MONSTER N ANGEL TALE. part 13 ON PG20. 6/02

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lovlytuli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

ty fr the pm...

lovely n interesting story...

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ArSha_ManNan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Superb update
Its very mysterious n interesting
Manik's ring... What is it abt?
Y manik got so angry after dancing wid nandu??
Nyonika is not pari maa??? Y does she wanna find that girl??
Nandu's nail shined???
MaNan dancing together

Thnkz 4 the pm

Edited by ArSha_ManNan - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

manan r so lovely...
ty fr given this beautiful update...
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Myra

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Posted: 9 years ago

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MONSTER N ANGEL TALE.

PART 9.

Manik n Nandani in each other's arms , Lost in each other... Thn Manik held her up in d air by her waist ... n thn every one stopped n only noth of them were dancing. ... unaware of thr surrounding. . Lost in each other...
Background music... Manan tune
After completing thr dance Nandani felt embarrassed or say shy.. so she left. Nyonika enters ...

Nyonika : Manik! !! Kya hua mili ??
Manik : Nai...!
Nyonika : Wat ?? Abhi tak nai mili? ? She said in disbelief.
Manik : Han nai mili jab milegi to I'll tell u. Now plz let me b in peace.
Nyonika gave a disgusted luk ...
Manik gave an as if I care luk..
Nyonika left in anger.
Mukti : Hey Manik!!
Manik : Hii... Wat's up??
Mukti : Ntn yar .. where's Cabir. .?
Manik : He might sumwhr here only...dhund na.. yah8n kahin hoga..!!!
Mukti : Ok..m aati hu...!
Saying so she left.
Manik was standing alone... Alya noticed that. . N came to him.
Alya : Kya hua Manik? ? U luk so stressed. .moving towatds him.. n thn she caressed his face .
Manik removed her hands : Alya.. m nt in mood I think I should leave.
Alya : Why??? Wat happened? ?
Manik : Ntn yar.. just need sum fresh air.
Alya : Bt our performance? ?
Manik : I'll b back by the tym. N he left.
Alya : Y don't he let me cum close to him..??frustrated*****
Scene changes _ _ _ _ _ _
Cabir : Tum meri baat to sunoo!!! Pleading
Navya : Kya sunu m ??? Tum ne kuch baat karne layak choda h ?
Cabir : Navya.. meri galti nai thi...!!
Navya : I know Cabir. . Galti meri thi... meri thi..that trusted u..!! *sobbing*
Cabir : Plz Navya. . Listen to me once!! Mjhe apni safai pesh karne ka mauka to do.
Navya : Cabir plzz.. m bohot mushkil se aage badhi hu ..ab mjhe phir se wo sab face nai karna h .. I can't bare it all again. *sobbing *
Cabir : Navy plz.. don't cry. .trust me thos tym I won't let u down.
Scene changes _ _ _ _ _ _
Manik went outside the hall. N there he saw a grl sitting on ledge . As he went nea her he saw her face... n thr tears in her eyes. Manik sat beside her.
Manik : Na... Nandani tum ro kyu rahi ho...?? Y r u crying? ??
Nandani : wiping hrr tears Ntn..kuch nai bas aose hi.
Manik : Maine kuch liya kya ?? Meri wajah se.. before he could say anything
Nandani : Nai..it's just that m missing sum1 close .
Manik : Ohh. Dekho don't cry agar wo abhi tumhe ddkh rahe honge to wo bhi sad ho jayenge. N I don't think that u want them to b sad ...no na.??
Nandani hugged Manik n cried bitterly. .Manik hugged her back.
Manik : Plz..don't cry...!!
Nandani : I can't take it anymore. .!!
Manik : Wat..??? Wat happened Nandani? ? Bolo na.. he said in a worried tone.
Nandani realised ahe was wid Manik. She broke the hug n wiped her tears n said : Wo.. Manik..Nothing. . Kuch nai ..
Manik : It's ok Nandani. . U can tell.
Nandani : Ntn ..kuch nai I think I should leave.
Manik : But...
Nandani : I m sorry. I spoilt u'r mood.
Saying so she left. Bt Manik could feel her pain. This was d frst tym he felt sad 4 someone other thn Fab5 . He wanted to do anything to make her smile bt he felt so helpless. frown emoticon

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Edited by Myra_parthholic - 9 years ago

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archu_asok

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Awesome update. Cavya's convo was emotional one.the way manik consoled nandini was mindblowing. Totally an blissful update. Eagerly waiting for next update. Thanks for pm.

Keep writing.

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Myra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: archu_asok
Awesome update. Cavya's convo was emotional one.the way manik consoled nandini was mindblowing. Totally an blissful update. Eagerly waiting for next update. Thanks for pm.
Keep writing.
Stay blessed😊

THANKS A LOT DEAR

WILL TRY UPDATING SOON😛😛