir - manik tu yaha kya kr raha hai...??? ( in angry tone )

manik - cabir mai bs yeh btane aya tha k maine dr. se baat ki thi he said agr unka head bar bar pain kr raha hai to it means k vo kisi baat ko leh kr tnse hai so i think tujhe us se baat krni chahiye n mai use sry bolne bhi aya hai plzzz yr ek baar milne de...

cabir - lisn i knw tu sch me guilt feel kr raha hai bt pari abhi so rhi hai... jb uthe gi mai baat kru ga bt us se phile i cant do anything

manik - cabir mai uska mood thik krna chahta hu so kya mai use bahr leja skta hu... plzz n mai us se mafi bhi mang lu ga plzzz...

cabir - mai kuch nhi bol skta tu pari se khud puch lena vase mujhe bhi lgta hai use bahr jana chahiye use acha lge ga... dekh tu mera buddy hai is liye ek chance dera hu... agr teri jga koi or hota to kb ka hosp. ponch gya hota...

precap - manan n thier cute romnce... manik gettng mad n findng her evrywere...

now i hope u guyzzz r hapy with prsnt track... now u will get prsnt track also now do big comnts...
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was continue soon...and plz dnt separate them...clear it fast
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update...
so in present nandini left manik and went to new york...
lets see how manik will change himself now...
and past...
he is really concerned for her thats why asked the doctor for the reason of pain...
and also ask cabir one chance...
precap...😲

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