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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Beautiful... her mother's words are just lovely... and the way he is caring for her, even when he is not there is just...

tysmmm..i m glad u liked them
well ..he cares a lil too much u knw 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ky2forever

Aww Nids Beautifully written👏

Love this story update soon😊
Read 5 chapters in one go,sorry for reading it this late i dont like waiting guess henceforth i will have to😆
PS-Longer updates please😉



raks 🤗
i m soo glad that u loved it sooo muchhh
srsly ...the gif made me soo happy
i will update now ..soo no wait 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ArSha_ManNan

So sorry for the late comment...
I just read the 3rd 4th nd the 5th chapter...
I must say u r a fab writer...
In the 3rd chapter i loved how manik consoled her and tried to calm her down...
4th chapter was the best one... The strong nandu was bck... I loved whatever happened at aryamann's house... The slap was perfect ...
I need to mention that all the quotes and those 6-words stories are too good...
Yes chapter 5 was definitely inspiring...
Loved all the updates and thankz 4 the pm

thats ok ..girl
tysmmm
yes ...the transition from break down to her overcoming it ...
ty ..i m glad u loved the 6 word stories as well
tysm once again 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nymphadoratonks

You made Manik a six word story writer, that's amazing you know! So different and so good. Because I am this big fan of six word stories, it just amazes me how one can convey so much in six words :D
Also, the French title, ouiii xD I love French and it's close to my heart hihi I wonder why I did not find the story earlier.
And you write soo well, not your first work I am reading heheh, you're so good! I am really looking forward to it and hope you update soon 😃

yaa ...even i like them..hence made manik that 😆
haha ...yaa i hav written a few by now ..n i m soo glad that u liked it
i will update now 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
tysmmm😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: phoenixashes



the titles soo prettayyy!!
anyway ..firstly like the biggest sorry to you for being soo damn late ...n now you cant be angry too cause its ur bday tmrw ...i m saved yayyeee

i m sorry cause i asked for u to write , n couldnt comment or read properly
anyway ..todays the day ...i m gonna read each part n comment 😳

adiii...🤗
tysmmm...yaa i cant be angry ..shitt.!
well u gotta read the new part as well now ..😆😆
n its k ...*kissing emoji*

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Smileygirl23

beautiful! do cont soon
love
Ayisha

tysmmm ayisha
i m glad u liked it 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Breathtaking !! The firstwrd that striked my ind when Iwas reading !!
The title !! OH man !!! That was so awesome !!!
i just love ur stories..they are so calm n so simple yet elegant.yet effective.
they take breath away ..
I just love ur stories n hpw yu take the flow..
Nandini broken n manik n his turmoil.
I cant express in wrrs..
Take a bow..thats it..
I loved all the blue writing..they are so true !! I just loved them
Update soon..
Love,
Harika..keep smiling..it looks good on you..
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Posted: 10 years ago




chapter 6

she came home and crashed on the couch in the living room , only to hear two characteristic voices laughing in the next room . her session with girls had been up to the mark for however non mushy she was , she was still the " shopping is a therapy " girl and , trying and buying clothes made her feel beautiful like it did to every damn girl in the world .

the moment she asked her servants for a coffee , the two guys , aged 21 made their way towards her .

"soo nandu how was the shopping...although I think those huge Zara and Vero Moda bags answered them for you already ?" said Cabir

Manik bit back his laughter and simply smiled to Nandini , as he knew his plan of distracting her had hit the bull's eye .

"bhai , yeah I had a good time with them "

"that's good , I'm leaving off tomorrow morning , if you don't mind ...but I don't want to " he said hesitantly

She could see the concern in his eyes , for she was his only family and reassured him " bhai , it must be some drums workshop right ?"

He smiled and Manik chuckled at the two siblings

"bhai ...please I'll be fine , nothing's wrong , you go "

" fine , I will ...bro I' m leaving you responsible here , you gotta baby sit my sister okay ?"he said , lightening everyone s mood

Nandini squirted her eyes and mouthed her usual "I m not a kid okay "while Manik heartily laughed, as the servants got a few kebabs for them .

"wow , that's my favorite "cabir said , already keeping a few In his plate aside while skimming through the tv with the remote in his other hand .

" is that dahi kebab ?" Nandini asked excitedly

Manik - "ofcourse "

"what the hell , I don't have any left ..."she said , as she looked around to see a clear cabir's plate and the last one on Manik's .

"don't eye that one , that's mine " Manik teased with his characteristic smirk

"please " said Nandini , pouting her lips cutely

She put her hands on it very stealthily , while he got busy to catch up the football score for a minute , only to see it gone and Nandini laughing with it in her hands.

And there it started , Cabir muted the tv set for he knew - the real entertainment was here !

Manik ran behind Nandini , as she jumped from her couch , balancing her petite form on the sofa laid near .

"Nandini , its cheating , you could have asked ache se "

" I did "

" nooo you didn't , give it back "

"come on you're still a monster, manik "

"what the hell !"

" yaa a monster , like when I met you "

And there the two had already taken two rounds of the the huge hall , in middle of which cabir sat seeing the show and laughing!

He in his heart could only wish , that these two to remain laughing like this throughout their lives .

Nandini sprang atop the bean bag , assuming manik had left the game and just then , Manik slowly slithered his hand around her , and very slowly held both her hand tightly around her back arresting her to the spot with his tall , strong stature .

" Manik Malhotra never loses "he said ,

not leaving her eyes even once , his husky voice breathing over her neck .

"really ? Ive already seen him do " she answered sass fully

Manik couldn't bite back the smile which danced on his lips as they both fidgeted with their hands for the next 600 seconds , looking at each other constantly .

Their laughter echoed in the hall like a melody , pure and blissful .

Nandini , had never admitted but she loved Manik's eyes , they were intense hazel like honey dew and these thoughts sent a sudden chill down her spine , giving her an instant strength wherein she unclasped her hands from his .

just then when he moved to her again , she shoved the last kebab in his mouth , surprising him yet again !

The game was over and Cabir laughed at the two fighting always ,

yet only Manik knew who had owned the day ! -

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thank you much everyone for the lovely comments , srsly they make my day and help me write more ,

also for PMs ...buddy me , makes it easier 😳

Edited by drnidsur - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update dea. ...
Continue soonnn
Tnx for the pm

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