MONSTER N ANGEL TALE. part 13 ON PG20. 6/02 - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
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the update is awesome
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Hey.. Please pm me when you update any of your stories.. Liked all of them a lot
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Plz pm me nxt tym when U update nxt chapter
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nice update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing love it ..

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Hey.. Please pm me when you update any of your stories.. Liked all of them a lot


THANKS A LPOT DEAR , M GLAD U LIKED MY WORKS .
IT REALLY MEANS ALOT TO ME . U GUYSA APPRECIATING MY WORK . WHAT ELSE DO I NEED 😊😊😊
THANKS ALOT LOVE
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MONSTER N ANGEL TALE.
PART 10

Manik was left alone in deep thoughts.
Manik's p.o.v.
Wat's tht ? Y iz she bothering me.. y iz her pain bothering me..? Par wo ro kyu rahi thi .. n thn he remembers her sudde hug. I can't get over her tears. ..Kya karu.?

End of Manik's p.o.v. ..
Scene changes _ _ _
Cabir : Tum meri baat to sunoo!
Navya started to leave... Cabir grabbed her wrist n pulled her forcefully .
Cabir : Navya. ..wo meri galti nai thi. I was trapped in all that.
Navya : Agar tumhari galti nai thi .. to tum sab kuch chod kar kyu chale gaye the.. she siad in disbelief.
Cabir : Wo Manik ki Mom...he realised wat he said.. Wo meri majboori thi.
Navya : Cabir plzz! !!she said in frustration trying get rid of his grip.
Cabir : Navya tum aise nai jaa sakti. I want to b with u.. n I promise tht I won't leave u ever again.he said Pleading .
Navya : Kya guarantee h k u won't leave me all shattered. .? Tumhe pata bhi h k mjhe kya kya sehna pada ..? I cried all day n ny8 4 u... k 1 day U'll cum back. ..tum aaoge n mere se kahoge Navya m sorry. . Bt u didn't! !!! Olz Cabir m dobara hurt nai hona chahti.. tum chale jao. She said sobbing.
Cabir hugged Navya
Cabir : Tum plz ro mat Navya . Ab m tumge chod k kahin nai jaunga 0lz.. Navya trust me 4 oncce.
Navya hugged him back n cried even more as if she doesn't want him to leave.
Scene changes _ _ _ _ _
Nandani's p.o.v
Y did I do that..? Maine Manik ko hug kyu kiya..? Mjhe aisa nai karna chahiye tha. Aaj Amms hoti to m unki god m sar rakh k sab kuch share karti. Manik ... When I hugged him I was feeling so peaceful in his arms . My all worries just vanished. I was feeling so calm. I wanted to b tbere forever. . In those peaceful arms. Wait ye sab m kya soch rahi hu.. yad nau wo dreams jisme tht guy lect me.. agar mere sath sach m aisa hua to m jee nai paungi . M kya kahungi kisi se. Bt Manik. .? U hav to stay away frm him.
End of p.o.v.
Manik went back to d Orchestra. . N nkw je was searching Nandani all around. ..
Manik's p.o.v.
Pata nai kahaan gayab ho gayi h ye ladki. She was so upset. Pata nai kyu bt I want to know more abt her her pain n worries. I want to meet her. Wait Manik wat r u thinking. .? N that too abt Nandani. ?? U don't neex to get close to her..jo kaam karne aaya h kar n leave. ..! Bt wat abt her ? Do I really want to leave .. ?
End of p.o.v
Mukti : Manik. ..tapping his shoulder Kya hua.. mila..?
Manik : Hmm ed.. kaun??
Mukti : Manik! Cabir ...we were searching him na ?
Manik : Oh han... nai..mjhe nai mila.. wait I'll b back..
Mukti : Kahan..? Raising her eyebrows
Manik : Are Cabir ko dhundne ja raha hu.
Mukti : Oh ok!
Manik went to search Cabir.
He was roaming around searching fr him bt was the only thing he was thinking abt. He was passing through the balcony area when ge heatd someone. .
Navya : Trust. ..!!! U r talking abt trust... luk seriously. ..?
Manik moved towards d balcony. . N saw Cavya.
Cabir : Navya this tym I won't let u down. N I will do anything to make it up to u. Trust me 4 one last tym plz..
Navya was confused
Navya's p.o.v
I want to give u this chance I want yo love you again. . Bt agar is baar bhi isnd mjhe chod diya to..is bar m apne aap ko kaise sambhalungi...
End of p.o.v
Navya : I need sum tym Cabir.
Cabir : Take u'r tym... I'll wait 4 u'r answer..
Cabir's p.o.v
Navya bas ek bar mhhe ye chance de do..this tym I won't leave u. M tumhe os bar chod k kahin nai jaunga.
End of p.o.v.
Manik's p.o.v.
Ye Cabir n Navya sath m ..? I just hope in dono k beech sab thik ho jaye . Meri wajah se Cabir aapme ap ko justify bhi nai kar paya last tym. I think is bar wi sab explain kar dega n everything will b f9.
End of p.o.v.
Cavya left. N Manik went un d balcony n was sitting all alone n lukin at the stars there was a ly8 breeze. He closed his eyes n stood by the pillar n thn after few minutes he opened his eyes n saw a girl standing down in d corner all alone in deep thoughts.

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That's all 4 today guys . Hope u all wil lyk it. Do leave u'r comments. N don't forget to hit d lyk . Btw I know story thodi boring h. Bt plz guys if u hav any suggestions so u'r most welcome. Sorry for keeping u all waiting . was busy with some very important stuff. N all those who want PM(S) plz send me Budddy Request.😊
loads of love n Sorry(s)
Myra
Edited by Myra_parthholic - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78

THANKS ALOT DEAR😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update. Manan's POV was mindblowing. Cavya's convo was beautifully penned. Hope they sort out their issues. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.thanks for pm.
Keep writing.
Stay blessed😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
nice update
manik wants to know her pain
thanks for pm
continue soon
waiting for next part

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