MONSTER N ANGEL TALE. part 13 ON PG20. 6/02 - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
nice update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
Superb update
MaNan thinking abt each other...
Cabir trying to get navya bck...
Very well written
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
superb update ..

love it ..

intresting story line.

cont soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: ArSha_ManNan

Superb update
MaNan thinking abt each other...
Cabir trying to get navya bck...
Very well written
Thnkz 4 the pm


Thanks a tonšŸ˜›šŸ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Manansamkhan

superb update ..

love it ..

intresting story line.

cont soon..


thanks a lot dear😊😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
nice update yaar...both manan have feelings for eachothter...but didn't realised yet...waiting for their realization...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome

liked it a lot

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Posted: 9 years ago
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MONSTER N ANGEL TALE.
PART 11.

Manik was standing alone n cool breeze was making him feel calm n he closed his eyes to feel the breeze n stood by a pillar. He kep his eyes closed for sumtym. After sumtym he opened his eyes n was endearing the atmosphere n its beauty only thn he saw a grl sitting all alone . He could make it out who she was. He walked towards her n sat beside her.
She wasn't cry
ing . She was quite laying her head by a pillar.
Manik : Nandani! !
Nandani looking yo him : hmm (ed)
Manik : Wat happened? ? U can share wid me.
Nandani : Ntn. Just feeling low. (I don't know ...should I share??) She thought forget it.
Manik : Listen! ! I U plz tell me Wat's wrong. . I feel as if I've done sumthin wrong to u...he said in a bit worried tone.
Nandani : Manik. . M missing my parents..They left me when I was vry small.. I don't even remember thr face.. n aftr sum yrs my Amms she too left me.. I was so lonely. .me n my bhai..we r brought up by my Chachi. .bt wat haunts me the most is tht dream. .started crying. ..!
Manik was listening to all this vry patiently bt when she started crying , sumthin ached deep inside. . He just couldn't resist n he smacked his lips on hers' n started kissing her.. for a moment she was standing straight.. his luscious lips were crushing on hers' She was trying hard to resist but his smell .. it wasn't easy to resist she was helpless n she finally gave up n reciprocated . Manik noticed this n pulled her closer by her waist . Mabik was sucking her lower lip n Nandani was sucking his upper lip. They both kissed each other n it was so passionate n intense.. after kissing fr a while they were taken aback due to lack of oxygen.
They both stood apart n there was an awkward silence. They didn't know what to say? ? How to react. ??
All that they could do was stare each other. .they bothwere still standing close Manik was holding Nandani by her waist.. n they were lukin each other's eyes. . Completely lost ...unaware of d world around. .n thn all of a sudden ..fireflies surrounded them all ignited... n stars shining bright... n it started raining. ..n this rain broke thr eyelock n they came out of d trance. ..
Manik : Nandani! !!
Nandani didn't said n heard anything just ran away.
Manik stood still 4 a while n was left in deep thoughts all over again. Bt soon his train of thoughts were broken by a voice.
Manik !!! Manik! !!
Tu wahaan kya kar raha h?? Jaldi aa its raining! !!
Manik turned to see who was calling n wbo else it was Mukti. He went to her.
Manik : Hmm (ed)
Mukti : Manik tu ja..aur jake change kar . Wat were u doing. .?? Tu bhig kyu raha tha..no actually soch kya raha tha..?? Akele akele? ?? She interrogated.
Manik : Wo actually. ..he stammered. ..kuch nai bas aise hi..!
Mukti : Ok abhi tu ja..go n change. .n ha sum rest..u luk so worked up.
Manik : Yeah!! I think I should leave.
Mukti : Hmmm jaa.

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M really sorry guys for delay bt , m stuck n cant update regularly
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Edited by Myra_parthholic - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
Nice update
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago


Thanks for pm.dear

This is very beautiful story. ..

Nandni was all thinking about her dream. .

But manik kiss her...

Looking forward to seeing what will happen next. .

Thanks for sharing this story.

Stay blessed dear.



Thanks.





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