MONSTER N ANGEL TALE. part 13 ON PG20. 6/02 - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update...
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MONSTER N ANGEL TALE.
PART 12.


Nandani went running straight to her room. Thankfully Navya wasn't thr. She locked d door n sat on edge of her bed.

Nandani's p.o.v.
Cool breeze was blowing n I was sitting thr all alone thinking abt my parents. They're no more n this feeling made me sad . I wanted to talk to them , hug them . U wanted to share everything tht was going on in my lyf. Those feelings. . My fear..n d most haunting dream. That dream. .It freaks me out lyk hell. I can't frgt tht dream. It keep flashing in my eyes. I don't know why..bt I hav a strong feeling that he will leave me alone n go away one day. I won't be able to gather myself again. The pain that I had gone through out my childhood was bearable coz I was small n Chachi was always thr to cover it up. Bt the space tht space won't b filled up easily infact it will b impossible to fill his space in my lyf.
Her vision got blurry as her eyes were moist n tears made thr way to her cheeks n she started crying.
End of p.o.v.

Thinking abt Manik.

I was just sitting thr with all these thoughts when he came n sat beside me. I don't know how.. bt he asked me abt my sadness n thn all of a sudden he laid his lips on mine. I couldn't find a way to escape. .bt was carried away by his smell. I found solace which I have been searching since yrs in his embrace. He held me as if he would never let me go. I felt so safe in his arms.

Wat am I thinking ? Why m I thinking all this? (she cursed herself 4 thinking all this)

Manik..!! How could I? ? How could I do this ??? I shouldn't hav done tht. It's wrong. . I know u will leave me one day. N thn I will b shattered n scattered. No one will b able to heal me up. I won't able to breathe. .I'll die this tym .. I won't b able to gather myself n stand again.

Scene changes _ _ _
Manik standing near d window. In deep thoughts. ..of Nandani.
Manik's p.o.v.
Cool breeze was blowing. I stood by the pillar wid my eyes closed. As soon as I opened my eyes I saw a grl sitting all alone. I don't y I felt so connected to her , so I went to her n to my surprise she was Nandani. I sat beside her . Ny her face I could make out she as sad.. I asked her y ???
I thought tht I might hav done sumthin. Bt this wasn't d reason she was crying fr.
She just siad she was missing sum1 close. They were her parents. She was missing thm. They left her wwn she was vry small n her Amms. .she also left .. her Chachi brought her up. I kept quiet n listened to her. I wanted her to speak. I wanted her to open up n tell me abt her feelings. She was telling me. But when she started crying I dont know wat happened to me.
I straight away laidd my lips on hers' I don't know wat she moght b thinking. She stood still fr a while. Bt I didn't wanted to leave her.. o don't know y?? Thn after a while she responded n I pulled her close . I didn't wanted to let her go. N after sumtym it started raining she went away.
Wait a sec.
Why did she cried.? N wat was tht dream ahe was talking abt???
End of p.o.v.
Navya was returning yo her room when a a strong muscular arms pulled ger to d corner of d lobby.
Navya was abt to shout when be put his hands on her mouth.
Navya!! M hu..! said Cabir.
Navya : Cabir plzz! N ye sab kya h??
Cabir : Navya tum aise nai jaa sakti. Tum plz ek chance to do hamati relationship ko.
Navya : Cabir maine kaha na .jge tym chahiye.
Cabir : Navya plzz don't go lyk this I won't b able to live..m ji nai paunga.
His eyes moist n red.
Navya listening o this melted n hugged him. Cabir hugged her back.
They both were in each others arms.
Scene changes _ _
Manik : I hav to find out why she cried. .?? Wat was tht dream rhat haunts her? ? N the pain she's going through coz of tht dream? ? I can't see her lyk this! I don't know Y?? I hate myself fr this. Bt I need to heal her coz I won't b able to live with tht pain.
Saying so he left to meet Nandani


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Posted: 9 years ago
Nyc.. update. .
Manan are adorable
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. Manan's pov was beautifully penned.nandini's confused state and manik's determined state to heal nandini were well written. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.
Keep writing
Stay blessed😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update
their pov's were beautifully written
soo manik malhotra has decided to heal her
waiting
update sooon
take care
ty for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update dear...

nandini is so sad..missing her parents and manik wanna know about her pain...he can't see her crying...

manan first kiss...😳😳...wow...

navya and cabir 's convo was emotional...

loved their bond...i hope dono jaldi se saath ho jaye...

manik and nandu both have feelings for each other

but will take time to realise it...

and now manik will heal her...

loved it...

pls continue soon

do pm me...
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Posted: 9 years ago



Thanks for pm.dear

Very nice update. .

Both were thinking about each other. .

Looking forward to seeing what happened next. .

Stay blessed dear.




Thanks.




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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice update yar
Waiting for more

Thanks for the pm..

Keep going and keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update
thanks for pm
continue soon
waiting for next part
take care nd keep smiling

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