Originally posted by: RomComFan
Beautiful... her mother's words are just lovely... and the way he is caring for her, even when he is not there is just...
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Originally posted by: RomComFan
Beautiful... her mother's words are just lovely... and the way he is caring for her, even when he is not there is just...
Originally posted by: ky2forever
Aww Nids Beautifully written👏
Love this story update soon😊Read 5 chapters in one go,sorry for reading it this late i dont like waiting guess henceforth i will have to😆PS-Longer updates please😉
Originally posted by: ArSha_ManNan
So sorry for the late comment...
I just read the 3rd 4th nd the 5th chapter...
I must say u r a fab writer...
In the 3rd chapter i loved how manik consoled her and tried to calm her down...
4th chapter was the best one... The strong nandu was bck... I loved whatever happened at aryamann's house... The slap was perfect ...
I need to mention that all the quotes and those 6-words stories are too good...
Yes chapter 5 was definitely inspiring...
Loved all the updates and thankz 4 the pm
Originally posted by: nymphadoratonks
You made Manik a six word story writer, that's amazing you know! So different and so good. Because I am this big fan of six word stories, it just amazes me how one can convey so much in six words :D
Also, the French title, ouiii xD I love French and it's close to my heart hihi I wonder why I did not find the story earlier.
And you write soo well, not your first work I am reading heheh, you're so good! I am really looking forward to it and hope you update soon 😃
Originally posted by: kirankusum
It was superb..
Originally posted by: phoenixashes
the titles soo prettayyy!!anyway ..firstly like the biggest sorry to you for being soo damn late ...n now you cant be angry too cause its ur bday tmrw ...i m saved yayyeeei m sorry cause i asked for u to write , n couldnt comment or read properlyanyway ..todays the day ...i m gonna read each part n comment 😳
Originally posted by: Smileygirl23
beautiful! do cont soon
love
Ayisha
she came home and crashed on the couch in the living room , only to hear two characteristic voices laughing in the next room . her session with girls had been up to the mark for however non mushy she was , she was still the " shopping is a therapy " girl and , trying and buying clothes made her feel beautiful like it did to every damn girl in the world .
the moment she asked her servants for a coffee , the two guys , aged 21 made their way towards her .
"soo nandu how was the shopping...although I think those huge Zara and Vero Moda bags answered them for you already ?" said Cabir
Manik bit back his laughter and simply smiled to Nandini , as he knew his plan of distracting her had hit the bull's eye .
"bhai , yeah I had a good time with them "
"that's good , I'm leaving off tomorrow morning , if you don't mind ...but I don't want to " he said hesitantly
She could see the concern in his eyes , for she was his only family and reassured him " bhai , it must be some drums workshop right ?"
He smiled and Manik chuckled at the two siblings
"bhai ...please I'll be fine , nothing's wrong , you go "
" fine , I will ...bro I' m leaving you responsible here , you gotta baby sit my sister okay ?"he said , lightening everyone s mood
Nandini squirted her eyes and mouthed her usual "I m not a kid okay "while Manik heartily laughed, as the servants got a few kebabs for them .
"wow , that's my favorite "cabir said , already keeping a few In his plate aside while skimming through the tv with the remote in his other hand .
" is that dahi kebab ?" Nandini asked excitedly
Manik - "ofcourse "
"what the hell , I don't have any left ..."she said , as she looked around to see a clear cabir's plate and the last one on Manik's .
"don't eye that one , that's mine " Manik teased with his characteristic smirk
"please " said Nandini , pouting her lips cutely
She put her hands on it very stealthily , while he got busy to catch up the football score for a minute , only to see it gone and Nandini laughing with it in her hands.
And there it started , Cabir muted the tv set for he knew - the real entertainment was here !
Manik ran behind Nandini , as she jumped from her couch , balancing her petite form on the sofa laid near .
"Nandini , its cheating , you could have asked ache se "
" I did "
" nooo you didn't , give it back "
"come on you're still a monster, manik "
"what the hell !"
" yaa a monster , like when I met you "
And there the two had already taken two rounds of the the huge hall , in middle of which cabir sat seeing the show and laughing!
He in his heart could only wish , that these two to remain laughing like this throughout their lives .
Nandini sprang atop the bean bag , assuming manik had left the game and just then , Manik slowly slithered his hand around her , and very slowly held both her hand tightly around her back arresting her to the spot with his tall , strong stature .
" Manik Malhotra never loses "he said ,
not leaving her eyes even once , his husky voice breathing over her neck .
"really ? Ive already seen him do " she answered sass fully
Manik couldn't bite back the smile which danced on his lips as they both fidgeted with their hands for the next 600 seconds , looking at each other constantly .
Their laughter echoed in the hall like a melody , pure and blissful .
Nandini , had never admitted but she loved Manik's eyes , they were intense hazel like honey dew and these thoughts sent a sudden chill down her spine , giving her an instant strength wherein she unclasped her hands from his .
just then when he moved to her again , she shoved the last kebab in his mouth , surprising him yet again !
The game was over and Cabir laughed at the two fighting always ,
yet only Manik knew who had owned the day ! -
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