MONSTER N ANGEL TALE. part 13 ON PG20. 6/02 - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update
Manik n Nandu's pov
Nyc
CaVya bck together
Thnkz 4 the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely update...
tysm fr the pm...
continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: reet0143

awesome update dear...


nandini is so sad..missing her parents and manik wanna know about her pain...he can't see her crying...

manan first kiss...😳😳...wow...

navya and cabir 's convo was emotional...

loved their bond...i hope dono jaldi se saath ho jaye...

manik and nandu both have feelings for each other

but will take time to realise it...

and now manik will heal her...

loved it...

pls continue soon

do pm me...


Thanks alot dear for such a lovely comment😊😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bhagupur




Thanks for pm.dear

Very nice update. .

Both were thinking about each other. .

Looking forward to seeing what happened next. .

Stay blessed dear.




Thanks.






Thanks alot daer
M glad u liked it😊😊

Edited by Myra_parthholic - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ishu92

Very nice update yar

Waiting for more

Thanks for the pm..

Keep going and keep smiling


Thanks alot dear
Glad u like it😛😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
MONSTER N ANGEL TALE.

PART 13.

Precap : Nandini was sitting alone thinking about her life... she was missing her parents as she wanted to share her afflicts n agony . She felt forlorn. ...! Whn Manik came n sat beside her. She let her heart out to him n shared her worries wid him. Whike telling ahe started to cry... n Manik kisses her. After all this... Nandani straight away went to her room n locked herself in her room . Here. .. Cabir asks Navya to give another chance to thr relationship. .. bt Navya went away saying she needs tym to think. Whike going back to her Cabir pulled her n pleaded to her at which Navya melts n hugs him.
Manik was thinking about Nandani n her pain... he wanted to make her smile. . N then he remembers abt d dream which haunts Nandani. .!!n he decides to know more abt Nandani n her dream. !!!



Today's part...

Manik moved out of his room n walked to Nandani's room when in the lobby he saw Cabir n Navya...!!!

Manik's p.o.v.
Thank God! !! At least iski prblm to khatam hui... I can b in peace frm his side. It feels like a huge burden was thr ... which has just been removed. .. he took a deep sigh...!!
I think mjhe jaldi se Nandani k paas jaana chahiye. ..!!!
End of p.o.v.

I'll ask her if she's fine? ?
N he moved towards Nandani's room.

As he reached her roomhe noticed it was locked frm inside. So he tried to peep in bt it was all in vain.

So he put his tried to listen. . N he heard her sobbing.
He felt so helpless he can't even go inside. .nor he can knock. So he punched d wall in anger.
Thr was a nail near d door ..n his hand hot hurt by tht nail n started bleeding.
Bt he was least bothered abt his hand.
He just wanted to meet her.. he was becoming restless. .. he decided to wait for to open d door. ..
He sat down leaning yo d door of the room.

Scene Changes. ..___
Navya breaks d hug n pushed Cabir wid a jerk.
Navya! Said Cabir. .

Plz Cabir mai e kaha na mjhe tym chahiye. ..!! I need sum tym.. m is bar koi galat decision nai lena chahti. Replied Navya. .

Navya plz...ek chance to de hi akti ho is relationship ko tum ek chance to de hi sakti ho !! He pleaded.

I'll tell u tomorrow. .Navya said.

Ok ! He said helplessly.
Navya looked at him n went away.

Navya moved back to her room n saw Manik was sitting in front of d room.

Manik. ..she exclaimed

Manik stood up n said Haan wo actually. .. he stammereed

Are tumhe to chot lagi h. ..its bleeding. Ye wo chodo vhalo andar... Navya pulled him inside d room.

N as soon as they entered they saw Nandani as sitting in a corner on d floor n crying.Manik n Navya went inside d room. N Manik's eyes were searching Nandani. ..n thr he spotted her sitting in the corner. . Near her bed on floor. She was sitting thr all alone n crying. ..
Nandani haven't noticed both of thm have cum inside d room .

Are Nandani tu wahaan kya kar rahi h?? Ye dekh ??? Navya said...pointing Manik's wound.

Nandani realised they were in... light was dim. .. si Navya didn't noticed she was crying. Bt Manik knew she was crying.

Nandani noticed tht Navya has cum... n sum1 is yhr with her. She quickly wiped her tears.

Navya switched on d lights n Nandani stood up.

Manik ? she whispered under her breath. N thn she saw his wound n got panicked. .

Manik ye kya hua? ?? Wat did u do ??? Kaise hua ye ?? She threw si many questions all at once.

Wo m !!! M.. mm.he stammereed. ..

Are Nandani tjhe kya hua .? Navya asked in a worried tone.

Kya hua ?? Nandani asked baffled.

Teri aankhein soojhi hui kyu h ?? Kya hua ? Navya interrogated.

Manik noticed her eyes were red n moist ...!

Wo m so rahi thi na !! Bas shayad isiliye ! Nandani tried to cover up

Ohh achcha thik h !! Sun m ja rahi hu lich kaam h.. Rishabh ne bulaya tha .. tu olz Manik ko ointment laga dena yar. Navya pleaded.

At first Nandani hesitated btshe agreed.

Navya left d room..

Nandani brought out d first aid box.. n started putting ointment on his hand.

Wid cotton she cleaned d blood ..

Ahh !! Manik cried in pain.

Ahh ! Sorry. ..! Bohot dard ho raha h ?? Nandani asked softly.

Nai.. zyaada nai..Manik replied.

Nandani hmm (ed) n applied ointment.

Nandani! !! Manik said husky voice. . !!

Nandani kept lukin at his wound. She didn't wanted to loose herself again... so she didn't looked at him.

Manik again said in the same husky tone...Nandani!! .
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Okay Frnz !!!
Finally Updated . I now its been long since I posted
But I am just too much occupied with all the things around.
Hope u all will understand..
Well, the Part has been updated , so now leave ur lovely comment below.

Awaiting Comments!!!!!!!
😛
Love...Myra.
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Posted: 9 years ago

THANKS😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shaan...

Amazing update...

Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Take care...
Stay blessed...


Thanks a ton 😛😛😛
Glad u liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nyc update..
I really loved it..
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly

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