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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: divansree

Twinkle🤗

I have missed you so much and your words👏
Yes manik found everything, even with those trembling hands and Uneasy breaths he can recognize her touch, her voice ... The reason for his existence.
I soo much missed PaNi in a frame.. Today when they were together everything was perfect, nobody cares about arya coz we all know they will always protect their' humesha'
Babies😳

Awww...thankyou soo much baby! 🤗 Honestly, I've missed being around too but even if it's just little I thought I'd write something to welcome PaNi/MaNan back on our screens!
@Bold: Exactly! I'm really not too bothered about his plans and revenge and all because the track's main purpose is to close old pending loops rather than intro a whole new idea of MaNan separating again. Their love has passed all those notions now! Can't wait for her to cuddle in him even more tomorrow and for them to just speak...just speak their heart!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
'A girl asked a boy if she was pretty.He said no. Then she asked if he liked her and he said no. She asked him if he wanted to be with her forever. He said no. She then asked him if he would cry if she walked away. He again said no. She had heard too much. She needed to leave... As she walked away, he grabbed her arm and told her to stay. He said, 'you are not pretty, you are beautiful. I don't like you, I love you. Idon't want to be with you forever, I need to be with you forever. And I wouldn't cry if you walk away, I would die.'
Found this. Describes Manik's thoughts, dosen't it?
And coming to your post, Oh!!!! sehera mein aaj barish kar di. what a bliss!!! You nailed it once again. Was waiting for your post eagerly. And it was worth every second.
love you🤗
Geet
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: geet.a

RES.

bae, u made me cry.
i'll return with love and poem, dedicated to u

This is for u my BAE!

Saanson ki thandi safed chaadar mein
Tum aur main
Kuch khoyi hui
Raaton ki talaash mein ghum,
Takiyon ko zameen par phenke
Chuppi mein khel rahe the;
Har awaaz ki aanch ko
Neecha kare
Bas ek dooje ki
khaamoshiyon mein ghum
Tum
Aur
main,
Kuch der waqt ko thehraate hue
Hasi-mazaak mein baarish ki boondon
Ko dekh rahe the;
Yeh boonde,
Bewajood, chupi mein
Chap-chap,
Chap-chap
Kar rahi thi
Road par,
Jaise humare ankahe gaane ko
Dhun de rahi ho
Koi sureeli;
Tum aur main,
Baahon mein baahein daale
Bas ek doosre ki aankhein
Dhoondh rahe the
Andhere mein
Do chamakte hue angaare
Aur honth
Jo muskurana band hi nahi karte;
Pata hi nahi chala
Kab aankh lag gayi
Aur yun hi muskurate hue
Kho gaye ek dooje mein
Tum aur main;
Na jaane kab ho gaye
Tum aur main,
Hum.

Oh how I've missed your poems all of last week!! This told just an enthralling journey! Man so many imageries and when you lay with your words like these to weave scenes I want to tell writers to include all of this! No going to ask how you do it...just whatever you do...keep doing it because you do it the best!

I loveeed @bold...like including a liner on the white sheet, it was such a magical moment. White's just colour...it really captivates the whole essence of the purity and serenity of their love and relationship!

@Red...it just couldn't get any better...like the perrrfeeeccct conclusions of what they started of as tum aur main has now become the hum. And only you could've done this! ❤️"Hum" - such a little world yet they've learnt the true meaning of togetherness during their separation and their battles with those around them as well as each other. They just define a whole new world when they're together and that leaves us all tongue-tied.

Your words and MaNan...*sighhh* just the dose one craves to find some peace from hectic schedules. I love you for this..thankyou my bae! 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Posted my comment winkh on pg 2..
Love HAMESHA
Pankh
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
my BAE: I love u for those words!!! koi kare na kare, u always give me some amazing love feels!!! Thank u for gracing those words with so much love!!! <3 <3 <3
manan define hum for me...and they have gone from 'what about me' to 'what about us'
our darling nandu asked this...remember?

from the forest scene to the stuck-between-cupboards- scene...

babies are solace! they are love and peace
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16

HEYYY!!! 🤗🤗🤗...

