manan ff Ur_Possessiveness_Kills_Me, imp note pg 42,27/09 - Page 15

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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing,fantastic,mindblowing update...i really loved it yr...
u penned it so nicely...
nd thanks for the lovely n wonderful update...
ur such an amazing writer...keep it up..
plsss update soon dea will be waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
emotional chapter.. nandu's bodyguards were there for rescue.. cabini bond was awesome... time for the truth...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
upload soon na...😒waiting waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
update soon na...😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
cabir - dr. kya mai pari ko ghr le ja skta hu...

dr. - ya sure bt dheyan rkhna k vo apni med. tym pr le n ya agr jra c bhi pain ho to use mere pass kisi bhi dr. k pass le jana...

cabir aftr talkng to dr. take nandu at her home...

nandu was in her room n was takng rst n was thinkng how her lyf has change the guy she lv the most slap her in frnt of every one...

nandu was havng tears in her eyes rmmbrng the day which change her lyf... flashback...

nandu was sittng in her room whn she got a call frm manik she was happy as today she was gong to tell manik tht she like him... as thy spnd many cute mvmnts so she thought manik also like her... bt tht call change her lyf

manik - star u knw wht ajj mera dream pura ho gya...

nandu - kya mtlb...???

manik - maine ajj aliya ko prop. mara n she said yes...
tumhe pta hai ajj mai itna khush hu k tumhe bta bhi nhi skta...

nandu pov
kya maine sch meh vohi suna jo usne kaha bt mujhe lga tht he lvs me wo sari kiss n hmari sari nites or hmari sari special movmnts...

manik - hyy... star u aj mai raat ko nhi a pau ga bt kl pkka mile ge ajj mai date pr ja raha hu aliya k sath... byee tc...

nandu was cryng badly... rmmbrng her all movmnts spnd with manik...

aftr some tym cabir come...

cabir - pari yeh tere liye hai tu kl subha hi USA ja rhi hai...

nandu - bt bhai USA kyu...

cabir - pari it was dad's lst wish vo chahte thy k tu apni study vaha kre...

nandu pov

i think yeh hi thik hai ab mujhe bhi age bd jana chahiye mai us k liye apni lyf khrab nhi kr skti i have to go away frm his lyf...

nandu - ohkk bhai mai jau gi app jao mai packng kr leti hu...

cabir hug her n thn wnt to his room with tears in his eyes...

nandu again start cryng n start dong packng... n thn sleep...

nxt day nandu wnt to USA n thn cabir tell to fab 4 tht pari has gone... manik was shock as he didnt knw abt this thing in nandu didnt tell him... he wnt frm thier n try to call nandu bt fon was switch off...

manik pov...

vo ase kaise ja skti hai mujhe chod kr... or usne mujhe btaya bhi nhi kl hmne bat bhi ki thi bt still she didnt tell me... or ab cell bhi switch off hai... n fb pr bhi mera msg nhi ja raha khi usne mujhe block to nhi kr diya...
no she cant do tht bt vo gyi kyu mujhe us se baat krni thi ek raat me kya ho gya aisa jo usne mujhe nhi btaya...

on othr side nandini was blockng manik frm evry web side... n frm insta n whts app... evn she change her no.

nandu pov

frm now every one will c new nandu... new lyf n for tht it waz imp. to close the pst...

flashback end...

nandu haveng tears in her eyes...

jst thn she hear some sound frm window side she trn n saw manik standng their...

she soon wipe her tears n ask him wht he is dong here...

manik hold his ears n said sry star ajj maine sb k samne tum pr hath uthaya... m really sry...

nandu - i dont need ur sry so jst leave frm here...

manik - star i knw tum nraz ho bt plzz m sry mai aliya ki baat ko sch man liya m really sry... bt jb maine tumse pucha tha tb tumne bhi yes kaha tha na... k tumne vo sb baty boli hai... m sry star plzzz maff kr dooo... plzz star

nandu - oh jst stup up n lisn m not ur star so stop callng me tht mera nam nandini hai get tht thing in ur mind...

manik - plzz star aise mt bolo u knw maine tumhe kitna miss kiya maine tumhe msg krne k kitne try kiye bt u block me frm evry were...

nandu - i said stop callng me star n its my wish mai jishe chahu block kr skti hu n khi se bhi...
n ab mujhe sohna hai so jst leave plzz mera sir bohot dukh raha hai so jst leave...

manik - plzz ek bar maff kr do plzzz...

nandu - dekho agr tum nhi gye to mai bhai ko bulau gi so jst leave...

manik - plzzz yr ek bar maff kr do plzzz star...

nandu - cant u undrstand i said jst leave or else...

manik - or else...???

nandu shout bhaiii... bhai...

manik wnt frm thier n cabir come to her room runng... n ask wht happn pari...

nandu - no bhai bs mujhe ajj apke lap pr sohna tha is liye bulaya...

cabir - ohkk pari aja sohja...

nandu put her head on his lap n sleep thinkng abt manik n aliya...

cabir too was in thoughts... tht now wht to do he was angry on aliya n manik... n was thinkng k ab nandu ko kuch nhi ho ga ab koi bhi use hath nhi lga skta... n ab manik n aliya ko mai is k samne bhi nhi ane duga...

n thn he leave frm nandu room as she was already sleep...

n thn manik come to her room back as he was waitng for cabir to go...

manik lock the door n thn...
come to nandu n sit beside her... n jst thn nandu put her hand on manik tummy... n nandu hug him n sleep...

manik smile seeng this n said star kuch bhi ho jae tum mujh se nraz nhi rah skti... n kuch bhi ho jae mai tumhe vaps apna star bna kr rhu ga... n he too hug her back n sleep with her... n smile come on nandu face thn he hug her... as if she was drmng...

precap - dont knw ab plzz thodi plzz kro or btao agy story me kya chahte ho ap sb fir vo hi post kru gi mai n ya do big vale comnts... n bot sare lyksss...
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Posted: 10 years ago
😒Dt ws sad.. Poor nandu.. Hi.. M new t comment.. I cme across ur story n finishd t in one go.n i recently only learnd how t place comments..dts y cudnt comment. But ur story line ..Dt is totly awesme!! I wish manik gets t know d reason y nandini left him.. I hope u wil in ur comin chaps .. Well ur update ws amazin.. Waitin for more..n eagerly bitin nails t c wat happens nxt..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: acromantla

😒Dt ws sad.. Poor nandu.. Hi.. M new t comment.. I cme across ur story n finishd t in one go.n i recently only learnd how t place comments..dts y cudnt comment. But ur story line ..Dt is totly awesme!! I wish manik gets t know d reason y nandini left him.. I hope u wil in ur comin chaps .. Well ur update ws amazin.. Waitin for more..n eagerly bitin nails t c wat happens nxt..


Hope u will lyk my nxt chp. Also n thqq for comtng n lykng my story
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Posted: 10 years ago
I think you should come with a new entry like who loves nandini. It will be very interesting to see jealous manik and please end this flashback soon I just wanna see how manik become so possessive about nandini . Any way love your story keep writing and update soon .
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Posted: 10 years ago
Good going...
But nandini ka gussa valid lag bhi rha h...kuch sence Mein valid lag bhi nhi rha. .hhehehe


Anyways update soon

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