OH GODD!! It feels soo goood to be back!! and m back on a special day..since today was one of the heart touching scene of MaNan..!! So when i was watching it, i just made my mind that i have to come here and i have to read ur take on the scene!! and Dear u made me speechless..!! u r always amazing with ur words..and today MaNan Came back with a BANG!! And ur words just slayed me!! Like literally!! Everytime I read ur take on the MaNan scene..it always makes me speechless that how could one write so perfectly? So dear experiencing that scene through ur POV is truly a BLISS!! And I heard u also wasn't coming from last few days. Why? U r done with ur exams na?

Okay so coming towards my point of view...!! The most blissful thing was when manik came into his senses and the only name he whispered was of nandani..like he was unconscious since long..and when he woke up..all he need was nandani! He wanted his star...he wanted his soul to be with him..All that time of unconscious he was away from her..but she was there in his dreams..she was always there in his mind..Even though he wasn't in his senses but nandani was is and will always be in his senses. She rules his heart..she is the reason of his breathing. And when he saw her around, she just held her hand so tight that he never let go of her ever!! Because if he is conscious now, Its because his nandani was going away from him..its because his devil mom was trying to separate them..and even though he was unconscious he sensed his star going away from him..He sensed the danger and he ended up coming back into his conscious state and to call nandani that he is there for her! HE WILL ALWAYS BE THERE WITH HER!!...❤️

And when he held her hand..He didn't wanted to let go of her at any cost..he wanted to be with her..But she has to go bcz of his devil mom! She didn't wanted to leave him..but for his health and for him she had to leave. Sometimes u have to hurt urself in order save others from getting hurt. Sometimes u have to bear pain to make ur loved ones feel happy. The only thing matter to nandani was only Manik's health..and she was ready to do anything for his health. And that's what nandani did!! And when she helplessly broke down infront of aryaman..it left me into tears!!..how helpless she was...she wanted to be with manik..but she just couldn't! How worse this feeling would be for her! But she finally made through it with the help of those guards !! :D

And now theirrr Hug!!! It was like a Comforting sight! SUCH A BLISSFULL MOMENT! It was a scene full of love, passion, longing, intensity, pain and the need of each other! It showed that how they are incomplete without each other..it showed that how terrible it feels to see the other half of ur soul in pain. It showed that how difficult is it to fight with the devils alone. It showed that how a star shines in darkness! That scene had something in it! It showed that how nandani realized that home was not a place..It was here safe in his arms. All her pains..all her sorrows..all her tensions..all her lonliness just fades away..because she is in her home! She is protected..she is with HER MANIK..WITH HER STAR..THEY BOTH BELONGS HERE INTO EACH OTHER'S ARMS!!


Love

Shez.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: twinkle10

Thank you! 😳 Aaah...don't be! Their growth and love has evolved to a whole new level of maturity and growth now and there now remains no room for misunderstandings and hiding. They've learnt to fight together already so I'm confident we won't be heading towards no separation. It's a track which will focus on closing the open loops such as soha, Manik's innocence, Nyonika's ploys etc

Thanks Twinkle for this positivity, forum really needs it. Just wish tomorrow Nandini will be able to save Manik. Seeing Parth so weak and Manik unconscious, both are really painful things.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
I was moved to tears as I watched them on screen... ❤️
Reading your post has given me the same effect...❤️

It was so beautifully and delicately executed, the pain, the love, the longing for each other was awesome. You have said it all gal, there is nothing more to add...

I'm so glad that our MaNan is back... ❤️❤️❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
This is such a beautiful analysis❤️
Loved to read it. Their love is stronger then anything else on this show.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: geetkumar


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">'A girl asked a boy if she was pretty.He said no. Then she asked if he liked her and he said no. She asked him if he wanted to be with her forever. He said no. She then asked him if he would cry if she walked away. He again said no. She had heard too much. She needed to leave... As she walked away, he grabbed her arm and told her to stay. He said, 'you are not pretty, you are beautiful. I don't like you, I love you. Idon't want to be with you forever, I need to be with you forever. And I wouldn't cry if you walk away, I would die.'</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Found this. Describes Manik's thoughts, dosen't it?</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">And coming to your post, Oh!!!! sehera mein aaj barish kar di. what a bliss!!! You nailed it once again. Was waiting for your post eagerly. And it was worth every second.</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">love you🤗</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Geet</font>


Geet 🤗
Yes indeed... That quote's just absolutely perfect for Manik. For someone who considers her to be the only reason he's alive now, it will just never matter how drowsy or how deep of a sleep he is in. She's there in every inch of him and that will never change.
Loved hearing from you today! Thanks my love! <3

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